lhm77499作业贴（10.20）

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Bruceee 发表于 2013-8-25 15:40
T1 有一个我觉得有个小问题，貌似应该用过去式哦。除了最开始用了一个had party，之后都用的现在式。

T2 ...

谢谢！
t1的确把时态弄错了，nice tip!

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8.26
Task 1 Your friend wants to build up a restaurant. Please give some suggestions or recommendations. Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.


Task 2 Do you prefer to buy an electronic product as soon as it becomes available in the market or do you prefer to wait and buy it until it has been in the market for a while?

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-8-25 12:40
8.25
Task 1 Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memo ...

8.25
记得之前我们互评过，语音语调很好。
Task 1
同样也是时态问题，一律应该是一般过去式。所以There are intellectual talks应该为There were
It is really enlightening应该为It was
语速要是再快一点就好啦
Task 2
in addition to add me more money to xx，这个词是啥？
I have xx experience，这个地方也没太听懂。(记得回复我，好让我好好学习一下)
这道题的法律词汇好像蛮专业的，听上去很舒服。
个人觉得你的最后一句话很重要，可以再扩展一些。

我觉得你用词很好哎，要向你学习。

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KickBessie 发表于 2013-8-26 22:54
8.25
记得之前我们互评过，语音语调很好。
Task 1

谢谢！
in addition to earning me more money to spare.
I have precious experience.
你的用词也不赖。加油！

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8.27
Task 1 If you are a volunteer in a hosptial, what kind of work would you choose： 1. take care of patient's family 2. talk to patient 3. read to patient.


Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Children should have their own cellphones. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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task1 第1,2个观点之间好像少了一个关联词来连接， 总得来说很赞，很流畅，基本没什么语法错误~
task2 once后面没太听清，其他都很好~ 感觉LZ对各种短语句式都用得很熟练

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叫舟哥就好了 发表于 2013-8-27 19:30
task1 第1,2个观点之间好像少了一个关联词来连接， 总得来说很赞，很流畅，基本没什么语法错误~
task2 onc ...

task1 只有一个观点，focus on the design。
task2 没有用once。。。

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-8-27 20:00
task1 只有一个观点，focus on the design。
task2 没有用once。。。

之后好像有说knowledge of market之类的

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叫舟哥就好了 发表于 2013-8-27 21:01
之后好像有说knowledge of market之类的

？是说design所对应的风格和它的对应market。。。

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8.28
Task 1 The University decides to set a cooking class for students to let them have better understanding of the nutrients and health. Do you think it is a reasonable decision or not?


Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Spending time with family is more important than working.

ArchiChuangUID: 3459191

lhm77499 发表于 2013-8-27 20:00
task1 只有一个观点，focus on the design。
task2 没有用once。。。

lz是great released嘛？这个听不清楚。
task2 for the most XXX things,中间的词不认识。麻烦楼主写出来吧，剩下都还挺好的。

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ArchiChuang 发表于 2013-8-28 14:49
lz是great released嘛？这个听不清楚。
task2 for the most XXX things,中间的词不认识。麻烦楼主写出来 ...

it is of great release。。。第二个是for the most rudimentary things.

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8.29
Task 1 Describe the disadvantages of shopping online. Include reasons and examples to support your response.


Task 2 Some people play games for enjoyment, others play games for winning. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-8-28 13:11
8.28
Task 1 The University decides to set a cooking class for students to let them have better unde ...

task1
    pick(picked) up some knowledge
    cooking class could help students make () desicions 这个词没听出来诶
task2
    sendi school 是神马？surpass books是神马？ 感觉用词好像很专业，楼主指教一下~~

    总得来说还是很好~学习了

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叫舟哥就好了 发表于 2013-8-29 09:44
task1
    pick(picked) up some knowledge
    cooking class could help students make () desicion ...

make wise decisions, choose decent schools.