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The speaker suggests that the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries in any field of inquiry. In my opinion, I agree with the auger's viewpoint to some extent, because it is reasonable that beginners or so-called "laymen" have more enthusiasm and passion than experts to make new discoveries and inventions. Admittedly, there is no doubt that experts' abundant knowledge and experience play an essential role in making steady improvement of our society. I would like to prove some evidence to substantiate my standpoint.
First of all, in many areas, beginners are more curious and enthusiastic than experts who have mastered knowledge of the area broadly and thoroughly. As the famous American inventor Edison said, "where there is a will, there is a way". Although most beginners lack the ability of deep comprehension and thorough deduction, they are willing to find something new or make a important discover by their fervent emotion. Moreover, they are less limited by the founded theories or forms thus relative easy to found their own ideologies. For example, the famous German mathematician and astronomer, Gauss, known for his contribution to algebra, differential geometry, probability theory and so on. When he found the well-known number theory, he was still a graduate student.
In addition, beginners could gain admiration and respect by suspecting or overturning some ostensible accurate theories, it is a good way for them to prove their ability. For instance, on the famous Leaning Tower of Pisa, the celebrated physical scientist and astronomer, Galileo, illustrated that even two things have different weights, they will touch ground simultaneously if they fall from same height. Meanwhile, he overturned the Aristotle's seeming authoritative idea and gained good reputation for his discovery at that time. Moreover, since they are the beginner of some fields, they are not afraid of failure. As the well-known British philosopher, Francis Bacon put it," Success covers a multitude blunders." Therefore, it is likely that beginners would undergo many frustrations and attempt thousands of times to conclude a theory or a research. In contrast with beginners, experts are more rational and conservative. Common sense tells us that only through hard work could they get final result and achievements from thousands of experiments or studies, thus maybe they are more chary than beginners to revise or discard something from their fruitions.
Admittedly, it is obvious that we could not ignore the experts' experience and knowledge in any field. It is their systematic knowledge and methods that improve the standard of our living level and make a steady progress of the society. Although there maybe something faulty in their work and needs to be improved by intensive work, most of their productions has bring us a wealthy and vivid life.
To sum up, beginners could bring important creations and inventions to us in many fields. Additionally, it is experts' experience and knowledge that found theories on firm evidence, thus we can never ignore their great values. In one word, both beginners and experts play a crucial role in making a better world for us.

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eddiejUID: 200626

The speaker suggests that the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries in any field of inquiry. In my opinion, I agree with the auger's viewpoint to some extent, because it is reasonable that beginners or so-called "laymen" have more enthusiasm and passion than experts to make new discoveries and inventions. Admittedly, there is no doubt that experts' abundant knowledge and experience play an essential role in making steady improvement of our society. I would like to prove some evidence to substantiate my standpoint.

First of all, in many areas, beginners are more curious and enthusiastic than experts who have mastered knowledge of the area broadly and thoroughly. As the famous American inventor Edison said, "where there is a will, there is a way". Although most beginners lack the ability of deep comprehension and thorough deduction, they are willing to find something new or make a important discover by their fervent emotion. Moreover, they are less limited by the founded theories or forms thus relative easy to found their own ideologies. For example, the famous German mathematician and astronomer, Gauss, known for his contribution to algebra, differential geometry, probability theory and so on. When he found the well-known number theory, he was still a graduate student.

In addition, beginners could gain admiration and respect by suspecting or overturning some ostensible accurate theories, it is a good way for them to prove their ability. For instance, on the famous Leaning Tower of Pisa, the celebrated physical scientist and astronomer, Galileo, illustrated that even two things have different weights, they will touch ground simultaneously if they fall from same height. Meanwhile, he overturned the Aristotle's seeming authoritative idea and gained good reputation for his discovery at that time. Moreover, since they are the beginner of some fields, they are not afraid of failure. As the well-known British philosopher, Francis Bacon put it," Success covers a multitude blunders." Therefore, it is likely that beginners would undergo many frustrations and attempt thousands of times to conclude a theory or a research. In contrast with beginners, experts are more rational and conservative. Common sense tells us that only through hard work could they get final result and achievements from thousands of experiments or studies, thus maybe they are more chary than beginners to revise or discard something from their fruitions.

Admittedly, it is obvious that we could not ignore the experts' experience and knowledge in any field. It is their systematic knowledge and methods that improve the standard of our living level and make a steady progress of the society. Although there maybe something faulty in their work and needs to be improved by intensive work, most of their productions has bring us a wealthy and vivid life.

To sum up, beginners could bring important creations and inventions to us in many fields. Additionally, it is experts' experience and knowledge that found theories on firm evidence, thus we can never ignore their great values. In one word, both beginners and experts play a crucial role in making a better world for us.

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点点滴滴走过UID: 195083

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eddiejUID: 200626

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