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With the rapid development of the society, the level of people’s life is improving, and became better and better, more convineint than before. So, maybe some one assume that people now are more happy or satified with their lives than people in the past. As far as I concerned, However, it is not neccesary as that, in some extent, I agree with the statement that morden people are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people in the past. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. I agree with this opinion because of the following reasons.

Firstly, nowadays people live a better life, such as they have well-being material life, don’t need to pay more attention to their food and clothing paroblem as the past. Of course, they also have many kinds of recreation facilities and many ways to relax. However, the most important problem is although they can relax by many ways, we found people don’t satisfy in spiritual aspect by communicating with some people about mornden life. Most people reflecte they have no more time and energies to enjoy these entertainments.

Secondly, at present, people has strong stress in this rapid life, espcially youth in china. Due to the high price of house in china, most of them can’t afford the expensive house so that they have to do over-time work for living better life, as a result, most of them will be house slave. Current, a typical group “surplus male surplus female” cause a society the attention with each wider and wider respect, which is another important problem in china. Why? Perhaps since the girl want to get marry with a man who has a house in order to have a steady life, so man must work hardly in order to own a house, and the girl also have to work hardly to have a better life in the future. As children, they have to take part in many kinds of courses and programs in order to keep brest with their peers in this firce market, so they also have more time to play. The rest is the old, who do some horsework for their children to release their burden, in a sence, maybe they can have more time to enjoy, but since some reasons such as age and knowledge, some of them don’t want to receive these new recreation facilities. Therefore, they have no more time and energy to relax.

Moreover, if you always read literatures, you will find that many articles express the pessimistic emotion nowadays, people want to live a leisure and positive life, which can indicate that people are unhappy for their life. as a result, people can’t keep a peaceful mind to live,let alone to creat some new works in morden life.

To sum up, from these aspects stated as above, in my point of view, compared with the past, people not necessarily have a more happy life with these many kinds of ways to recreation .


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