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本帖最后由 teenyl 于 2014-10-13 20:26 编辑

希望通过练习有所提高~
12.15题目
Task 1 Your university plans to provide another type of food to attract more students. what kind of food would you like the university cafeteria to add? Explain the reasons with examples and details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to buy new books. Some people prefer to buy used books. Which do you prefer? Please answer the question with specific examples and details.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qxNsI

12.16题目
Task 1 What is your favorite place to do outdoor exercise? Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: When students hand in their assignments later than the deadline, teachers should reduce their scores? Please use specific reasons to support your answer.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1szFbd

12.17题目
Task 1 Your friend wants to build up a restaurant. What suggestions would you like to give regarding food and location? Please include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with following statement? College education should only be available to people who have done well in secondary school? Why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/14AZ23

12.18题目
Task 1 Describe the differences between two schools you've ever attended. Please include specific reasons and details in your answer.
Task 2 Some people like to take a break or get a job during summer vacation. Others think it is better to take classes. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kspwk

12.19
Task 1 Which one of the following activities do you prefer to do by yourself rather than with a group of people? 1.Study 2.Exercise 3. Shopping. Please include specific details.
Task 2 What do you think of modern technology? Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn49bd1

12.20
Task 1 If you have an opportunity to travel to outer space, will you take it or not? Please give specific reasons.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 16-year-old kids are not mature enough to drive. Please use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD23fo9

12.22
Task 1 Someone is coming to your city for a vist with little knowledge about the weather and the place. What suggestions are you going to give him? Please give specific reasons.
Task 2 Do you prefer a job with a lot of business trips or one without any trips? Please give your answer with examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hql2ajU

12.23
Task 1 Which kind of skill do you admire most? sport skill, language skill, or art skill. Please include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Advertisements have too much influence on consumers' choices. What's your opinion on it. Please give reasons to support your response.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hq60Kx2

12.25
Task 1 Talk about a subject that you think is important but you do not enjoy studying. Explain why it is important and why you do not enjoy studying it.
Task 2  Some students prefer to study for very long time but only once during a week. Others prefer to study for several short times during a week. Which way do you prefer and why? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDuvEXb

12.28
Task 1 Some people like to work or study in new places. What are the advantages of working or studying in new places? Give examples and explain your reasons.
Task 2 When going on vacation, do you prefer to have outdoor activities or indoor activities? Please include examples and details in your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjAmxtj

1.1
Task 1 Which part of campus improvement do you suggest your school to invest in: swimming pool,cafeteria or dormitory. Please give specific reasons to support your opinion.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: schools should ban junk food-such as soda, chips, and candy.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kT6uVVT

1.2
Task 1 Describe a skill that you are good at, such as painting or a kind of sport, and explain why it is important to you. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Some people like to go straight to the destination to see the view while traveling. Other people prefer to enjoy the sceneries along the way. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgFgyOK

1.3
Task 1 Describe a good study habit you have that is different from other students. Explain how this habit helped you. Please include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Some college students like to spend their free time studying another course or doing schoolwork. Others like to join a club or do extracurricular activities. What do you think? Please explain your reasons.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWvv1ve

1.4
Task 1 Please give your suggestions on saving our planet, since we are facing serious environmental problems. Explain your answers using specific examples and details.
Task 2 Is it true that university students today must work harder than before to get a good job? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGgEB5c

1.5
Task 1 Which do you think is the biggest challenge new students in university face: being away from family, busy study or making new friends? Please use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching sports programs on television is not a good use of time. Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1enhDW

1.6
Task 1 What do you think about the fact that robots finish so many tasks for human beings. Is it a good thing? Please give your answers with specific reasons and details.
Task 2 When you give gifts to others, do you prefer gifts that are fun or gifts that can be used?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bngSUOB


1.8
Task 1 Which family member is the most similar one to you and why? Please include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Should people be encouraged to visit a science, art, or history museum? Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mg6ZcIc

1.9
Task 1 An environmental group is planning to organize an activity to help protect the environment. What activity do you suggest and why?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Employees should wear formal clothes instead of the casual clothes. Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnh8XmZ

1.10
Task 1 Describe a performer, an actor or a musician, etc. that you think is great. Please give specific reasons why you think he/she is great.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree this statement: In order to be successful, a person must study in a university. Please give your answers with specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hquqbY0

1.12
Task 1 Describe your favorite room in your house and explain why you like it.
Task 2 Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in a small town. Others prefer raising their children in big cities. What do you think? Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWEY3gS

1.13
Task 1 Describe a day that you enjoyed the most or was very special to you. Please include reasons and details to support you response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Children should learn to draw or paint. Please use specific reasons to support your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJLMhCn

1.15
Task 1 If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study,what subject would you choose? Explain your choice,using specific reasons and details.
Task 2 Do you prefer to watch a movie at home or at a movie theater? Please explain your preferrence in detail.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgoIple

1.16
Task 1 Some people like to work or study in new places. What are the advantages of working or studying in new places? Give examples and explain your reasons.
Task 2 Some people like to go straight to the destination to see the view while traveling. Other people prefer to enjoy the sceneries along the way. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQGER8u

1.19
Task 1 Describe a piece of art work such as a song or painting that gives you long lasting impression. Please explain the impression and include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Compared with science and math study, the study of art and literature is not very important. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTK81X9

1.20题目
Task 1 Who has more significant influence on young adults, parents or friends?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is never too late for people to receive high education and get a university degree. Please give your reasons with specific details.
Task 3-6 TPO3
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWpqk8G


1.21题目
Task 1 Describe a special friend in your childhood,why he or she is special to you? Please include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 When on a trip, some people like to keep a journal and take pictures; others just enjoy the journey without recording. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0EHiCC

1.27
Task 1 What is your favourite school subject? How did it become your favourite? Please give your answer with specific details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should study in a quite place. Please answer the question with specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6hSPkQ

1.29题目
Task 1 Describe an old person (such as your grandparent or neighbor) that you respect. Explain why you admire this person and how he/she influenced you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: College education should only be available to people who have done well in secondary shools.
Task 3-6 TPO24
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntDIW8x

2-1
Task 1 Please give your suggestions on saving our planet, since we are facing serious environmental problems now. Explain your answers using sepcific examples and details.
Task 2 Some people like to take a break or get a job during summer vacation. Others think it is better to have classes. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjEqP7B

2-2
Task 1 Describe a person who you look up to as a role model. Explain how this person influenced your life. Please include details and examples to support your answer.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or project at a time. Others choose to do several jobs or projects at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgFMW32

2-3
Task 1 Choose one of the forms of technology in the list and explain how its development has influenced people's lives in your country. 1)airplane 2)computer 3)television
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the way people dress can express their personality.
Task 3-6 TPO19
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjEWMWd

2-4
Task 1 Your friend wants to have better grades. What advice would you give him/her? Please explain your idea with specific details and examples.
Task 2 Some people prefer to deal with difficulties all by themselves. Others choose to ask for help. Which way do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO18
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJNOukN

2-5
Task 1 Your university plans to provide another type of food to attract more students. What kind of food would you suggest the university cafeteria to add? Explain the reasons with examples and details.
Task 2 Some students prefer test questions that ask for opinions, while others prefer those objective ones with correct answers. What do you think? Please use past experience to explain your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDAB9Kl

2.6题目
Task 1 What do you think of the fact that robots finish so many tasks for human beings? Is it a good thing? Please give your answer with specific details and examples.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: when students hand in their assignments late, teachers should reduce their scores. Please use specific reasons to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO16
Task-6 简直要把我逼疯了。。。。。录了几遍才凑合能听。。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ktsXS

2.7题目/2.8题目  
Task 1 Describe a celebration or a public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memorable to you. Please include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: 16-year-old kids are not mature enough to drive. Please use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO15
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGHmY2a

2.10题目
Task 1 Describe a person whom you'd like to talk with often (this person could be one of your close friends, family members or teachers). Explain why you'd like to talk with this person and what you'd like to talk about.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Student should study in a quiet place. Please answer the question with specific details and examples.
Task 3-6 TPO13
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3p4OwX

2.13题目
Task 1 Your university plans to allow students to watch TV in their dormitories. What is your opinion and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV in dormitories? Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people think that teachers should assign homework to students during class, while others think teachers should assign homework after class using email. Which opinion do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO12
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hq4zVEG

2.14题目  
Task 1 What kind of pet would you suggest your friend to have? Please give your reasons with specific examples and details.
Task 2 Some people like to purchase books from a book store, while others like to borrow books from the library. Which do you prefer?
Task 3-6 TPO11
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jG4vRF4

2.17题目
Task 1 Among the following three activities, which do you think benefits students the most? A. field trip B. home tutoring session C. a presentation given by a local leader.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person needs talent to become an artist. Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO8
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3kfmtR

2.18题目
Task 1 Describe a serious problem your country is facing now. Explain why it is serious and your opinion on solving it. Please include specific details.
Task 2 Some students prefer to choose a career before entering college. Other students prefer to choose a career after taking some university courses. Which one do you prefer and why? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO7
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6Dbp4A

2.19题目
Task 1 Describe an activity you enjoy doing in your school recently. Why you enjoy it? Please include specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children can learn better from teachers who are kind and friendly.
Task 3-6 TPO6
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ6TAjx

2.20题目
Task 1 Your friend wants better grades. What advice would you give him/her? Please explain your idea with specific examples and details.
Task 2 Some people play games for enjoyment, others play them just for winning. What about you?
Task 3-6 TPO5
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDehJ4t

2.23题目
Task 1 Describe a person you look up to as a role model. Explain how this person influenced your life. Please include details and examples to support your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children should learn to draw or paint.
Task 3-6 TPO2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWm8SEg

2.24题目
Task 1 Which do you think is the biggest challenge new students in university face: being away from family, busy study or making new friends? Please use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: in order to be successful, a person must study in a universtiy.
Task 3-6 TPO1
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgymufQ

2.25题目
Task 1 What do you think of the fact that robots finish so many tasks for human beings? Is it a good thing? Please give your answer with specific reasons and details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: When students hand in their assignments later than the deadline, teachers should reduce their scores.
Task 3-6 TPO30
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDmVvW1

2.26题目
Task 1 Which of the following three subjects would you choose to learn: math, science or painting? And why you want to learn this subject?
Task 2 Some people prefer to buy new books, others prefer to buy used books. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO29
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD7UdJN

2.27题目
Task 1 What are the benefits of chatting with older family members? Please include specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Task 2 Should people be encouraged to visit a science, art or history museum? Please give your and explanation using specific examples and details.
Task 3-6 TPO28
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3Fn5YX

3.2题目
Task 1 Describe your favorite room in the house and explain why you like it.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Government should spend money on projects that can encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyles. Please give your ideas with specific explanation.
Task 3-6 TPO25
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3ys79z

3.3题目
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which do you think makes the biggest contribution to the society? Teachers, farmers or doctors?
Task 2 Between the following two places, which do you prefer to live? A. Big and new place but far from your workplace or university. B. Small and old place but near your workplace or university.
Task 3-6 TPO24
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3jz1PF

3.4题目
Task 1 Describe the changes that could happen in your life in five years. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 When you give gifts to others, do you prefer gifts that are fun or gifts that can be used?
Task 3-6 TPO23
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jG5IhhG

3.6题目
Task 1 Your university plans to provide another type of food to attract more students. What kind of food would you suggest the university cafeteria to add? Explain the reasons with examples and details.
Task 2 Do you prefer travelling alone or with your family members? Explain your answers with examples and details.
Task 3-6 TPO21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ2kr6V

3.7题目
Task 1 Some universities plan to replace paper books with electronic books. Do you agree or disagree?
Task 2 When things at home such as furnitures or electronic devices are broken, some people prefer to have them repaired in a shop, while others prefer to fix them at home. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO20
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgDLKyW

3.8题目
Task 1 What do you think is the biggest challenge new university students face? Being away from family, busy study or making new friends?
Task 2 Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in small towns, others prefer big cities. What is your opinion and why?
Task 3-6 TPO19
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6rxhpC

3.9题目
Task 1 Describe a person that you look up to as a role model. Explain how this person influenced your life. Please include details and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When students hand in their assignments later than the deadline, teachers should reduce their scores.
Task 3-6 TPO18
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hq9kulm

3.10题目
Task 1 Please give your suggestions on saving our planet since we are facing serious environmental problems nowadays. Explain your answers using specific examples and details.
Task 2 Can part-time jobs help people prepare for their future careers? Please give your opinions with specific reasons and details.
Task 3-6 TPO17
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqmjIAS

3.11题目
Task 1 Among the following three types of books-mystery, science-fiction and biography, which do you like the lease? Explain why.
Task 2 Some people play games for enjoyment, others play games only for winning. What about you? Please give your opinion and explanation.
Task 3-6 TPO16
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntAwf8l


3.13
Task 1 Choose one of the forms of technology in the list and explain how it changes or has great impact on people's lives in your country: 1)airplane 2)computer 3)television
Task 2 Which do you prefer? A job with a high salary but requires you to take a lot of business trips or a job with low salary but does not require you to take business trips?
Task 3-6 TPO14
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJFHNj9

3.15题目
Task 1 Describe an interesting style of clothing in your country. Please use specific details.
Task 2 If you have time, would you choose to learn to play a new musical instrument or learn to play a new sport?
Task 3-6 TPO12
TASK1好难。。。求思路。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntv3izv

3.16题目
Task 1 A high school plans to add an extracurricular activity for students. What kind of activity do you recommend? Explain why.
Task 2 Is it true that university students today must work harder than before to get a good job? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO11
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntLRAzB

3.17题目
Task 1 Which of the following whys of education do you support the most? Educate through books, through communication within the community or through travelling around the world?
Task 2 Which do you prefer: card games or computer games? Please explain your answer using specific details and examples.
Task 3-6 TPO10
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgyTb9e

3.18题目
Task 1 Among the following three activities, which do you think has the most benefits for students? A. A field trip; B. A home tutoring session; C. A presentation given by a local leader.
Task 2 Some schools offer classes early in the morning while others provide classes late at night. Which do you prefer? Please give reasons to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO9
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGqPDX0

3.19题目
Task 1 Which of the following volunteer work would you choose and why? A. Working as a home tutor; B. Helping adults; C. Helping old people.
Task 2 Some people choose to go to school which is close to their home so that they can keep their old friends. However, other people like to study far away from home so they can make new friends. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO8
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1CKFAA

3.20题目
Task 1 Describe a tool or an object that you often rely on in your daily life. Explain why it is important to you. Please include specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Task 2 Which one do you prefer: participate in an activity alone or with a team or group. Please explain your answer with examples and details.
Task 3-6 TPO7
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTv7x6f

3.21题目
Task 1 What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating in a fast-food restaurant?
Task 2 Some people think the best way to study is to attend lectures, others think it's better to study by oneself. Which way do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO6
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQkmtMy

3.22题目
Task 1 Which of the following activities is more likely to make you happy? Gatherig with friends, studying alone or travelling? Please include details in your explanation.
Task 2 Some students prefer to work on their course paper one or two days before it is due. Others like to work on the paper bit by bit every day. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO5
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGwp1bg

3.23题目
Task 1 Your friend studies in a business school now but he likes musical instrument. What suggestion would you give your friend? To keep studying business or to learn to play music?
Task 2 Some people prefer to have friends who share similar views with them, others prefer those who have different standpoints. Which do you prefer?
Task 3-6 TPO4
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ9Czl5

3.24题目
Task 1 If you have a chance to study a form of art, which one would you like to learn? Sculpture, portrait painting or landscape painting? Please explain your choice with specific details.
Task 2 What kind of job will you choose: a job through which you can get a lot of money or a job through which you can get personal satisfaction?
Task 3-6 TPO3  
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJwLnHh

3.25题目
Task 1 Which is the most challenging place to work? A museum, a hospital or a bussiness office?
Task 2 Should students be required to participate in regular discussions in class? Please give your opinion and explanation using specific details and examples.
Task 3-6 TPO2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ8W74B

3.26题目
Task 1 In your opinion, what are the important characteristics of a good school? Please use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Task 2 Do you plan your free time or do you do things spontaneously in your free time?
Task 3-6 TPO1
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0ekSoS
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沙发
发表于 2013-12-16 22:08:43 |只看该作者
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楼主好啊~评的略晚,不好意思啊~
整体很棒。
语调和发音都很好听,节奏也很平稳,句式虽然不复杂但是清晰又没错误。我觉得这样的风格是很适合得高分的呢,赞!
下面可能主要是在内容上提些我的想法。因为初次见面0-0我可能略显吹毛求疵。

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add的发音是[æd] 。
主题方面没问题。但是我觉得health food略宽,完全可以说推荐新鲜果汁,然后理由是健康。看了Robin的帖子,我觉得也许加一些更独特更细节一些的答案会更出彩。不过如果是刚开始练的话,准备一些universal答案当然也是非常好的。


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used books前面不需要the,textbook前也不需要加the,另外忘记加s了。不过我觉得这个the楼主可能也不是有意加上的,如果是刚开始练的话还是需要一段时间习惯的。
逻辑:because I'm a student, so I don't want to use a lot of money from my parents.这个没有因果关系,“仍是学生”应该是下一句的原因。或者去掉so
另外,可以注意下词语切换,使答案丰富。following these(我听起来像this) kind of part可以说following these indications。平时养成习惯考试才会自然而然~
最后句可以直接说which is very useful to me。这个which句型可是口语利器啊

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Springorchid 发表于 2013-12-16 22:08
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楼主好啊~评的略晚,不好意思啊~
整体很棒。

这个点评太赞了!!学习到很多! 谢谢!!!

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发表于 2013-12-17 10:48:20 |只看该作者
我是第二个点评的呢~!
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1.最后还有五秒左右的空余....还是最好把时间说完
2.建议多说说personal experience...毕竟总是讲道理或者论述不太适合只有四十五秒的口语:说多了没法结尾,说少了get不到点又充不够时间
3.语速语音还是不错的~!because这个词建议还是要读准一点因为相对常用...其他都不错~!
4.连接词多积累一点,不用很复杂的,但是要避免一直and,and这种

Task 2
1.内容有些少了
2.观点句听不太清
3.论述还是不错的

我晚一点交,辛苦你啦~!

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Katrina- 发表于 2013-12-17 10:48
我是第二个点评的呢~!
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谢谢点评~你什么时候传了作业跟我说一声吧~

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发表于 2013-12-18 23:26:16 |只看该作者
12.17貌似还来得及,就来评咯
语音语调速度都很赞
T1
in outskirt是不是会比at 好一点呢?
其他没什么,建议也都很棒啊
T2
improve themself不是theirself
fair chance貌似是有很大机会的意思?equal opportunity是不是更合适点儿呀
So后半段感觉没什么实质性的内容,有点儿没话说了
可以想办法举一个小例子呀……额脑袋秀逗暂时没什么好例子提供
大概就是同学高中没好好学习,但是很有天分,但是没有机会上大学了这种……

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本帖最后由 Addicted 于 2013-12-19 19:30 编辑

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Describe the differences between two schools you've ever attended
LZ疏忽了哦, 这两所学校都需要是lz读过的,然后describe the differences.  所以lz答案有些小偏题(比较
自己所读的学校和一般的大学)
就答案本身来说, 我觉得很好, 很流畅 ,
注意 the most obvious difference (lz 似乎读成了 different)
注意 atmosphere ['ætməsfɪə] 的发音


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lz 注意 an efficient[ɪ'ʃ(ə)nt] way  不要发成i'feʃ(ə)nt
when i find a job , i think it is up to my professional knowledge , (+ and) the employer(+s) also want to see my abilities
建议改成这样, 看看呢,
when i am trying to find a job, i think it is not only up to my professional knowledge but my abilities to solve problems.


lz 很流畅 ,自然 , 整体很好!!  干得漂亮

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yl499235070 发表于 2013-12-18 23:26
12.17貌似还来得及,就来评咯
语音语调速度都很赞
T1

灰常感谢!

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发表于 2013-12-20 14:50:29 |只看该作者
12.19
T1:
1.study with my friend or some other classmates ['klɑːsmeɪtz] (but i just could hear ['klɑːsmeɪ])
2.More details will make your answer excellent because U just lists two reasons (1. not focus 2. not solve problems independently), so i recommend one example related to the first reason to support your reason ( for example, low efficiency with a group of people before , i changed to study by myself and then improved  my efficiency)

the Topic one is awesome without doubt except the details

T2:
we can use them chatting and shopping ( to chat and shop, better ? )
modern technology make the whole world became (become) more and more

Great job, fighting together !

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发表于 2013-12-20 15:59:59 |只看该作者
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atmosphere第一个音注意
这道题我觉得有略微跑题。。因为题目要求是比较你attend过的学校。不知道这么说考官会怎么评,但是我个人认为改一下比较保险。可以对比你的高中和大学,或者编。。。
内容上不错,整个题信息量可以再加大点,可以再把atmosphere的不同再elaborate一下,比如同学之间的交际怎样什么的
最后一句i think it is interesting鸡肋了
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第一句if this is my choice去掉,没有必要也说的不合适
理由很好,可以再说实说细一点

总体来说语音语调很不错,注意极个别词的发音~

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hj1313 发表于 2013-12-20 15:59
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atmosphere第一个音注意

非常感谢!

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Addicted 发表于 2013-12-20 14:50
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1.study with my friend or some other classmates ['klɑːsmeɪtz] (but i just co ...

thanks a lot!

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发表于 2013-12-21 01:11:13 |只看该作者
好像口语也跟你分在一个小组了,但是没有看到你20号的口语作业呢。。。

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发表于 2013-12-21 04:17:01 |只看该作者
20号作业上传后给我留言吧

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发表于 2013-12-22 00:26:33 |只看该作者
你好,我也听过你20号的作业了,哈哈,很努力的听了好几遍,想发现点错误,结果没啥成果啊。

有几个没听清楚的跟你确认一下:

task 1: 你说这是你小时候的梦想,然后说This is a ??? opportunity. rare?? 这里不是很清楚;紧接着的那句this is also a good chance to ??? my horizon..也没太听清

task 2: if they can pass the driving test, 你是不是说成 text了?

也许你说的是另一个词?

感觉语音语调内容以及你说话的松弛程度都很不错,英文底子也是很好的吧。。

问一下,你现在说的,是准备好稿子说的,还是就是记录几个要点自己随口说的呢?我对下个月的考试还是挺担心的。。呵呵,因为多年不太说英语了。。

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