[发现]似乎issue30 （科技目的应该是什么）真正扣题的很少

imongUID: 140258

最初由 lakeqian 发布
[B]是啊。而且说实话。。。看了不少牛人的文章都觉得有问题。。。
众人皆醒我独晕？ [/B]

链接列出来
正好把里面的习作帖子清洗清洗，HOHO

lakeqianUID: 157560

To:P小P
1. 科技发展必然会带来效率的提高,
2. 效率提高不一定会afford more leisure time
与
3, 科技发展应该以改善人们生活条件,保障人们健康和安全,充实人们的精神世界等等.
差的远了点吧？
你的意思是：
承认科技的目的是增加效率
但应该关注其他更重要的改善
重点还是要在should开头两段事实太多吧。

lakeqianUID: 157560

最初由 imong 发布
[B]链接列出来
正好把里面的习作帖子清洗清洗，HOHO
[/B]

我pm你吧。因为拿不准，而且他们都是前辈哦~~

wxsnUID: 168283

烂文一篇，供参考
With the development of science and technology, people have been more and more efficient in fulfilling their work. No one could deny that this increase in efficiency do not owe to technological advancement, but the ironical fact is that people have fewer leisure than ever before in spite of it.

To begin with, technology has been developed mainly for bringing convenience and comfort to people's daily life. Admit it or not, this goal has been achieved to a large extent. First, the application of science has extricated humans from heavy physical and repetitive work, which earned them a large amount of extra time, or say, life. Large engines can carry tons of cargos at ease, which once would take hundreds of porters weeks or months to complete; with the help of airplanes, it is entirely possible for one who often has to go abroad to save tens of hours per week. Moreover, the invention of computers has also liberated us from complex calculating work, which they can do much faster and more accurate than us, leaving us enough time devoting to creation and other constructive work.

Secondly, one does not have to go very far to find that modern people have created much more material wealth than our ancestors are still upgrading this ability, with the support of which, human could have more money and resources to enjoy themselves.

However, much as we may pride ourselves on our efficiency and material contributions, we have not benefit from them by enjoying more leisure time. Today's intense competition has made it impossible for anyone to have as much leisure time as he/she like. To survive and thrive in the world, one should not only accomplish the basic work as quickly as possible, but also have to spend most of the rest time in learning more, working more, and improving himself/herself to the largest extent. Such is an irony that the most efficient people in our society are most likely to have the least extra time. Bill Gate, the leader of Microsoft, has to work till one or two o'clock at night and goes to work at the same time as others. George W. Bush, the president of America, must work all day long according to his strict schedule, which renders him away from his leisure time. Although many people have increasingly accumulated material gains, they hardly have time to enjoy them.

Additionally, modern technology have created a lot of new-born problems that our predecessor never need to cope with, such as the worldwide environmental pollution, drug abuse that spoils people especially youngsters, and terrorism that endangers all of the nations that appreciate peace. Instead of playing and relaxing ourselves while we have free time, we had better strive more for the solution of these hardened problems, otherwise we might some day lose our chances of enjoying leisure time for ever.

To sum up, part of the goal of the technology have been realized by improving our life and work though unavoidably, the increase in efficiency has not result in more leisure time for humans to enjoy. Nevertheless, maybe it is not bad news, for what is most important for us it to create a better world for humans to live in with our own effort but not to rest on the established world sustained by modern technology.

imongUID: 140258

收到，你的悄悄话满了。

习作区里面肯定有些有问题的，毕竟都是从03年初开始的版面了，撞见一个确认一个就是。

前辈....呵呵，没什么，大胆质疑就是。

lakeqianUID: 157560

up!!想让大家再提点意见。。。因为这道题确实有点难度。
To:wxsn 我看一眼先。

lakeqianUID: 157560

To wxsn
technology has been developed mainly for bringing convenience and comfort to people's daily life
还是实证分析。这道题涉及带有价值观的判断，是否应该以XX为目的。
B2太短了吧。
sigh.....还是实证似乎。。。
众人皆醒我独晕？

gra cie0213UID: 157500

最初由 lakeqian 发布
[B]个人觉得这道题不是讨论科技目的是什么，论题应该为：科技目的应该 是什么。
例如：科技目的应该 是提高人们效率，因为这样有什么好处。。。
或：科技目的不应该是提高效率，因为。。。
. [/B]

这题有点麻烦的说,
考虑一下
不过支持你的观点:)

buggodUID: 164979

to lakeqian
为什么一定要从科学与效率着手呢
题目中的so that提出了科学的目的是more leisure time, 而效率只是手段
可以同意或不同意这样的手段,然后同意不同意这样的目的.如果这么理解的话,
大部分的题目应该没有跑题

lakeqianUID: 157560

so that提出了科学的目的是more leisure time, 而效率只是手段??????
The primary goal of technological advancement should be A so that B
分析句子成分目的应该还是A,然后有个deduction吧？
可以同意或不同意这样的手段,然后同意不同意这样的目的。这个可以。但是觉得效率还是主要题眼。

buggodUID: 164979

我的意思是说,后边整个加在一起算是目标
也就是to increase efficiency so that people has more leisure time is the goal

apolloxpUID: 156355

楼主的想法应该是对的
感觉 可以从只追求效率行不行？会不会有什么问题 等等来入手

lakeqianUID: 157560

可以从只追求效率行不行？会不会有什么问题
嗯，菠萝哥哥说的很对。
等我有空写一篇试试~~

imongUID: 140258

题目是should而不是is
so that前后的关系是1+1

这样子是不是清楚些了？

我记得我留过这道题目作为作业的（好像在Chapter2），的确有些难度——如果真想写好的话

treesUID: 82785

最初由 imong 发布
[B]is vs should, hehe. ;) [/B]

我觉得这个题目如果定位为is是不是也可以呢，因为我们要做的是确立自己的观点，然后把观点说园，这里可以包括一些概念偷换和自己的定义。