[口语小组]星尘想去看极光作业贴（1117）

星尘想去看极光UID: 3457009

1117！！！（ ）


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糖甜甜UID: 3362181

10.12
1.语速偏快
2.注意一些单词的发音，比如iprofessor，inspire，mind，honor等词的原音
3.内容上，条理比较清晰，建议说得更加具体。
比如task 1，你的第一个理由是students are energetic, inspiring bla bla bla，可以说得更加具体，比如Students gets pioneering idea from the Internet之类的
又比如你说feel honored to dedicate myself to educating the youth，可以说说为什么，比如I make the most of my knowledge

只有梦想UID: 3459753

T1
You voice is a little fluctuate because of your mic, you could use an external mic.
wash clothes. Your content is good, just be clam down a little and say every word clearly at the beginning.

T2
You have a great tone and fast speed, is this your fisrt time record?
'read' diaries  
'help' me to be in good mood
just do be at ease, avoid the simple mistakes.

T3
Sorry, because of your mic, I can hardly recognize your voice.
But seems you forget to mention the points in the reading material.

T4
Try to add a relationship between the example and the topic.
Such as ' from this example, we can know how xxx works in the reality world'

T5
Try to control the former part within 30s. And you could say examples in the later part.

T6
You have cover the points. And you describe the second point much better than me.
Practice more and be more fluent.

You do really have to consider change your mic. =.=#

babyhaoweituoUID: 2677708

同学你好，点评在下面的链接里哈！！
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1l8v7d

星尘想去看极光UID: 3457009

糖甜甜 发表于 2013-10-13 23:25
10.12
1.语速偏快
2.注意一些单词的发音，比如iprofessor，inspire，mind，honor等词的原音

收到，谢谢斑竹，万分感激啦~~~我也觉得自己说的太大了，要具体，马上积累具体的例子！！再次鞠躬感激~~

星尘想去看极光UID: 3457009

babyhaoweituo 发表于 2013-10-14 16:21
同学你好，点评在下面的链接里哈！！
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1l8v7d

哈哈，谢谢这么用心啦，收到马上听哇

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只有梦想 发表于 2013-10-13 23:30
T1
You voice is a little fluctuate because of your mic, you could use an external mic.
wash clothe ...

恩啦，谢谢啦，不过貌似你应该看1012才是，不过木有关系啦，我在这里听感觉还可以啊，MIC问题真的很大么，还是因为我在楼道回音大

星尘想去看极光UID: 3457009

只有梦想 发表于 2013-10-13 23:30
T1
You voice is a little fluctuate because of your mic, you could use an external mic.
wash clothe ...

恩啦，谢谢啦，不过貌似你应该看1012才是，不过木有关系啦，我在这里听感觉还可以啊，MIC问题真的很大么，还是因为我在楼道回音大

星尘想去看极光UID: 3457009

1014 全套https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1653903-1-1.html

永远的乌托邦UID: 3412995

10.14
T6:注意process的发音以及invent的被动语态。你的建议很对，第二个例子我理解有误。
T5:自己的建议可以扩充到30s.
T4:感觉teeth 和face发音差不多嘛~注意语法avoid be(being)
T3:注意personal的发音。注意语法concentrate in(on)
T2:理由很充分，就是know all about the social events的表述有点绝对，不过只是很小的问题。
T1:好悲惨，慰问下~
总的来说，语调什么很好，比我连贯多了；有些发音我也不确定就没说；内容的话，如果是一遍录成的话很好了~

星尘想去看极光UID: 3457009

永远的乌托邦 发表于 2013-10-16 01:10
10.14
T6:注意process的发音以及invent的被动语态。你的建议很对，第二个例子我理解有误。
T5:自己的建议 ...

谢谢啦，自己录了都不知道多少遍，说的快了真的啥也顾不上啦，再次鞠躬感激

ノ淘气の小叶UID: 3335741

10.15我自己口语也不行，所以点评的不是很好，请别介意哈~
T1：感觉里面we 和adult的发音有点不准。
T2：感觉说的很具体，理由也很充分。
T3：最后可能说急了，unnecessary说成了necessary。
T4：细节什么的都说得很好了，我觉得最后再加上一点例子和概念之间的关系会更好。
T5：我觉得把结构换一下会比较好。就是在说解决办法的时候不对此进行评价。2个解决办法在前30秒说完之后，在后30秒里面再把原来听力里面出现的对解决办法的评价拿来用。这样时间和内容上就比较划分清楚一点。
T6:控制一下时间，感觉最后的external例子细节没说完就时间到了。

ノ淘气の小叶UID: 3335741

10.16
T1：里面in home 改成at home。
T2：2个原因的时间要控制好一点，感觉第2个原因还没说点什么就没时间了。
T3：要改的原因没说细节，应该控制细节在前30秒把改的理由和原因交代一下，后30秒说学生的意见。
T4：例子的细节说多了，没说出来例子和概念之间的联系。
T5：自己的建议说的时间长一点会比较好，可以把听力里面的细节压缩一下。
T6：说得很好了。可以把第一个例子的时间压缩一下，把第2个例子说完再总结一下例子和观点的联系。

xueyicathyUID: 3472093

1018
T1: you should put more time on how this incident surprise you or comfort you, not on your problem at that time. "I was very upset because I failed the exam even though I worked very hard on it." This is enough!
T2: I suggest you not repeat the question. Change it to a shorter way. The else is good.
T3: you don't need to provide many details. key points first.
T4: good
T5: good
T6: I suggest you listen the lecture again and find out the relationship between the camouflages and animals. In fact, it's two kind of the camouflages. You answer needs to be more organized.

xueyicathyUID: 3472093

Good luck with your exam! Take it easy.