lhm77499作业贴（10.20）

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7.27报到口语互改小组，说指教太老套，那就criticizing呗！Thanks for listening!

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Task 1 Describe a special friend in your childhood，why he or she is special to you? Include reasons and details to support your response.

Task 2  Some people prefer to make decisions quickly. Others prefer to take their time making them. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.

果断手机录音上传，再m4a转mp3

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抱歉来晚了
总体来说楼主声音很萌，但是语速真的很慢，不过我听起来很舒服
T2
表态是否agree的时间太久了，这个完全可以省下来的。不过内容还是很不错很详细的，赞一个。另外注意preface的发音
T1
内容同样非常具体，很好呢，注意一下rythm的发音，注意一下时态，比如become,have never heard都应是过去时

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77-河马 发表于 2013-7-28 19:42
抱歉来晚了
总体来说楼主声音很萌，但是语速真的很慢，不过我听起来很舒服
T2

哈哈，谢谢。
后面说的时候我会注意时态，发音，然后加快语速。

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Task 1 Many people have pets, like dogs and cats. Do you think that raising pets is good, why? Please include reasons and details to support your response.

Task 2  Some students prefer to live alone or live with their friends when they study abroad. Other students prefer to live with local family when they study abroad. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.

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Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it was important to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.

Task 2 Some students prefer to choose a career before getting into college. Other students prefer to choose a career after taking some university courses in college. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.

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7.28
1.语速稍慢，有时句子之间没有停顿（比如task 2开始的部分），有时句子间停顿有点长（task 2结尾部分）
2.语调尽量自然些，如果是写了稿子建议尽早脱稿练习。注意一些单词的发音，pleasureable的-sure-发得不是很清楚，prefer的重音在第二个音节，different和difficulty的重音在第一个音节
3.内容方面
task 1，你描述了你的pet dog的一些细节，但是没有很明确地指出raising a pet的好处——not a distrubance似乎不是一个优点，而只是不是缺点而以；而clever和你具体有什么关系吗？建议换为更充分的理由
task 2，首先你的中心是I prefer to live with host families rather than with friends，但是题目问的是live with host families and friends or live alone，请注意看清题目
其次你的理由颇为抽象，建议再具体一些

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-7-30 00:16
7.28
1.语速稍慢，有时句子之间没有停顿（比如task 2开始的部分），有时句子间停顿有点长（task 2结尾部分 ...

谢谢！我后面要练习加快语速，减少停顿通过练习想的快一些。语调我得注意单词的重音，尽管我没有写稿但是我重复说了很多遍，后面练习一次成功，现在反复说两个tasks就得花一个小时！内容第一个我是想说它不打扰人还能陪伴人所以raising pets good，clever好像换成considerable更合适，宠物狗很体贴。
第二题题目是some alone or with friends,     Other with local family.我prefer后者，我觉得困难具体这个例子，请问版主你会怎么细化这个reasons？

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7.29
Task 1  Describe a person you want to learn from and explain why you want to learn from him.

Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching TV is not good for people's daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-7-30 13:21
谢谢！我后面要练习加快语速，减少停顿通过练习想的快一些。语调我得注意单词的重音，尽管我没有写稿但是 ...

very sorry,task 2是我没看清楚题目。
比如你选择的是live with host family，你可以说they cooked me indigenous food and snacks，或者I went hiking and camping with them，或者I made friends with their kids之类之类的，最好说具体的事例再加上你的感受

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-7-30 23:18
very sorry,task 2是我没看清楚题目。
比如你选择的是live with host family，你可以说they cooked me i ...

谢谢版主！
我后面应该再加上一些情景想象，更多一些描述。

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7.30
又和你一组哈 发现楼主虽然语速不快 但内容真的非常充实，而且吐词清晰，肯定一样能拿满分的
不过注意控制一下录音时间，还是要45秒
T1 内容方面我觉得要突出一下到底要learn什么，有几个地方没听懂，比如sorting from the middle?
T2 这个语速很好哟，非常NICE

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7.31
Task 1 Which type of movie you are not enjoyable to watch. Action, romance or science-fiction? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to go to schools before they are 16. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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7.29
task1  注意个别单词发音  spectacular  你应该是读错了      

       内容上问题不大  你准备toefl的决定对你很重要  这个例子很好  

       但后边你都一直在说ToefL Speaking 特别 tough   然后你是怎么准备的

       你回答为什么TOEFL对你很重要了吗？  

       Even though it is tough, I study very hard because it can prove and enhance my English ability; Also, with TOEFL, I can go abroad to study. That's why it is very important for me.

task2  语调和语速都合适 发音比较清楚 这都不错
      
       结构上 你先给出了你的position: taking courses before taking career

       然后你最好给出一个理由  把你后边理由提前  不要直接就是例子   我只是推荐   
      
       你可以换一个单词  太多playing tennis 会给人一种vocab limited的感觉  I was upset because I love this career/interest/sport/kind of exercise

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sundeyichina 发表于 2013-8-1 10:31
7.29
task1  注意个别单词发音  spectacular  你应该是读错了      

谢谢！
的确variety不够，应该有一些同义替换
另外task 1 我是想说especially speaking matters to me，自从开始准备托福，托福的口语带给我了尤其多，所以托福important。
task 2 的确在main point后面加上reasons会更好。我同意你的看法。