【我心飞翔】7月组argu作业帖

compeUID: 3404227

作文题目：argument 174

A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be addressed in order to decide whether the conclusion and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to the questions would help to evaluate the conclusion.

要求：
1. 本次为7月组成员第二次作文assignment，不限时，字数要求：min 400 words；
2. 写作时可以上网，写作过程中可以使用google 或 wikipedia 等搜索写作素材；
3. 写完后请用word文档保存，将自己的名字写在文档题目中。在本贴中回复，发附件上传；
4. 请提交之前更改好拼写错误和语法错误，用红字在后面标出
5. 不检查盲目提交者第一次警告处理，第二次踢出小组
6. 不按时提交者第一次警告处理，第二次踢出小组

参加本次作文成员：7月组全体6人众
第一次argument不分组互改，我会找其他同学帮大家改

Submission Deadline: 2013,May,24 22:00

compeUID: 3404227

5月27日 argument作业

167

The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.

During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many accidents is fatigue caused by sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta, we recommend shortening each of our three work shifts by one hour. If we do this, our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep.

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

时间要求 ≤ 2h.

小薇暂时请假，Batigoal参加AW作业，欢迎

分组互改
Vanny Batigoal
shimeng rakusin
kekele 蓝雪舞

sub deadline 2013,5,27 23:00 (以后argument都当天交）
revise deadline 2013,5,28 22:00

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5月30日 argu作业

117

The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food distribution company with food storage warehouses in several cities.

Recently, we signed a contract with the Fly-Away Pest Control Company to provide pest control services at our warehouse in Palm City, but last month we discovered that over $20,000 worth of food there had been destroyed by pest damage. Meanwhile, the Buzzoff Pest Control Company, which we have used for many years in Palm City, continued to service our warehouse in Wintervale, and last month only $10,000 worth of the food stored there had been destroyed by pest damage. Even though the price charged by Fly-Away is considerably lower, our best means of saving money is to return to Buzzoff for all our pest control services.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

小薇继续请假，泠泠加入

时限≤2h

互改分组

shimeng→kekele→泠泠→shimeng
Bati 蓝雪舞
Rakusin Vannyzhu

sub deadline 2013,5,30 22:00
revise deadline 2013,5,31 22:00

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天薇凉UID: 3403940

写完了。写了1个小时。不会写开头，先把三个主体段落和结尾写了，最后憋了一个开头出来。
辛苦了，谢谢~
A174-天薇凉.doc (30 KB, 下载次数: 10)

2013-5-24 15:35:06 上传

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VannyzhuUID: 3012410

愁死人了写这么久。
谢谢要帮我修改的人，you are my angel！

kekele007UID: 3363572

辛苦修改人了

Argu 174.docx (18.71 KB, 下载次数: 3)

2013-5-24 17:55:27 上传

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rakusinUID: 3418242

帮忙修改的筒子辛苦了，请狠拍！！

蓝雪舞UID: 3395566

憋了好久，凑了好久，总算出来了。。。
花的时间比第一次写Issue短很多，还是有进步的。。。

shimeng0316UID: 3127261

今天脑袋里都是浆糊~

pielangUID: 3284254

rakusin 兄，你的文章改好了。比较严重的问题就是没有按照题目要求写。具体写法我在后面做了注释。可以参考下哈。加油

rakusinUID: 3418242

pielang 发表于 2013-5-25 19:12
rakusin 兄，你的文章改好了。比较严重的问题就是没有按照题目要求写。具体写法我在后面做了注释。可以参考 ...

辛苦啦，谢谢

skenanUID: 3398808

shimeng0316 发表于 2013-5-24 22:34
今天脑袋里都是浆糊~

shimeng 你的作文..修改不当之处，还请谅解.

5.23Argument174 shimeng0316 (revised by skenan).doc (33 KB, 下载次数: 10)

2013-5-25 23:24:10 上传

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foamflyUID: 3337580

Vannyzhu 发表于 2013-5-24 15:58
愁死人了写这么久。
谢谢要帮我修改的人，you are my angel！

唔 WPS文件是？ 不知道方便转DOC不 因为刚试图用word打开貌似编码不是很对。。。

VannyzhuUID: 3012410

foamfly 发表于 2013-5-25 23:33
唔 WPS文件是？ 不知道方便转DOC不 因为刚试图用word打开貌似编码不是很对。。。

sorry~这下应该行了~
谢谢！

Batigoal0611UID: 3300324

我可以参加么？一定好好改。。。

shimeng0316UID: 3127261

skenan 发表于 2013-5-25 23:24
shimeng 你的作文..修改不当之处，还请谅解.

谢谢skenan提出的中肯建议~

Fighting！