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[求助] 一战过后,对于成绩的迷惑!真心希望大神们给予指点,感激不尽! [复制链接]

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发表于 2012-6-29 21:05:14 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
如题,前几天一战了,结果有点意外,也很不满意!怎么说,辛辛苦苦准备3个多月,虽然中间有课也有考试,但是其余时间全部放在英语上,尤其是最后一个月,每天平均8~9小时在准备,结果只有可怜的87,好了,言归正传。
这次考试为何如此迷惑,也为何如此不满意。觉着自己努力没有得到回报是一方面,另一方面是考前看了并且认真做过预测,考试那天正好中了。结果口语和作文只有18和22,这是另我最意外的。对于口语,预测不但中了,并且考试时还偷听到了1~2题目(由于本人答的比较晚),甚至稿子都大致写好了,利用空余时间练了两遍;对于3~5题,由于看过预测,觉着大意应该也没啥问题;第6题倒是确实没大答好,大概答了一个要点。个人觉得口语发音虽然不是非常标准的那种,但是理解我觉着也不成问题啊。
对于作文(总分22,两个FAIR),这是我最为迷惑的地方,可能是我把评分标准想的简单了,但是综合作文要点我基本都听到了(之前也看过机经),对于独立作文,那篇我之前有好好写过修改过,考试时直接都不用思考就按之前写的打上去了(最后510多字),虽然语言质量不如之前写的,但是字数要更多点,我想怎么也能4分啊,结果才是FAIR。
对于这两点迷惑,想请教一下大神们,真的感激不尽。因为感觉挺绝望的,因为预测都中了才考成这样,不知道怎么才能继续提高啊!(另附,之前写的独立作文,考试时语言质量差些,但是字数要多些,并且多写了一段,结构上时戴云教主的2+1)
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should encourage their children to do their schoolwork independently rather than help children to do their schoolwork. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

    Even today, I can still remember the fantastic and meaningful days when my father helped me to do my schoolwork. In that period of time, I learned not only the knowledge and the thinking methods taught by my father but also the wonderful personalities from him. Thus, when it comes to the controversy over whether parents should encourage their children to do their schoolwork independently or help them with it, I definitely will choose the latter.
Undeniably, children, to be frank, don't have the ability to solve various kinds of questions in their schoolwork for both the lack of knowledge and thinking methods limitation, so it is really requisite for parents to help their children to deal with the schoolwork. During the process, parents can complement the knowledge which children lack so that children will do well in the exams. What’s more, they can also teach them the way of thinking such as how to analyze a math problem or how to design a chemical experiment, which is not only useful for the simple problems in the homework, but also valuable for coping with various kinds of difficulties in the children’s life. Such as, my father always told me that if I wanted to solve a problem, I should analyze that logically. Owing to this, now no matter what difficulties I encounter, I will think about carefully and set a proper and logical schedule then insist on that step by step. It really means a lot to me.
On the other hand, helping children with the schoolwork everyday is also able to give parents a superb opportunity to communicate with their children, by which they can influence them and help them form good personalities. For example, in my childhood, my father always helped me to cope with the schoolwork. It might the most wonderful experience I have ever had since during the process we talked a lot ranging from the school and work affairs to our ideals. Once he told me that there was one time he was writing a program, he spent days and nights in the laboratory including the weekends until he finished it. From that I started to realize that he was so diligent and was considerably influenced by this. I became to study harder from then on and have achieved a lot of success thanks to the diligence my father taught me.
    Admittedly, encouraging the children to do the schoolwork alone does have one or two advantages like this will save parents a lot of time and make children more independent, nevertheless, they can't compete with the positive points brought by helping children for it means a lot for the children’s growth, both in the improvement of the knowledge and the formation of the good personalities.
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发表于 2012-7-6 22:29:40 |只看该作者
俺觉得楼主口语能中预测真的很棒啊!应该分数很高的呀

口语会不会是考试文章内容有所改变,楼主大意了?或者题目要求有点变化,导致答案没有切中要害?

俺觉得有时候中预测一下子心花怒放,注意力很容易就不集中了,结果只要题目稍有变化就会问题了~囧

作文的话,俺个人觉得结构清晰非常重要~如果结构不清晰,字数再多评分人员也是看得云里雾里的。。

但愿俺能给楼主提供一点帮助~祝楼主取得一个好成绩!

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