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发表于 2012-9-6 15:56:16 |显示全部楼层
以后作文就贴这儿啦~麻烦帮批改的同学费心,切记不要手下留情,一定要持有不把作文改到鲜血直流不罢休的冷酷~小女纸再次感谢批改作文的同学~Thx~

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发表于 2012-9-6 20:22:19 |显示全部楼层
我的第一篇独立作文练习
0906作文:Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement:
The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.


  Whether you live with your grandparents or not, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculous advices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch up with the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, their grandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to follow strictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I do not regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all, after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, the competition has become intense
and social criterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparents saying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it under the circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you must fail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you are solely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what they can to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those who help themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves by mistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Instead you should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order to pull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you only misleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when you spend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at you if you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told you thousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We must admit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn woman might be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereas the criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty is evaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence is gold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generation can’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they ever did in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents love us, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the present world anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has never been so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so you better think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
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发表于 2012-9-6 20:27:56 |显示全部楼层
我的第一篇独立作文练习
0906作文:Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement:
The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.


  Whether you live with your grandparents or not, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculous advices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch up with the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, their grandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to follow strictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I do not regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all, after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, the competition has become intense
and social criterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparents saying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it under the circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you must fail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you are solely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what they can to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those who help themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves by mistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Instead you should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order to pull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you only misleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when you spend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at you if you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told you thousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We must admit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn woman might be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereas the criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty is evaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence is gold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generation can’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they ever did in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents love us, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the present world anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has never been so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so you better think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
(444 words)

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发表于 2012-9-6 20:29:08 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-9-6 20:29:55 |显示全部楼层
我的第一篇独立作文练习
0906作文:Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement:
The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.


  Whether you live with your grandparents or not, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculous advices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch up with the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, their grandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to follow strictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I do not regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all, after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, the competition has become intense
and social criterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparents saying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it under the circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you must fail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you are solely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what they can to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those who help themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves by mistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Instead you should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order to pull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you only misleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when you spend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at you if you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told you thousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We must admit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn woman might be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereas the criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty is evaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence is gold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generation can’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they ever did in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents love us, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the present world anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has never been so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so you better think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
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发表于 2012-9-6 20:32:12 |显示全部楼层

SpringLu备考贴


以后作文就贴这儿啦~麻烦帮批改的同学费心,切记不要手下留情,一定要持有不把作文改到血流成河不罢休的冷酷~小女纸再次感谢批改作文的同学~Thx~

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发表于 2012-9-6 20:33:24 |显示全部楼层
我的第一篇独立作文练习
0906作文:Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement:
The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.


  Whether you live with your grandparents or not, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculous advices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch up with the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, their grandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to follow strictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I do not regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all, after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, the competition has become intense
and social criterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparents saying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it under the circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you must fail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you are solely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what they can to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those who help themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves by mistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Instead you should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order to pull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you only misleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when you spend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at you if you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told you thousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We must admit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn woman might be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereas the criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty is evaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence is gold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generation can’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they ever did in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents love us, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the present world anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has never been so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so you better think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
(444 words)

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发表于 2012-9-6 20:40:34 |显示全部楼层
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  Whether you live with your grandparents or not, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculous advices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch up with the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, their grandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to follow strictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I do not regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all, after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, the competition has become intense
and social criterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparents saying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it under the circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you must fail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you are solely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what they can to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those who help themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves by mistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Instead you should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order to pull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you only misleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when you spend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at you if you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told you thousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We must admit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn woman might be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereas the criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty is evaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence is gold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generation can’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they ever did in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents love us, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the present world anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has never been so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so you better think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
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发表于 2012-9-6 20:50:27 |显示全部楼层
  我的第一篇独立作文练习
0906作文:Doyou agree or disagreewith the following statement
The advices from our grandparents have no usefor their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50years.



  Whether you live with your grandparents ornot, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculousadvices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch upwith the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, theirgrandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to followstrictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I donot regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all,after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, thecompetition has become intense
and socialcriterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparentssaying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it underthe circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you mustfail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you aresolely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what theycan to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those whohelp themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves bymistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Insteadyou should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order topull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you onlymisleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when youspend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at youif you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told youthousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We mustadmit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn womanmight be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereasthe criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty isevaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence isgold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generationcan’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they everdid in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents loveus, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the presentworld anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has neverbeen so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so youbetter think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
(444 words)

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发表于 2012-9-6 20:53:39 |显示全部楼层
  我的第一篇独立作文练习
0906作文:Doyou agree or disagreewith the following statement
The advices from our grandparents have no usefor their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50years.



  Whether you live with your grandparents ornot, you may have the same experience of being surrounded by tons of ridiculousadvices, which seem quite reasonable in their words but just can’t catch upwith the world. Some people may hold an opposite view from it, for them, theirgrandparents’ words is their golden rule which they will never fail to followstrictly, they call it the precious experience from the elderly. However, I donot regard their advices as treasures. And in fact they aren’t valuable at all,after all the whole society has gone through significant transition, thecompetition has become intense
and socialcriterion varies enormously.
  You may have heard of your grandparentssaying that wait here until the problem solved itself. Have you tried it underthe circumstance of such a competitive world? Don’t do it, because you mustfail. Waiting means nothing but wasting time. And time is killing, for you aresolely waiting while others are extra-occupied with implementing all what theycan to solve their obstacles. There is no doubt that god will help those whohelp themselves and abandon those who unconsciously abandon themselves bymistakenly allowing the old principles to control their young brain. Insteadyou should figure out and then try out whatever methods you can in order topull yourself out of despair. What your grandparents have told you onlymisleads you.
  What will your grandparents say when youspend a little bit longer time in front of a mirror? And will they get at youif you speak a little bit more in front of people? I know they have told youthousands of times that beauty is not skinned and silence is gold. We mustadmit that at their time, exterior beauty isn’t as vital and a taciturn womanmight be considered a real lady thus enjoys high evaluation from the crowd. Whereasthe criterion of the society has transferred incogitablely, and now beauty isevaluated in more than one way while young people believe that if silence isgold then intercourse is diamond. The advices from our grandparents’ generationcan’t live up to their grandchildren’s expectation, and I guess if they everdid in such a high speed of social transition during the past 50 years.
  There is no doubt that our grandparents loveus, but also there is no doubt that their suggestions don’t
fit in the presentworld anymore. To put it short, we live in a world where competition has neverbeen so cruel and where the turn of social criterion can’t be acuter, so youbetter think twice before you accept someone’s idea especially the elderly’s.
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发表于 2012-9-6 20:57:44 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 SpringLu 于 2012-9-6 21:06 编辑

怎么就是看不见自己发的作文呢,都恢复好几回了,急死了,呜呜呜呜呜

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发表于 2012-9-6 21:15:44 |显示全部楼层
只能用绝招了,独立作文贴我人人上了,不怕丢人只求提高当日志发了,批我作文的同学麻烦点这个链接来看文章,辛苦了,我叫陆祎,在人人上搜我,不用加好友就可以看我贴着那篇作文的日志

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