lhm77499作业贴（10.20）

dongfangbaobeiUID: 3413785

TAST1,delivery 改成send 会更好，后面没有听懂
TAST2，内容很好，语音语速挺适中，可能后面有点儿急有点卡
加油！

未央1992UID: 3361794

8.19
task1
i want to be a lawyer 后面和intership那两个词那里几乎听不清。reputation发音失真了
task2
其实很好了，morning person 用得好

lhm77499UID: 3420601

dongfangbaobei 发表于 2013-8-21 13:09
TAST1,delivery 改成send 会更好，后面没有听懂
TAST2，内容很好，语音语速挺适中，可能后面有点儿急有点卡 ...

没找到你的作业，你的作业贴里是空的。。。

lhm77499UID: 3420601

未央1992 发表于 2013-8-21 19:10
8.19
task1
i want to be a lawyer 后面和intership那两个词那里几乎听不清。reputation发音失真了

嗯，吐词清楚。下次我注意一下。
谢谢！

lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.21
Task 1 Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you.

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Task 2 Some people prefer to live in places where climate doesn't change very much. While others prefer to live in places where climate changes with seasons. Which one do you prefer? Include reasons and details in your explanation.
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dongfangbaobeiUID: 3413785

lhm77499 发表于 2013-8-21 21:16
没找到你的作业，你的作业贴里是空的。。。

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lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.22
Task 1 Your university just got an investment. What do you think your university should use the money to do? To improve the library, gym or lab?

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Task 2 Some students prefer to sit in the front of the classroom. Others prefer to sit in the back of the classroom. Which way do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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geminilee0608UID: 3436386

8.21
T1， process发音有点问题，statistical发音貌似也不太准确
T2，activity的发音
LZ内容都没有大问题，但是整个45s期间，感觉语调都很平，T2中间一段比较明显，建议可以增加一些语调的变化，特别是句末的地方

纾子UID: 3455587

8.22
听前面评价说萌音我还以为是萌妹子呢←←
发音还不错，语调有点夸张【不排除我自己语调很平的原因】气音比较多，建议稍微平一点，然后在一些重点的地方夸大一点发音，否则可能导致整体很夸张但是没有说话的起伏感想【Guess what！】这种突出来的感觉
、
T1
没什么大问题←、←
要抠的话只能说改下时态吧
【the book was borrowed...】--->【the book had been borrowed...】

T2
【at the front of】-->【in the front of】
建议加一点【why can u concerntrate on the prof when u sit in the front of the classroom】[用英语主要是突然忘记why后面的语序QAQ，如果错了请务必告诉我]
毕竟讲的是sit in the front 而不是the disadvantage of sitting in the back
所以加一点什么the prof may focus on me 或者 on contrary， i no longer need to worry about...

lhm77499UID: 3420601

geminilee0608 发表于 2013-8-22 21:35
8.21
T1， process发音有点问题，statistical发音貌似也不太准确
T2，activity的发音

activity，process和statistical我又听了一遍觉得舌头大了。。。囧。。。感觉没睡醒的在说话
语调上我担心一激动就忘了想说什么。。。怎么破？

lhm77499UID: 3420601

纾子 发表于 2013-8-23 10:42
8.22
听前面评价说萌音我还以为是萌妹子呢←←
发音还不错，语调有点夸张【不排除我自己语调很平的原因】 ...

。。。搭讪妹子未遂。哈哈:lol
patpat
语调上前面被评价说flaccid所以立马活力起！
很激动没说出话来的感觉。。。囧
t1用过去完成时同意，因为书被借完发生在我去借书前。
t2 应该改为in the front of。我是想说坐在前面可以不被向坐在后面那样被影响。so，再次同意，应该强调一下主题。
非常感谢点评！

lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.23
Task 1 What advice would you like to give a friend who got a new job? Explain why this suggestion is important. Include reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2 Do you make plans for your free time or you do things spontaneously in your free time? Explain why.
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lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.24
Task 1 Describe an activity you enjoy doing in your school recently. Why do you enjoy it? Include specific reasons and details to support your response.

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Task 2 Do you prefer to travel by car or by public transportation such as bus when you are traveling in a strange city?
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lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.25
Task 1 Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memorable to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.

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Task 2 Some people think that students should do part time jobs. Other people think that students should focus on their study without doing part time jobs. What is your opinion and why?
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BruceeeUID: 3459673

T1 有一个我觉得有个小问题，貌似应该用过去式哦。除了最开始用了一个had party，之后都用的现在式。

T2 没什么问题，内容充实，赞。