12月22日，1T作文第三期同主题写作。12.24凌晨更新,请大家看一下

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

12月22日，1T作文第三期同主题写作。

很抱歉这几天自己的事情很多，上网的机会也不多，很难每个同学的作文都看到，尽量吧，也请大家谅解，谢谢大家。
今明两天又没太多时间过来，但是发现了同学们的一些问题，想谈一下，也是很多人都有的问题，一并在此写出。

这个题目大家都是写同意游戏重要的，写出来都是三点，放松，教人处理问题，与他人合作，都跟商量好了似的。
我要说的是审题问题。我可以说大部分同学都没跑题，但是却并没有仔细去看看题。题目关键的内容是，as important for adults as they are for children。游戏对于成人来说是不是像对孩子一样的重要。大部分人虽然都扣题说了这句话，但是从行文来看都没有理解题目，所以导致了那么多人都有这个问题：没有有针对性。大家回去看看自己的作文，把主语从adult换成student，是不是也是一篇不跑题的作文？？全篇都是在说游戏如何重要，而从来不说它们对于成人有什么与孩子不同的意义。这是一个问题，他的深层次的原因就是，没有审清题目。把题当成“游戏重要”来写，最后在每段加上成人两个字，再在结尾重复一下题目，就完了。作文确实是不跑题，但是，最直接的影响是，无个性，平淡如水。
看到有的同学在讨论是不是该说对于孩子的重要性。肯定不能有一半的篇幅都在说，那就跑题了（我这么认为。）。但是应该说的，最好的出现方式是用很少的话，和成人做对比，证明对成人同样重要。
很遗憾没看到有提出与众不同观点的人，（也许我没看全）就是说，游戏对于成人来说不是像对孩子一样的重要。这并不是因为大家的想法一样，而是因为大家都没有仔细思考这个题目。这个题目的重点有两个，一个是“重要”一个是“一样”（as important as）。明显，没有人注意到第二个。我可以说，游戏对于成人来说不是像对孩子一样的重要，而是更重要！——其实和大家想的都是一样的，但是一下就显得不一样了。对题目的思考和挖掘，中英文作文都是一样的。只有深入思考了题目才能有创新，才能不显得乏味。
好了，今天太晚了，就先说到这吧，比较仓促，言语可能缺乏考究，请大家谅解。

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题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

我管这类题目叫做半开放式题型.很多这样的题目都是就一给定的说法或者观点进行讨论,自由度比较大

[ Last edited by 逆风飞羊 on 2005-12-24 at 02:23 ]

dinddind2003UID: 196353

花了四十多分钟才写好，大家看看哈

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WeOnUID: 2110447

第二期写了篇，太差了，没好意思贴上来...
不过，这次无论多差我也要贴上来让大家拍！

iris_houUID: 2133514

第三篇,加油写哦~~~~  :)

35min   
Nowadays, with the development of economy and technology, the burden of the people is heavier and heavier, such as working hard in the company, raising family, educating the children and so forth. Playing games has always been thought important to the development of well-balanced and creative children; but do these adults need something to relax themselves? In my observation, playing games is every bit as important for adults as for children.

Considering the first, many kind of games are designed for adults, whose proposes are to cheer and loosen them up. These facilities would meet the adults’ demands of excitement, adventures.  To cite a conspicuous example, most facilities in the amusement park are for the adults, the rolling machine, pirate ship, and many other things, which are all forbidden for children.  In the second place, those amusement parks are benefit to the adults both mentally and physically.

Furthermore, a number of games, exceeding the notions of game in some extent, will bring the adults not only fun and happiness but also develop their intellective growth. For instance, the chess, played all over the world, is widely accepted as a kind of culture.  In addition, playing games may also promote the cooperation among the team members and is also a wonderful way to discuss the highs and lows of the day in a non-threatening, kick back environment.. Taking bridge card for example, which need more than two people, would test the ability of the teamwork.

Last but not least, many sport games are all playing a positive role in people’s lives, such basketball, table tennis, swimming and so on, could make people healthier and stronger.

In conclusion, even thought we should pay attention to the children’s game and create a comfortable environment for them, we must concern the adults’ amusement games at the same time. As a whole, playing games allows us to: relax, learning something new and stimulating, interact with people on a different more comfortable level, and enjoy non-threatening competition. For these reasons above, adults should never quit playing games and place a higher priority on that.


1．        成年人也需要游戏来放松精神
2．        游乐场的很多项目是为成年人设计的----追求刺激，减轻压力，有助于身心健康
3．        益智----国际象棋chess, 围棋，智力游戏intellective games，
4．        培养合作团队精神----桥牌bridge，纸牌playing card，
5,             体育运动也算是放松身心的游戏,

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hotkenUID: 2135671

340词，42分钟吧大概。。。花了一定时间修改。

It is for a long time that people have been misunderstanding that playing games is just significant to children but not to adults. In the light of this statement, adults cannot gain benefit much from games. However, the fact is just the opposite. Playing games makes not only children but adults become wiser. It is as important for adults as for children, the reasons of which go as follows.

On one hand, as for children, playing games can contribute to developing their abilities of solving problems independently as well as forming an excellent habit of thinking by themselves. A good case in point, when playing toy bricks in the beginning, children might find it quite challenging and fail to accomplish the task at a time. As they continue attempting to solve the problem independently, it is more than likely that they would succeed finally. Virtually in this process, they have gradually fostered the ability of handling the difficulties by themselves. Take playing chess for another example. If children have access to chess games when young, they would have rather good opportunities to develop that good habit. Moreover, it would upgrade children’s intelligence.

On the other hand, playing games is also beneficial to adults, not only because it would help them relax but because it enable them to learn the spirit of teamwork. For example, playing Majong, which is very popular with the growing number of people in China, can provide an excellent emotional outlet for people from work pressure. Those who participate in the games would forget the annoyance and enjoy themselves. Besides, just as playing basketball, adults would understand how significant for them to cooperate with other teammates well if they lust for the victory.

Form the statements discussed above, it can be clearly seen that playing games is as important for adults as for children, based on the truth that both of them can learn much from the games. All in all, I am totally in favor of the opinion that not only children but adults need to play games.

[ Last edited by hotken on 2005-12-23 at 16:30 ]

斯塔赖特UID: 193437

It’s for sure that games are as important for adults as they are for children. Game, as an activity shared by all living things, is very important for individuals to learn living skills. My mother always told me to learn through experiencing. I quite agree with that. Playing games is a way of experiencing the world.
    Children are considered to pick up new things more quickly than adults do. As far as I’m concerned, that’s due to their playing games everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Involving in games lead to much practices that help to learn fast. In the same vein, this is also true to adults. As most games that adults play include team works, like all those clubs in campus, they do require good skills in communication which is very important during our daily work. For Instance, many companies nowadays are tending to pursuade their employees to play together in their free time. Such activities could improve the relationship between the personels as well as the stuff's abilities during communication. A good atmosphere in the office brings efficiency during works which is exactly the employers' purpose.
    In addition, playing games itself is a kind of relief. In this information world, people easily get tired after a whole day’s heavy work. As a result, a good way to relieve stress is It’s a really good way to relax oneself by playing games with friends or families instead of watching TV all day long. This activity not only relieves one’s mind but also improves the relationships in his or her family, because playing games is a very relaxing and interesting activity. Take me as an example, I really enjoy playing soccer with my friends in the weekend. I made many friends through playing this kind of game. Playing soccer takes both happiness and friends to me.
    In all, playing games is such an educational and relaxing activity that should be taken by all people, despite of your age.
还是很菜~~但是还是贴出来了~~~欢迎斧正~~~

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TIFFANY-YUNUID: 2162727

刚刚完工～　　４０分钟　
If I say games prove to be an indispensable element in everyone`s childhood,none will disagree with my view completely. However,considerable people who greatly benefit from these games let go of them when they grow to be adults,because they think these games are no more useful for them.As far as I consider,I convince that games are as important for adults as they for children.

First,games, a popular form of entertainment,relieve adults of bundensome pressure which comes from ruthless competition.Being tortured by a whole day`s efficient and intense work, absorb in playing a little game with families or on the computer would be the best choice to have a rest ,you will be free from the exghausted feeling and pressure,instead ,the happiness and relaxing feeling will fill with your heart.Only when people have a good mood and confidence can you work or study efficiently and vigorously.Hence,playing games is so necessary for adults that enabl them to forget their gried temporarily and become accustomed with this relentless society.

Furthermore ,so essencial games are that adults can learn something about life which can make them become mature.When playing games,it is impossible to get the first price everytime,you will be compelled to face failure and learn how to accept it. Only when you are able to learn from failures can you become a real man who would be successful.Therefore,games make it possible for adults to increase their understanding of life which is contributed to their success.

Knowledges about life also means living,communicating or bussiness skills.For instance, when you playing a game called bridge,you will exactly perceive that the importance of cooperation which paly an significant role in adults`work.Maybe that is the reson why so many successfulenterprisons and sagacious statesmen are lured . Playing such a small game,adults will be capale to understand a truth of life.How could you still say games are gratuitous?  

All in all,when adults playing games what they possess is not only the relief of stress and mirth,but also the precious experience and truths of life.Hence,I insist on my view that games are as important for adults as they for children.

[ Last edited by TIFFANY-YUN on 2005-12-23 at 15:26 ]

zhangheng1020UID: 2130513

题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
我管这类题目叫做半开放式题型.很多这样的题目都是就一给定的说法或者观点进行讨论,自由度比较大.

60 MINS 661 WORDS
[fly] :L:L:L写的开心的收不住了~~~:L:L[/fly]


Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish
Some one hold the belief that the games are for the kids only, and it is not proper if a adult still are drown in the game. Although in the traditional Chinese culture, adults are supposed to be serious and expected to follow “none game” behavior, I believe game is as important to those adults as to children in the modern society.

Game playing is important for the learning. Even in the wild, playing game is a natural way of learning for the young animals. We learn new lots of computer technique nowadays in PC game as well as the kitty practicing its hunting skill in the “catching game”. Game was and surely will be the most effective way in the knowledge sucking and in those exactly actions, which are often requested long terms of numerous repeating and practice. Game learning can be funny in the children’s oral language learning, in a way which can attract those adults in the second language study too. Those typing speed practice might be boring and tiresome. Marvelous changing will happen if it added the “feedback award” stimulation as a game.

Game teaches people how to cooperate in commutation. The psychologist told us that in the playing, children enjoyed their game in the changing of several game rules for the benefit of their own, in the meaning while; they have to balance the benefit as well as public interests for their partners for attraction. Such creation can teach a child what is the max-benefit for a group before he joins the mature social communication. As for a adults, those role playing game still work. When fresh employees get the company training, their first lesson is usually carried on by groups of competitive games. In those kinds of practice, adults learn each other’s character in play and familiar the new company’s culture in game.     
  
Game plays an important role in the stimulation of creation and award. Children are regarded as creative cause they can always “form something new” by the praise from parents. In playing, they are really rejoiced and willing to try sth more and sth new. On the other hand, though the first prize can always make one happy in a competition, for the adults, we suffered the fear of being a loser much more times than contented of being the “top 1” champion. The winner-desire can push one for the result only and fade the enjoyment in progressive trying. The focus on success might limit the adult to try more possibility and decay the creative passion. As a matter of fact, working for those real successors is their favorite game. They can enjoy their life in working. Albert Einstein said his theory is “上帝不掷股子” Another famous physical scientist Stephen Horking, the writer of “brief history of time”, told us that the universe is “a God in the nut”. For the adults who can trade their work as a game from their childhood dream, who can really enjoy their work in daily creation and finding, who can forget about the prize and keep his curiosity for some new as a child, greater achieve might be gained in their game-like-life.

In brief, like a child, it is the adults also that need the game as the important part of their life. Because game can help one in learning and cooperating, what is more, it lead one to the real success way of a happy life. So keep young and let’s jump in the game!!

[ Last edited by zhangheng1020 on 2005-12-24 at 16:55 ]

olive8310UID: 2164907

晚上贴上来 哇哈哈```

griffinandrocUID: 201471

我自己开的新贴，不知道这和不和规矩，欢迎大家排砖，我也四处拍别人
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greenlemonUID: 2169154

新鲜出炉，热乎乎的，
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Do you regard an adult who loves to play games the same as children do as normal? Many people would not take games as one of important things in their lives, while I think games are as important for an adult as they are for children.

Since most of us only had serious attitudes towards games when we were very young, the importance of games are gradually ignored as we grow older and older. Even we will actually enjoy ourselves when joining in games, we would not like to admit it. We do need games to relax ourselves, relieve the pressure from work, relationship with others, and other things. One of the most popular games, the “killing game”, which is said to be created by some IT engineers, is welcomed not only by students, but also by many adults, very interesting and efficient to rescue people from dull work. Maybe this one is too “adult”, what about swings? There are always happy children in the swings in every park all over the world. This simple game has the most simple way to relax you, no matter who, adults or children, when you close your eyes imaging yourself as a bird flying in the sky, both the body and the spirit being free.

Moreover, as everyone needs some fun in his/her life, game is one of the most important happy sources. People play football, word puzzles, and other games to have fun. And some “crazy” or “childish” behaviors as building a game house which people used to build in their childhoods may recall the wonderful memory , brings you a smile from deep heart.

Also, adults would enjoy the sweet moment with family members when they play games together, especially the kids. Parents can communicate with their children in many ways, but game is definitely one of the best ways. When they are in games together, distances are shrunk and hearts get closed. Kids will benefit much from the happy times spent with their daddies and mammies, games being bridges between them.

So, adults need games, which may be different from ones they used to play, but the importance would not change. Games are presents life generally give us, to both children and grown-ups.

我也去跟楼上的了
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tomatopotatoUID: 129913

先占个楼

痛苦的小猪UID: 2157500

占个位置

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fanfancy1026UID: 2126743

我用写字板写的，不会有很多错误吧，xdjm们一起拍啊！！！
[size=-2][size=-2][size=-2][size=-2][size=-2]版主给提点宝贵意见哦，我第一次写，谢谢

Children are human beings; adults are human beings, too. It is universally believed that all human beings need to dress, to eat, to live , and to entertain as well. Therefore, At my first sight, I fundamentally agree with the above argument that adults need games as children do with the  following three reasons.

First, adults need games to relax. With the development of Science and technology, competitions are more and more intense, especially for adults. They need to compete to keep their positions. More practically, they need to compete to marry, especially for adult men. As far as these adults are concerned, they have much pressure, to take purchasing houses before marrying as an example. While as we know, buying a house is not without difficulty for every individual except those are inherited rich. Besides work, the thing they most want to do is to wholly relax, and games, a good change of pace,  can meet their needs here.

Games are not without merits, adults also can learn a lot from them. It is believed that, in order to play a game such as playing footbal well, we need several people to work together. Statistics show that those who can play games well are those who can cooperate with others well. Hence, in most cases, during work, these people can work together with their coworkers very well, because they know the importance of group work which is learnt from games.

What's more, through games, adults can get a sentimental soothing. We know there are as many successes and failures in games as in our life and work. When we succeed in our work, we should not pretend; when we fail in our work, we should not give up. JJust as a saying goes as follows,"To win or to lose the battle  is very common for warriors. "As a result, people who like playing games will get an emotional satisfaction from them.

In a word, games are rather beneficial for adults. It is not only because they can relax in playing games, learn how to cooperate, but also because they can get a sentimental satisfaction.

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请问版主：胜败乃兵家常事。 怎么翻译啊？应该有这样的英文saying的吧

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