10月20T 口语和作文

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  ]  刚从教室回来，20号考试，搞到现在才连口语！各种被打击。看到屏幕上那短短的一句话，在心里面就是不知道说什么，怎么说？ 每次写作文的时候也是，好不容易想起了3个理由，动笔写的时候发现，心里干巴巴的，开头都不晓得怎么写，每次都是with the developement of society……然后写正文的时候，第一句吧观点写了，比如说“学校投资给sports and acitvities可以给学生提供机会锻炼身体” 然后举例子就举不出来了 思维就卡死了  然后就陷入了不断理论中论证的循环，我自己感觉都看不下去写的句子了！   可能都怪自己从来不写作文吧， 作文水平就停留在高考11分（满分25）  哎  就要考试了  随他去吧！ 有时候有在想自己干嘛要出国！苦逼的表达能力，贫乏的语言。。。100分的高度！算老


下面贴一篇我的作文吧，是有多片
TPO1

With the development of society and the restrict requirements of companies for their employee, it is become more and more important for a student to engage in a sport and do well in social activities. Thus, some people argue that colleges and universities should give the same financial support for sports and academes. In my view, I could not agree with this point any more.

The very first, a fitness body is an extremely important requirement for a student to be successful in his life, as the old saying goes, “A healthy body is the fundament to success.” Nowadays, people are under the more stressful conditions, say the full-time work days and the heavy load of work, than ever before. It is not unusual for one to work late during workday and even in weekend. So, we cannot afford the high intensive work without a strong body.

In addition, taking part in a sport or social activity can really improve one’s interpersonal skills which plays overweight role than others in one’s interact with society. For example, if there is an activity held by a group of students who shared the same interests with you, you can meet with lots of students you would like to contact with in this activity. During this process, students can overcome their shyness to talk to strangers, and thus know how to communicate with the person when they first meet.

Last but not least, student can broaden their network with other people. Through a sport or an activity, students can familiar with some other students outside their major or department who will be the most valuable resources for the student to develop their career. So, just get outside to attend a sport or an activity, you will be benefit from it one day.

From what have been discussed above, supporting the development of sports and activities in universities are of significance for student to keep a healthy body, improve their social skills and broaden their social network. Thus, I am firmly convinced that universities should give the same financial support for sports and academes.

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根据楼主所说， 跟我的情况基本一样。我也是每次想理由就要想很久，好不容易想到了又不知道怎么表达，总感觉这样说不行那样说也不妥，然后就卡到那了，我连理论论证都感觉写不出来，例子很匮乏。
看到论坛里这么多110+牛人，就经常在想怎么差距会这么大，为撒世上这么多会写作文的人里面没有我一个，虽然每次沮丧过后都告诉自己勤能补拙这是靠练出来的，但每次还是依旧写不出来。
好渴望传说的文思如泉涌的感觉。。   对了，楼主是工科么

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bubbyluo 发表于 2013-10-12 21:05
根据楼主所说， 跟我的情况基本一样。我也是每次想理由就要想很久，好不容易想到了又不知道怎么表达，总感觉 ...

正是啊   悲剧了  G作文2.5

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虽然距考试不到十天了，但逼一逼自己还是可以提高很多的，来参加寄托的口语和作文小组吧，版友互改可以帮你发现很多问题，到时版主也可以帮你看看。

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加油加油

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aboardstudy 发表于 2013-10-12 23:25
正是啊   悲剧了  G作文2.5

楼主。。事实证明你真的比我好一点   我G作文只有1.5

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口语个人感觉TASK1&2真的需要提前准备，而且15s的准备时间千万就不要打什么草稿啦，论坛上很多经验贴都说，口语first instinction反应出来是什么就说什么。

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同10.20考试，都加油哇:handshake

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作文思路打不开的话，针对不同题型（开放或封闭）可以考虑以下几种展开论述的思路：

• cause and effect因果分析
• exemplification例证
• division and classification分门别类
• comparison and contrast对比比较
• definition下定义
  

比如这个学校应不应该赞助体育活动的题，你的文章主要用了因果分析法，佐以例证。还可以用到思路的是对比：课余活动丰富的学校（学生）VS很少课余活动的学校（学生）； 分类：学校可以赞助多种体育活动（如在竞技体育之外可以推广脑力运动），他们分别能给学生带来什么；还可以用另一种因果分析的思路：为什么学校应该重视赞助体育，是因为学术资源不需要经常投入资金而举办体育活动需要更频繁的资金。

这样一想是不是思路开拓点了呢。

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-10-12 23:55
虽然距考试不到十天了，但逼一逼自己还是可以提高很多的，来参加寄托的口语和作文小组吧，版友互改可以帮你 ...

版大   我想参加口语和作文组   

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bubbyluo 发表于 2013-10-13 18:00
版大   我想参加口语和作文组

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IRIS凹 发表于 2013-10-13 15:09
口语个人感觉TASK1&2真的需要提前准备，而且15s的准备时间千万就不要打什么草稿啦，论坛上很多经验贴都说， ...

恩恩  这个知道  现在就看看机经 练练

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hj1313 发表于 2013-10-13 17:38
作文思路打不开的话，针对不同题型（开放或封闭）可以考虑以下几种展开论述的思路：

吼吼   豁然开朗啊！！每次写作文都是按照因果来的  所以很多的作文就陷入瓶颈了

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-10-12 23:55
虽然距考试不到十天了，但逼一逼自己还是可以提高很多的，来参加寄托的口语和作文小组吧，版友互改可以帮你 ...

恩恩  先谢谢版主  我高中一同学叫唐甜甜。。。。

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aboardstudy 发表于 2013-10-14 12:48
吼吼   豁然开朗啊！！每次写作文都是按照因果来的  所以很多的作文就陷入瓶颈了

只要言之有理，用什么思路写开去都行。所以没事可以看着自己写过的作文或者找找思路比较新的范文开拓一下。这样练几次应该会有效的。