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nisionUID: 2134223

It is well known that games play an important role in helping children recognize the real world which they will face in their adult ages.Games like chess improve children's response and thinking methods.Although whether games are as important for adults as they are for children is still a controversial topic,however,I am standing on the point that games do help adult as well as children.

First of all,I would like to point out that adult learn no less that children while engage in a game.The chess,a popular game among people of different ages,has been proved to be helpful for adult to reorganize their thinking methods.The movements of the chessman made by the participators reflect their different ways in dealing with problems.After each game,both player will learn more to be better playing in the next turn,so the similar change happen to the player's thought.And people with much expeience will also get an advantages over those who don't have which will result in the exchaging of each other's opinions and experience.Adult engaging in games learn much more from their adversaries as well as their true works.

Second,game is a better way for adult to relax from their daily jobs.Scientists have been found that people will transfer their attentions from their normal focus completely into the game they are playing.one or two hours games,such as football,basketball,computer entertainments help tired people recover from what they have been busy with.Relaxing means much to an adult,in which it could make a man more efficinet,highly concentrating,and so on.Comparing with other ways to relax,such as TV watching,talking or shopping,games do better in helping an adult from his previous weariness or troubles.

Generally speaking,I prefer adult to play games as much as they could.The benefit derive from the games not only help peple to enjoy fun,but also help them to cope their coming challenges bestly.

nisionUID: 2134223

我们的观点很相似,不过顺序不一,看来想到一块去了

fanfancy1026UID: 2126743

TIFFANY-YUNUID: 2162727

Nowadays, with the development of economy and technology, the burden of the people is heavier and heavier, such as working hard in the（这里应该不是特指吧　a） company, raising family, educating the children and so forth. Playing games has always been thought important to the development of well-balanced and creative children; but do these adults need something to relax themselves? In my observation, playing games is every bit as important for adults as for children.（简单明了的开头）

Considering the first, many kind of games are designed for adults, whose proposes are to cheer and loosen them up. These facilities would meet the adults’ demands of excitement, adventures.  To cite a conspicuous example, most facilities in the amusement park are for the adults, the rolling machine, pirate ship, and many other things, which are all forbidden for children.  In the second place, those amusement parks are benefit to （直接用benefit就好）the adults both mentally and physically.

Furthermore, a number of games, exceeding the notions of game in（应该是to吧） some extent, will bring the adults not only fun and happiness but also develop their intellective growth. For instance, the chess, played all over the world, is widely accepted as a kind of culture.  In addition, playing games may also promote the cooperation among the team members and is also a wonderful way to discuss the highs and lows（应该是没有Ｓ的吧） of the day in a non-threatening, kick back（这个是名词来的吧？？） environment.. Taking bridge card for example, which need more than two people, would test the ability of the teamwork.（呵呵，和我的观点一样哦，　但是那个card要加吗？ ）

Last but not least, many sport games are all playing a positive role in people’s lives, such basketball, table tennis, swimming and so on, could make people healthier and stronger.

In conclusion, even thought we should pay attention to the children’s game and create a comfortable environment for them, we must concern the adults’ amusement games at the same time. As a whole, playing games allows us to: relax, learning（这里为什么要ＩＮＧ呢） something new and stimulating（这个在这是什么词性啊？？adj?）, interact with people on a different more comfortable level, and enjoy non-threatening competition. For these reasons above, adults should never quit playing games and place a higher priority on that.
基本没什么大问题拉，总之，一篇在３５分钟完成的　很不错的短文啊，比起我的．．．．好太多了！！！哎～～～

avmilanUID: 2148160

270word 35min
both children and adults could drive fun from playing varities of games.They can learn and practice some skills for which might be necessary them such as language
skill,mortor skill and so on.Forthemore,they can develop the abilites to communicate and coperate with others.therefore,it is unqestionable to say that games are equally important for adults and children.
  Children are enjoying in interesting games.Not only can they learn some skills from them.Playing rhyming games,for example,they can develop their language skill from it.But do they get lots of fun.Although adults have advanced languge abilities,they would not get much out of it, they could find enjoying .With the continously developing of works and lives paces, adults confront with heavily stress that come from families and works.Thus playing games from which they can get fun is also benefit to adults.Today,it is not hard to imagine that how delightful they are to play games with theirs friends after a day of hard work.
  On the other hand,children could learn and improve their social abilitiesby playing
games.Take playing football as an example,children could develop their commnication and cooperation skills that are completely vital to them after they grew.In comparison ,the abilities of interpersonal and social skills are also necessary to adults.Similarly ,adults can play games such as bridge to develop their skills.
  In conclusion ,children and adults both can find fun in games,even a simple activity can aid in their skills.interpersonal and social skills ranging from communication to cooperation are developed in play.They can learn how th work in a team,how to express themself readily to others .These abilities would be completely necessary for child and adults.

hotkenUID: 2135671

欢迎各位拍转哦，我的在5楼。。。

irenezhangUID: 2117016

33分钟. 350字
Games, as is known, is of great consequence for children. However, when it comes to the role they play in adults’ life, different views are revealed. Some people advocate adults to play games, since in their opinion, games are as important for adults as are they for children; others, in contrast, simply held that games are just for children.Personally, I stand on the former perception.

Games are essential for adults, for they are an excellent means to lessen the pressures they bear from work as well as from families.Researches have showen that people who are at their 30s are living under heavier burdens compared with people at other ages. To get promotion, they have to work arduously; to supprot their families, they have to work even harder. Especially for parents, since they have to afford their children’ education. Under such pressures, it is rather difficult for adults to relax. Games, at this time, serve as a way to lessen their pressures.

Of more significance is that when in games, adults are offered exceptional opportunities to establish their relationship with others. In most cases, it takes more than one person to play a game.For the game participants, good chances are provided for them to talk and communicate with their teammates. In games, it is much easier to exchange their feelings because of the relaxing atmospere.

Another factor that makes games so important for adults is that when playing games, they can also learn something which may be useful for their work.. The board games joined by protential managers can serve as a compelling illustration of this piont. Each year, a large scale of people who want to be managers take part in the games, in order to learn how to manage a bussiness in practice.In this case, games, doubtlessly, provide with an extraordinary opportunity for people to learn and to put what they learn into practice.

As the points mentioned above, games play a crucial role in adults’ life. Participating in games can help adults relax and learn as well as build relationships with other people. For adults, games are  indispensable.

amethyst111UID: 2147702

Games, as a kind of creations, play an important role in people's lives. Games has been developing from the simplest style in the ancient to now more and more complicate mode such as net games played by thousands of millions of people at the same time. Why are games so popular among people no matter how old they are? After a close scrutiny, in my opinion, it is just because games are as important for adults as they are for children that they gain their popularities是不是用复数形式.
    Obviously, in the lives of children, games take a significant role. First, small games in children's common lives help children to learn how to communicate with each other. The party spirit 团队精神是不是这么说will naturally imply children that they should positively give a hand to their partners to win the game. Second, games also play an important part in the physical growth of children. There must be varieties of sport programs in the games, such as running, jumping and so on, which make body exercise needed for children more interesting. Third, in recent years, the showing up of the computer games make children get to know the computer not too early but on time, so that they could touch接触到这么说行不 new technology, which would to some extent benefits their future growth and studies.
    At the same time, games are also necessary for adults. They not only strengthen communications among adults but also help to keep good health as they do for children. Furthermore, at a deeper side, games could alleviate adults' work pressure, keep them in a good mood and accordingly improve work efficiency.
    There is another positive effect for both children and adults, I must point, is that games played by adults together with children help adults communicate with their children more easily. So, in this sense, games could also make a family more compatible.
    In conclusion, not only do games play important roles in children but also necessary for adults. So I suggest that the adult play with their children together if possible to enjoy a sweet family.

[ Last edited by amethyst111 on 2005-12-23 at 19:02 ]

TIFFANY-YUNUID: 2162727

怎么没怎么见羊羊斑竹啊？？
多多来评评吧！！！！
万分感谢～～～～

irenezhangUID: 2117016

Originally posted by hotken at 2005-12-22 16:03
340词，42分钟吧大概。。。花了一定时间修改。

It is for a long time that people have been misunderstanding that playing games is just significant to children but not to adults. In the light of thi ...

It is for a long time that people have been misunderstanding that playing games is just significant to children but not to adults.

个人看法哦, 第一句改成: For a long time people have been misunderstanding that playing games is just significant to children but not to adults. 更简洁吧,虽然句式要复杂, 但是该间还是简吧, 一句话里两个that有点繁

adults cannot gain benefit much from games. 这句话读起来不顺,不过我语法不好不太敢肯定.

On one hand, 应该是on the one hand, 这个我确定刚查过的

irenezhangUID: 2117016

这篇文章提级了成人和孩子, 是主要说明为什么对成人重要就可以呢, 还是还要说明为什么对孩子也重要啊,
我的文章三段都是说明对成人为什么重要的, 因为我认为题目已经把游戏对孩子的重要性做为不可争的事实了,可是看到大家有很多是一半内容说明对孩子重要, 一半说明对成人重要的, 大家对这个怎么看呢

amethyst111UID: 2147702

个人认为既然是一种对照，那还是应该两方都写一下吧

amethyst111UID: 2147702

我也有个疑问，呵呵，就是如果题目是写了人们对同一问题的两种不同看法，但两种看法都有些绝对或片面，而题目却问你which one do you prefer 的时候，该怎么回答呢？是应该平衡一下吧？

stoneSQUID: 2145827

今晚斑竹好像还没来，来了以后记得到我的帖里看看哈

hotkenUID: 2135671

版主快来看啊。。
我的在５楼哦。。嘻嘻