(口语小组)suesue13 【12.15】

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Task 1 If a foreign friend comes to your country, what kind of food would you recommend and why? You should use past personal experience to support your answer. [tsound]7063[/tsound]

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TASK 2 Some people prefer to do one job or project at one time. Other people prefer to do several jobs or projects at the same time. Which do you prefer and why? [tsound]7064[/tsound]

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12.5

T1
1.开头是“well I would definitely recommend dumpling to my foreign friend...”接着是“...when my foreign friend went to China,I recommend dumpling”有些重复，建议变化下说法，另外是went应该是came，recommend--recommended
2.“...in Spring Festival，the most traditional festival in China”有些重复了，后面那句个人认为可以删掉啦
3.建议LZ多讲下与foreign friend有关的的细节，这样的论证更有力

T2
1.“...prefer to do one job or project at one time”和题干部分一样，建议楼主换个说法：）
2.T2有个比较突出问题LZ要注意下噢，里面的阐述都是一些比较空的论述，而且前后重复的很多。建议suesue在说完论点后加上一些有细节的例子来支撑自己的观点，这样子的回答有血有肉就会很生动了

总结而言LZ口音和语速都挺好的，需要注意的就是说的时候多点有细节和贴近生活的例子，另外就是逻辑的连贯和语言的简练。

噢对了建议LZ把口语都整理到1L，这样方便其他童鞋找：）

suesue加油~

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Addicted有事，所以发消息委托我点评下LZ【12.4】的题目，见谅喔~

T1
1.“the most important development in my country in the past 20 years”和题干一样，替换说法：）
2.it is very difficult---it was very difficult
3.we have to go to...and search...---we had to go to......and searched...

T2
1.“it is a very good time for...”time换成chance会更好

总体而言，相较12.5，12.4的回答就很棒啊，很多细节，逻辑也非常完整和连贯，再注意下时态之类的小问题，就会更完美

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咕叽乌拉 发表于 2013-12-6 14:05
Addicted有事，所以发消息委托我点评下LZ【12.4】的题目，见谅喔~

T1

多谢点评！时态确实是我的硬伤，不改这个分数是不会上来的。但是我一说起来就顾不上了。。唉。。。

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咕叽乌拉 发表于 2013-12-6 13:48
12.5

T1

多谢~~~

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12.7 task 1
Task 1 Describe a character in a book, film or poem, and explain why you like him or her. Please use specific details.[tsound]7115[/tsound]

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task 2
Task 2 Some people think that money and power indicate success. Do you agree or disagree? Please include specific examples and details in your expanation.[tsound]7116[/tsound]