【口语小组】czfwillpan作业贴

czfwillpanUID: 3403637

5.18 独立口语 Task 1 & Task 2

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTv9zH9

Task 1 One of your friends has suddenly received a large amount of money and has asked you for advice on how to handle this money.

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with this statement? People should dress according to the latest fashion.

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5.18 独立口语 Task 1 & Task 2

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0munVq

Task 1  What are some important effects of the worldwide availability of the Internet on modern people’s life? Use specific details and examples to support your response.
自己感觉worldwide发言不好，部分地方存在卡顿。还求小伙伴们指教。

Task 2 Some students prefer to go to universities or colleges in their hometown. Others prefer to go to universities or colleges in new cities or towns. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
其中through发音不够标准，部分地方还是存在卡顿。还求小伙伴们指教。

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SYSU-MindyUID: 3438352

很荣幸第一个批改楼主的作业！
总体评价：首先超时很严重，时限是45s啊，楼主没误会成60s吧。楼主论证的结构是对的，内容很充实，例子挺好的，details也很足，点赞。但是语音语调方面，感觉楼主是不敢张大嘴巴的感觉，我觉得可以大声吼出来啊，反正尽量清晰一点。小口型说就会有些发音粘连，不清晰。还有没有情感起伏，这个我也很差劲。建议听一下大神的录音https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1698773-1-1.html ，还有跟读TPO也很有用的。
task1
1 the one of the important, 第一个the 去掉吧
2 even there are long distance between them, there的发音像是“they” 和 them 的发音也怪怪的。
3 the worldwide internet and X time. 我觉的worldwide发音还好啊，但是X是什么单词木有听出来
4 on the other hand 不合适吧，你是论述很多个影响里面的两个影响，用what's more 会不会好一点
5 horizons后面是you know么？托福口语里最好不要出现you know哈,有口语老师说避免针对考官，所以you know , you guess what这样的最好不要用。
6 people can use them to searching? 不该是search么？

task2
1 as for me 和 I prefer 是不是重复了，as for me删了吧。
2 我觉得题目问的是university or college，回答最好也是university or college吧
3 every evening , every的发音['ɛvri] 听起来像['ɛvi]
4 I am very good at,这样的地方 very good 就可以放慢速度加重读音，就增加一点感情了啊。
4 on the other hand, other 的发音  ['ʌeɚ]  听起来像 ['ʌʒɚ]
我是小弱，能提的意见也只有这么多了，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
偶滴作业：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1718480-1-1.html