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Argument 78

The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food distribution company with food storage warehouses in several cities.
"Recently, we signed a contract with the Fly-Away Pest Control Company to provide pest control services at our fast-food warehouse in Palm City, but last month we discovered that over $20,000 worth of food there had been destroyed by pest damage. Meanwhile, the Buzzoff Pest Control Company, which we have used for many years, continued to service our warehouse in Wintervale, and last month only $10,000 worth of the food stored there had been destroyed by pest damage. Even though the price charged by Fly-Away is considerably lower, our best means of saving money is to return to Buzzoff for all our pest control services."

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

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deadline 7.7 24:00

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本帖最后由 HANgre 于 2013-7-7 13:42 编辑

交作业咯！！我个人是不喜欢写长文的，因为知道自己在30min内打不出那么多bits, 但这篇文章却飙到了550... 鸡肋了！
权当练习写 evidence写作要求了....

有点心慌，平时写再好再多，考试飙不出准确度，照样2.5... 天知道自己第一遍写的单词拼错率是多少！

anyway, 蜥蜴兄，欢迎猛批！我个人还是比较喜欢自己这次写完的成品的。

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