lhm77499作业贴（10.20）

lhm77499UID: 3420601

9.24题目
Task 1 As for students, how to get better grades and improve efficiency in the class? Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should state honest opinions even though they are different from other people's opinions.
Task 3-6 TPO10

mcl2012UID: 3401280

lhm77499 发表于 2013-9-23 08:33
9.23题目
Task 1 Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was me ...

不好意思，这么晚才评。。。

1、内容很细，个别地方貌似有些问题，three months ago好像听LZ说month
2、内容没问题，注意purchase的发音
3、不错
4、开头部分应该说成outsider artist而不是art，其他很好
5、注意although的发音，其他good
6、LZ注意unity的发音，某些词感觉LZ咬的还是有点重，其他不错

加油

lhm77499UID: 3420601

mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-24 23:06
不好意思，这么晚才评。。。

1、内容很细，个别地方貌似有些问题，three months ago好像听LZ说month

谢谢！加油。

dongfangbaobeiUID: 3413785

1，注意habit发音
2，内容很好，注意honest的发音
3，非常好，讲的很有自信，语音语速都很好
4，应该是he吧，he action
5,注意program发音
6，注意exprience发音，内容如果可以做到TAST3那样就更好了，加油！

lhm77499UID: 3420601

9.25题目
Task 1 Describe a gift you would like give to someone. Include specific reasons or details in your explanation.
Task 2 Some students prefer to go to universities or colleges in their own cities or towns. Others prefer to go to universities or colleges in new cities or towns. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
Task 3-6 TPO9

blicanUID: 3310855

task1:lz讲得真好。
task2:00:21-00:22之间那个词没听出来。 这段讲得没有task1，主要后来也又讲了一个in a new environment.....
总结一下task1,2 lz的语音语调非常棒，task1 内容也没好，task2的内容就有点偏差。但是都有一个问题，超时了。lz下次要注意。  我看robin大神的那个口语贴说，讲到快40s时，讲完了怎么办，他说宁愿不讲了，也不要新讲一个观点，因为这样展开不了。
task3：非常好
task4：好
task5：有个逻辑错误，lz是这么说的：however，her budget has been tight。。。这里应该是不应该是however而应该是although
task6：特别好，特别是最后一句总结。太棒了。注意一下00:18时的plants

lz的口语，真的很棒，很流利~
ps：我的发音 不准，所以我不能向前面几楼一样指出lz的发音问题，还望见谅。但是希望lz在听我的答题时，发现我的错误发音，务必告诉我 谢谢~~~~

lhm77499UID: 3420601

9.26题目
Task 1 Describe a project or assignment which is important to you. Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 16-year-old kids are not mature enough to drive. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO8

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blican 发表于 2013-9-26 17:18
task1:lz讲得真好。
task2:00:21-00:22之间那个词没听出来。 这段讲得没有task1，主要后来也又讲了一个in  ...

谢谢！真的很认真，感动ing。。。

lhm77499UID: 3420601

9.28题目           
Task 1 Describe your favorite area in your city. Explain why you like that area. Include specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you prefer to be a leading or supporting member in a group project?
Task 3-6 TPO6

DjocovicUID: 3414314

9.27 怎么分组我跟楼主分在一起了？ 找了半天没看到楼主的作业啊!

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9.27题目
Task 1 Describe a special friend in your childhood，why he or she is special to you? Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them？
Task 3-6 TPO7

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Djocovic 发表于 2013-9-28 19:46
9.27 怎么分组我跟楼主分在一起了？ 找了半天没看到楼主的作业啊!

sorry，忘记传了。。。
哈哈，we looks the same！but no,明显你的头像高富帅啊。

DjocovicUID: 3414314

Task I
1.        Outgoing  making friends 我觉得还是太抽象，你可以举例：打球发现一个很厉害的人，但是不敢去聊天，jack鼓励我上前去聊天，他先start a topic then I could join the conversation, and finally we three get to be quite good friends
2.        Pronunciation
stranger hesitate

Task II
1.        感觉观点出来之后，一直都没有找到supporting sentence。我建议先出来再补充细节
Though the ancient building preserve, to a great extent, the traditional culture, the fast development of modern cities, there isn’t enough space to sustain the requirements. It cannot be denied that the old buildings help us to remember the past ……, but the high skyscrapers have larger capacity to support the large population and meet the requirement……

Task III
1.        强烈建议不要出现类似conversation/ dialog 这样会破坏整体性

Task IV
1.        Pronunciation
punish
2.        On the other hand 用的不恰当。 是不是考虑from them on 表示一个延续的时间感觉？
Task V
1.        She
2.        Option 2听了一下 have your computer repaired at the beginning of this week instead 我理解的是：催促。不知道你觉得呢？

Task VI
1.        Two product with identical price
2.        Conclusion: those features, at current time, become important factors for consumers to consider when they decide to buy a car.

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Djocovic 发表于 2013-9-28 21:41
Task I
1.        Outgoing  making friends 我觉得还是太抽象，你可以举例：打球发现一个很厉害的人，但 ...

my response to your comment on t5
I think that the woman meant that the shop on campus could fix the problem at a higher speed so even if she could not contact the shop before the end of the vacation, it is still possible that her lap top could go back to her before the end of the next week and thus she still has a lot of time finishing her paper.

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9.29题目       Task 1 Describe a good learning habit you have that is different from other students. Explain why this habit helped you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Parents should get involved when their children are choosing their universities.
Task 3-6 TPO5