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发表于 2012-3-8 18:18:42 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

3月24日考试，第一次开始写独立写作，没限时，大概用了一个多小时吧，求拍砖~~~

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topic：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn fromtheir own mistakes.

Currently, there is a hot debate regardingto the issue of children’s education on dealing with a mistake. Some people,obviously, deem that how to avoid mistakes and errors is the major concern intheir children’s cultivation as which would always cause some negative influenceon the way of their children’s growth. From my perspective, considerabledisadvantages that making mistakes causes are, they cannot compete with thebenefits that learning from the mistakes brings about, if experience and meritsin the learning process are taken into deliberation.

To begin with, there is no doubts that evenadults but children would do something wrong and make mistakes inevitably. Thefirst crucial imprtant is the attitudes towards these mistakes but not just criticizeand blame their children for errors. There is a telling example of myself on mystudy of chemistry. It is known that chemistry is an abstract and comprehensivesubject and not easy to learn it well if you are not sweat blood. Although Ihave tried my best and burnt the mid-night oil till one o’ clock in themorning, I still failed in my first exam. I felt so frustrated and quite scaredthat my mother would criticize on my failure; conversely, she just helped mefor analyzing the mistakes I made in the text and illustrating the basicprinciple of this subject. She gave me a book named “the chemistry world” as agift; it was just like the bright sunshine lightened my darkness. Since then, Irenewed my interest and motivation in the chemistry study. Eventually, I becamea top student in this subject. It is merely my personal experience, and theseexamples are defying enumeration.

What’s more, whatever the argument for andagainst, it is obviously that only through the process of learning frommistakes and overcoming other similar ones can an individual could succeed, notto mention a child. Opposed to this statement are those parents who neglect thetremendous values concealing in the mistakes, including critical thinking andability for analysis. A recent survey, with the sample of two thousandsstudents at the age of eight to ten in Beijing, conducted by Research Centre ofYouth Education could support this point soundly. The result shows the betterthe children dealing with their mistakes, the more capability of issues analysisand resolution they could acquired. Actually, the result is not astonishing ifwe could realize the true merit mistakes bring about. Concealing in theseboring mistakes are the profound truth and essential abilities for children’sgrowth, if they could bravely confronted to these mistakes and realized thereal causes and the way of overcoming the errors, of course, based on theinstruction of their parents.

In addition, image that, if parents do notallow their children to make a mistake, what terrible consequences would bringabout? The certain and immediate one is that they would commit another major orminor one to cover this mistake merely because of their worried about the parents’reflection to this non-deliberate error. The sequences perhaps the habit oflying, or even worse, escape from the real daily life, such as turning to alcoholand drugs. None of these results is what parents expect but indeed would happenif they still hold the opinion on prohibition of their children’s mistakes.

To sum up, from the points discussed above,it is not big troubles if children make mistakes but the wrong attitudes forthese mistakes. In the final analysis, only when parents learn how to helptheir children dealing with the mistakes, can the youth generation could have apromising future.

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