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本帖最后由 runalexrun 于 2012-11-28 22:32 编辑

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Different from old days, children now are living in a more confortable time. Parents prepare everything for them, such as tuition of college, a rented apartment off-campus and even the opportunity led to a real job. By hoping that their children could be ready for adult life earlier, they almost make any effort as possible. However, they may cross the line. Instead, asking their kids to do a part-time job would be a better choice.

A part-time job helps children be able to schedule their time efficiently. When it comes to adult life, efficiency and planning are first two aspects coming to our minds. Children should get used to do two or more things at the same period, since they may encounter the same situation in the future. Through making them busy, child can also overcome their laziness.

Moreover, this kind of job offers the unique experience to the children who have not get any chance to learn what their parents go through everyday. The same experience could contribute to more communication between them. In addition, some children may pursue a career relative to what they have done; as a result, this journey could be showed on their resume latter and impress the employer. It goes without saying that children in this case will be more likely to get hired.

Of course, having a part-time job may cause some harm effects on their future life. For example, since they would get distracted somehow, their grades may decrease. Negative school performance may ruin their confidence. Yet, look at the bright side, if they are capable of handling the intricate situation, their decisions and behaviors could become more mature. Consequently, they are ready for adult life for real.

To sum up, after prudently balancing the positive and negative influences of part-time job on children's future life, I strongly agree with the point that one way to help children be fully prepared for their future is to find a part-time job.
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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-11-28 22:25
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发表于 2012-11-28 23:09:39 |显示全部楼层
10版word不行,改为03版就欧了

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