[口语小组]Cynthia作业贴（9月1日）

cynthialee0923UID: 3240037

口语小组作业贴

主楼
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1561243-1-1.html


求猛烈点评。

cynthialee0923UID: 3240037

8.28
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/syaf1ms4wvgw1hi/hInTLsaxr5


8.26题目
Task 1 Your friend wants to build up a restaurant. Please give some suggestions or recommendations. Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you prefer to buy an electronic product as soon as it becomes available in the market or do you prefer to wait and buy it until it has been in the market for a while?
Task 3-6 TPO13

今天3-6的是一次讲完的版本啦。
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/r1e6x838ft2yjfy/F8mNS0W5zW

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8.25题目
Task 1 Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memorable to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people think that students should do part time jobs. Other people think that students should focus on their study without doing part time jobs. What is your opinion and why?
Task 3-6 TPO14

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/slg3n3sr4i6hgfn/hXmvDBOlZ0

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8.24题目
Task 1 Describe an activity you enjoy doing in your school recently. Why do you enjoy it? Include specific reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you prefer to travel by car or by public transportation such as bus when you are traveling in a strange city?
Task 3-6 TPO15
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/5ugnrzdxvua11yd/l67lHmRg9e

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8.23题目
Task 1 What advice would you like to give a friend who got a new job? Explain why this suggestion is important. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you make plans for your free time or you do things spontaneously in your free time? Explain why.
Task 3-6 TPO16

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/c17foj56j5bvqhi/2z87p-76wL

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8.22题目
Task 1 Your university just got an investment. What do you think your university should use the money to do? To improve the library, gym or lab?
Task 2 Some students prefer to sit in the front of the classroom. Others prefer to sit in the back of the classroom. Which way do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO17

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/gjbymagu56m37je/BcYXQMjU2p

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8.21题目
Task 1 Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you.
Task 2 Some people prefer to live in places where climate doesn't change very much. While others prefer to live in places where climate changes with seasons. Which one do you prefer? Include reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 3-6 TPO18

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/yq4e6rn7nc9ov2o/jdr7HGnCY7

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8.20题目
Task 1 Which one do you think is the most effective way to learn: taking notes, discussing with others or memorizing. Explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 If someone answers the phone or text a message in the middle of a conversation, what do you think about this behavior? Is it acceptable or not?
Task 3-6 TPO19


https://www.dropbox.com/sh/6732z7qje2wp9s3/ljxlow_mjF
依次为q1、q2、q3……

wilsonwUID: 3457994

t1:----ok
t2:第二个理不是很明白，emergency该是caller吧，对话的人是answerer?
t3:....学校的决定该说说理由最后剩下了10s前面说了应该足够
t4:文章的概念介绍可以简单说说..其他真心好了...
t5:楼主需要看看ben叔的帖子【上午那个】...
t6:第一个例子讲得很详细，但是挤压了第二个例子的时间。
楼主你是看着文本念还是自己说的...如此流利几乎无语法错误，难以置信....语音语调我是白痴，给不了意见。

cynthialee0923UID: 3240037

wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-21 15:55
t1:----ok
t2:第二个理不是很明白，emergency该是caller吧，对话的人是answerer?
t3:....学校的决定该说说 ...

Thanks！是自己说的，不过传的都是说了好几遍之后的版本。

T2 我自己觉得超级难讲的后来单独想也没想到好理由。
对的答题时间控制还有点问题。

语音语调就是有问题这一周之内也木有办法了。
共勉之。

wilsonwUID: 3457994

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1619487-1-1.html
贴个自己的传送门啦~楼主有空的话把20的帮我看看吧

cynthialee0923UID: 3240037

wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-21 23:52
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1619487-1-1.html
贴个自己的传送门啦~楼主有空的话把20的帮我看看吧

咦 我昨天回复过你的8.20的呀

wilsonwUID: 3457994

cynthialee0923 发表于 2013-8-22 13:41
咦 我昨天回复过你的8.20的呀

sorry...最近真的抽风..各种低级错误

健锅锅被抢注了UID: 3458472

我看了一下我俩是8.21一组的，抱歉我的只做了T1T2时间来不及，就请麻烦你只点评这两个，我会给你全部点评的。

健锅锅被抢注了UID: 3458472

楼主你的821的我下载不了，能不能给我传一份，415565699@qq.com

cynthialee0923UID: 3240037

健锅锅被抢注了 发表于 2013-8-22 22:57
楼主你的821的我下载不了，能不能给我传一份，

好的。已发。辛苦了！

gywshhzUID: 3262250

lz我来了，其实我认真得听了好几遍，我觉得lz讲得真好，语音语调啥的都没问题，口语小毛病也没听出来。唯一能找的问题就是tpo6的第二个案例讲得太少了点。然后tpo5讲自己的理由，内容有些重复。tpo2吧，我记得这个https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1596093-1-1.html 里面说最好不要用fisrtly，secondly这种模版。其余没什么，感觉lz考口语妥妥的！

健锅锅被抢注了UID: 3458472

8.21
T1 发音很好听。why experience important可能没重点说，但是不影响。hope for in the future, i will create better designed projects?
T2 穿衣服的例子思路很好。总体灰常流畅，发音很好，声音有磁性。
T3 第一句可以练的更顺畅。精益求精嘛。看来应该是一遍下来，很不容易。
T4 发音节奏掌握的非常好。
T5 说到个人观点的第一句不顺畅，可以练习的更好的。
T6 非常羡慕楼主的声音、语速和发音。

wo7750UID: 3420162

8.23
T1 语音语调都很好，只说一个点但说得很详细.但是内容说resume，貌似有些偏，题目说朋友已经得到job, resume应该是准备面试前更重要。
T2 原因细节都具备
T3 我觉得就像标准答案了
T4 the amount of potatoes, 应该是the number of potatoes. amount 修饰不可数名词。 时间要注意，尽量不要超时
T5 说自己原因的时间要长一些，至少20s
T6 第二个点没说完，不过应该不要紧了，前面的要点都说到了
楼主的语音语调，连贯性确实很棒
给个我作业贴链接https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... D196%26typeid%3D196
希望多指出我语音语调方面的不足，拜托啦~

Irene1084UID: 3420779

【8.24】
Task 1&2
非常好。very personal&detailed
I can feel that you are really enthusiasm about what you're talking about...so will the raters. Very impressive indeed!

Task 3
整体很好
注意时间控制，不用解释过多。比如第一个理由讲完cause injuries就OK了，不用总结so...have a bad effect什么的

Task 4
这题的概念是“experimenter effect”，TPO短文里给错了，听力里讲的是experimenter
说到最后自己也觉得解释的有点费力吧？
so those monkeys are doing well not because they are actually smarter, but because the researchers have higher expectations towards them and trains them really hard（这是例子想表达的核心）...so you see the belief of the experienters can affect the result of an experiment...this is what experimenter effect suggests.

Task 5
very good

Task 6
OK

楼主口语基础很好，最后一周重点关注时间控制和精简语言。尽量提高成功率，争取1-2遍就能说好。
像T4这种有个大例子的题，尽量用3-4句概括例子的内容，一定找到核心并且点出来，最后结合概念。
多看几遍Robin那个破解托福口语高分的帖子

加油妹纸，非常看好你！期待考完回来介绍口语经验哈~

cynthialee0923UID: 3240037

Irene1084 发表于 2013-8-25 16:04
【8.24】
Task 1&2
非常好。very personal&detailed

谢谢Irene，好仔细！

其实1，2是讲了好多遍之后的版本了。
然后自己又听了下发现后面还是好几个地方he she不分。

现在做题感觉第第一遍很难说好T4 T6d ,要注意提高概括能力啦。

Thanks again！