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With the development of science and technology,the small town and the big city is becoming more and more beautiful,each would have its advantages and disadvantages.As for me,I prefer to live in a small town.there are severe reasons for my view.
     Firstly,less stress and the comfortable of lifestyle are important reasons I chose to live in a small town.For instance,every time I go to a big city,I can feel a distinct different on people’s face.In the big city,many people’s face full of anxiety.They may anxious for they work、house and so on.However,in s small town ,people have not the higher work stress,the comfortable of lifestyle and quite life in a small town may be excellent.
     Secondly,this reason is related to the first.In a small town,although people pay less than the big cities,the commodity prices cheaper than big cities.For example,people can use the lower price to purchase vegetable and meet in a small town.And you will not feel lonely ,you will surrounded by many neighbors and you can chat and entertainment with them.Then,it will closer relationship between people。
     A third reason I prefer to live in a small town is for the good air quality.In recently years,with the development of economy and the lack of environmental awareness,most people are surround by haze in a big city.And it will affect the  body health if they breath this air everyday.Yet if we live in a small town ,we can breath the fresh air everyday and there are few environmental pollution.we can see the beautiful scenery and live in a health environment.
    In a word,I definitely prefer to live in a small town,in which I can living in a comfortable lifestyle and there is a little stress for living.At the same time,I like the small town’s fresh air and beautiful scenery.　

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