【寄托八月组】作文互改7.9 - I82A1

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7.9 Issue 82 Argument 1.题目采用AW高频。（参加八月组：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1496041-1-1.html）

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Issue 82

Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.


Argument 1

Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

占座ddl：7.9 晚24:00. 作文互改ddl：7.10 晚24:00.

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沙发占座！
交作业了！

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issue 35min
argument 37min
抹脸 憋死掉了 天天都超时TAT

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交作业了——

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kathykathy~~~UID: 3487910

VampireYI 发表于 2014-7-9 06:59
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我写好啦~求批改

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存心荷福 发表于 2014-7-9 00:45
沙发占座！
交作业了！

修改绝对谈不上 主要是学习
提供了一些我的建议供参考 欢迎讨论~~~
issue 82 存心荷福 revised by mihuecho.docx (19.05 KB, 下载次数: 6)

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kathykathy~~~ 发表于 2014-7-9 08:31
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互改作文

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kathykathy~~~ 发表于 2014-7-10 12:15
我写好啦~求批改

不好意思我刚写好，求指导 Argument1_VampireYI.docx (23.08 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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kathykathy~~~UID: 3487910

VampireYI 发表于 2014-7-10 22:59
不好意思我刚写好，求指导

太晚了……要断网了，明天给你改

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mihuecho 发表于 2014-7-9 00:57
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互相学习。谢谢你给我改的作文。关于ISSUE的讨论我觉得你的思考很有道理。我是把 “学校要求每个学生必须有海外学习经历” 和 “每个学校都要求学生有海外学习经历” 混为一谈了，或者说我读题的时候理解的是“每个学校都要求学生有海外学习经历”。我觉得我这样理解是有点偏颇的。你指出来的对。还有谢谢你对我argument的鼓励，😄你的argument也写得很棒。  加油 fighting for the GRE!

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