no题文章中的一个but使用问题

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原文：Initially the Vinaver theory that Malory's eight romances, once thought to be fundamentally unified, were in fact eight independent works produced both a sense of relief and an unpleasant shock. Vinaver's theory comfortably explained away the apparent contradictions of chronology and made each romance independently satisfying. It was, however, disagreeable to find that what had been thought of as one book was now eight books. Part of this response was the natural reaction to the disturbance of set ideas. Nevertheless, even now, after lengthy consideration of the theory's refined but legitimate observations, one cannot avoid the conclusion that the eight romances are only one work. It is not quite a matter of disagreeing with the theory of independence, but of rejecting its implications: that the romances may be taken in any or no particular order, that they have no cumulative effect, and that they are as separate as the works of a modern novelist.

加粗的句子中使用but合理吗？:(

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不是很清楚LZ想问的问题，要在加粗句子中的哪里放入But？为什么要放入but？
能不能再明确地说一下问题？

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qwhrp94 发表于 2016-6-5 21:45
不是很清楚LZ想问的问题，要在加粗句子中的哪里放入But？为什么要放入but？
能不能再明确地说一下问题？

哦你好，我的意思是加粗句子中有一个but，但是but前后的词语并没有转折。

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zjusquanchy 发表于 2016-6-5 22:51
哦你好，我的意思是加粗句子中有一个but，但是but前后的词语并没有转折。

这里我认为是合理的。
单看情感指向，but前的refined这里可以理解为微妙的，略带贬义，后面的legitimate理解为合理的，带褒义色彩。仅供参考

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qwhrp94 发表于 2016-6-6 09:34
这里我认为是合理的。
单看情感指向，but前的refined这里可以理解为微妙的，略带贬义，后面的legitimate ...

thanks！这个句子果然很refined。