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Nowadaysthe way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
Inwhat way has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Hasthis become a positive or negative development?

Thereis no doubt that our communicative lives have been throughly altered, thanks tothe on-going development of morden technology. The way we find and keep intouch with relatives, friends, and even lovers is totally different from thatof our ancestors. We can easily see advantages from these changes, but whatmust also be emphasized are the hiden drawbacks.

Thereare obviously benefits, which could be summarized into two words — convenienceand multiple-choices. Firstly, technology makes contacting faster and easier, offeringus instantaneous information and methods to interact with anyone on the earth.For an instance, the days of writing love letters and waiting for the answeranxiously are gone forever as profiles of thousands of bachelors can be foundonline and “lightning marriage” is not rare at all. Furthermore, in front of usare not only phone-calls and e-mails, but we can also choose to login in the MSNor twitter, to open the community websites, to sign up an online group, or tofind out varieties of other means to spell out our mind and receive the answersfrom anywhere. In conclusion, our world is indeedly smaller and running faster now.

Nevertheless,potential tradeoffs are not negligible. Addmitedly friends and lovers now cantalk through thousands of miles, but this also gives them easier excuses of notbeing aside. No matter how familiar the voice we hear or the words we see, westill need our fellows or soul mates besides us when we are desparately lonelyand helpless. But inevitably nowadays this kind of acompanies are less as webecome busier and lazier. What’s more, we have more chances to find friends andlovers now, but at the same time we see less preciousness or seriousness in friendshipand love as a result. People are not as willing to sacrifice for a relationshipas they can turn to another soon if they mess it up. This might also partlycontribute to the high divorse rate around the world.

Seeingthese positive and negative factors mentioned above, we can conclude that whilewe enjoy the faster and colorful interpersonal life, we shall still always be remindedof the internal and eternal principles of relationships, so as not to bemislead into the wrong way.
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