12月27日，1T作文第四期同主题写作。

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

题目：Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives.
      automobiles
      bicycles
      airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

上一期是一篇半开放式的题目,这一次自然就是全开放式的题目了.
出这一道题时有点为难.一方面希望看到大家有不同的思路和看法,另一方面,从准备作文的角度来说,其实有一个方面是应该重点准备的,因为题库中有别的题目也是在谈这个东东,一起准备就会更方便.这样吧,我只说这么多啦,看过题库的同学肯定知道我说的是哪个方面啦,如果想的话建议写,两个题目就可以一起准备了.没看过题库的同学~~~~赶快去看吧,这个可是无比重要啊~~~~

WeOnUID: 2110447

今晚赶紧写！

HENRYLIHEUID: 35341

写作是最弱的。头一次发到同期写作来。请斑竹和各位同学指点一下不足，打个分也好。

44mins，366wds

Before the invention of airplane by the brothers Wright about a whole century ago, people could only go across the Pacific by ship. They regarded flying as a dream, which has now come true and can be enjoyed by everyone. It is truth that airplanes have changed people’s lives to a great extent.

Apparently, airplanes serve as the most efficient transportation approach. The highest speed of common airplanes reaches over 800 kilometers per hour, several times that of the most advanced train. One can travel by airplanes across a largest country, for example China, within just a few hours. Various conferences are held every so often all over a country, sometimes even abroad. Moreover, they last for only a couple of days and thus require people be highly efficient in the trip. Therefore, only by airplanes can such a efficiency be achieved. On the other hand, any alternative will cost people several days on the way and the comfortlessness will surely annoy them very much. Another example can be given here. By FEDEX, people can receive letters from far away in one day, which is a typical advantage of airplanes.

Another benefit people have gained from airplanes is a better environment of globalization. I can think of no better illustration of this than the example of my city, Shanghai. Everyday by airplanes, uncountable people from all over the world come to Shanghai for businesses and trips, which had brought a good international atmosphere here in the city. Hence, people, especially the young, have a lot more opportunities than before to communicate with people of a large variety of cultural backgrounds, which is undoubtedly the best way for different people to exchange with each other commercially and culturally. What if people had no airplanes?

In addition, airplanes have some other utilities. When an area endures too long a aridity, artificial precipitation will come in handy by spraying the solid carbon dioxide from airplanes high in the air. Farmers can also benefit a lot from crop-dusting using airplanes.

Airplanes have brought much convenience to people. We should take good advantage of them in order to lead better lives. If only the price of tickets can be lowered soon.

[ Last edited by HENRYLIHE on 2005-12-27 at 20:12 ]

griffinandrocUID: 201471

占座占座
赶紧加油

greenlemonUID: 2169154

这个题目写的很难过:(  无比的别扭,不知道怎么回事,觉得其实可以写的地方有好多,可是想写的时候都忘记了.40多分钟才搞定,请大家拍砖,郁闷的飘走


With the rapid pace of development in every field of science and technology, more and more inventions are brought into this world almost in one night. As a result, our lives have underwent a dramatic change by the highly developed technology system, including the impact posed by transportation vehicles, such as automobiles.

Standing at the window of a skyscraper in the center of your city and looking downward, you will catch a scene of busy traffic, that automobiles hurry passing by, like a stream. And think about the traffic system, the cloverleaf junctions, the high way, the streets and roads which interweaved as a huge net covering the whole city. All of them are constructed for variety of automobiles: cars, buses, and trucks etc. which decide what the traffic system should be, and even more, the city plan.

It is a fact that our lives are highly depending on the autos. People go to work from the northern part of the city to the opposite one every morning by car or by bus. Our mails are delivered by mail trucks. And you get the pizza from the pizza man who just got off from a car. Ambulances are busy running to the hospital, and the fire trucks to the fire places. Except for the daily use of automobiles, we drive to another city or the beach for holiday, and we watch the race of formula cars. This transportation vehicle has deeply rooted in our lives, becoming an indispensable part.

On the other hand, automobiles manufacture has played an important role in the industry and the modern culture. Numerous people work in those companies involved in car-making. Plants and factories producing different components distribute all over the world. It is of significant importance also in the field of fashion. Every year the exhibitions of new designs of various cars, with the fashionable dress, watches, and other elements together, compose the full contents of fashion. Collectors spend millions or billions for the special style, which always set limit to the number produced.

Apparently, the automobile has changed our lives greatly, and this dramatic influence will continue in the near future as far as I can imagine.

[ Last edited by greenlemon on 2005-12-27 at 20:06 ]

hotkenUID: 2135671

版主说的是哪个方面呢？？
有谁能解释下

amethyst111UID: 2147702

With the rapid development of society and significant improvement of transportation vehicles, people's lives have greatly changed. In my opinion, of all the transportation vehicles, such as bicycles, automobiles and airplanes, the invention and development of automobiles have made people's lives changed dramatically.
    Sometimes it was very hard for people's trip when there was no automobile several years ago. People went to school or business largely depended on foot or bicycles. There are couples of disadvantages. On one side, they cost people more time on the way to destinations; on the other side, when people happen to come across some horrible weather such as windy or storm, they would probably not only put off their work but also sometimes get body injuries. Once a time my feet was hurt by a fallen tree trunk blew down by wind on my way school on a snowstorm day.
    Compared with those negative points, automobiles have their own advantages for people's lives. Firstly, the use of automobiles makes it much easier for people's trip as well as makes it more flexible for people's work schedule. Because of the rapid speed and convenience of automobiles, people would not necessarily get up too early to catch up with the city bus as they did the time when they had no automobiles. Secondly, not only automobiles can protect people from the wind, snow or even hails, they are also a safe transportation style, compared with foot or bicycles, in that the shells of the cars can shield people within from being bumped or attacked. Further more, the contribution of the use of automobiles to the development of various industries, such as transportation industry, travel industry, manufacturing industry and so forth, will speed the flourish of the economy of the whole country, and accordingly improve the standard of people's living.
    Of course, there are also some negative influences. The development of automobiles also brings us some kinds of environment problems, such as the sound pollution of the cars and the air pollution caused by the exhaust emission of automobiles. At the same time, as a result of the shown up of more and more private cars, the traffic jam becomes much more severe. To solve those series of problems, the government should enact sound law to low the side-effects of automobiles on people's lives to the minimum limit.
    In conclusion, automobiles make people's trip much easier, much more convenient and much safer and also improve the standard of people's living. Although they might as well have some disadvantages to people's lives, the bad influences will be weaken by the endeavor of both the government and us. So I suggest that it is automobiles that have changed people's lives enormously.

greenlemonUID: 2169154

开头竟然都几乎一样，汗.
to come across some horrible weather such as windy ( wind?)or storm

the government should enact sound law(好象是单数名词要加点什么在前边吧,还是用laws吧) to low(在金山里查不到这个意思的动词,low 有动词的意思吗?) the side-effects of automobiles on people's lives to the minimum limit.

正的反的都说了，就是担心你30分钟写不完.

bamboo2142003UID: 2135987

374words ,40min   不知道怎么回事，总是要写40分钟，特别郁闷，考过t的人对我说，考场上一紧张就会写完的，我怎么担心一紧张就没词了，更写不完了？汗~~~也不知道写的怎么样……烦劳大家指教^-^

Nowadays, when traveling , people could choose different sorts of transportation vehicles , any of which has changed people’s lives obviously .But when you detail things out ,do you still consider bicycles are speedy enough from one country to another ,or automobiles are safe enough for a tires driver ,or both are comfortable enough for a long trip ?Which you prefer depends on your own experiences ,life styles and emotional concerns ,as for me ,I support the airplane ,the one changing people ‘s lives most ,for its speed ,safety and comfort .

Let’s first take a place at the speed of the aircraft in advance . Compared with bicycles and automobiles , airplanes could fly at the velocity of sound ,about 340 meters per second .Moreover ,airplanes can fly over the ocean directly ,which devices the length of the airlines .But if you drive ,you have to go long way around ,what’s worse ,you can not cross the ocean if there is no road .So taking the airplane saves a lot of time .

To be more specific , the airplane perhaps is the safest transportation in the world .the air route and flight time of one plane must be carried out strictly ,each of the lines is under control orderly ,reducing the ratio of the happening of the accidents .What’s more ,because of the short time of one flight ,the pilots always drive energetically ,which also reduces the ratio .

Eventually ,it is almost the most comfortable choice for traveling .Taking an airplane can reach your destination fast and you do not have to drive it by yourself .People could enjoy themselves on the plane ,eating ,reading or just sleeping .And it is hard to imagine the result that you do such things on your bicycles or automobiles ,not to mention how tired you will be .

In conclusion , automobiles and bicycles have truly changed people’s lives ,which are very useful transportation vehicles in the modern time .But compared with them ,airplanes are more excellent and make greater effects on people’s lives ,for the speed, safety and comfort .I therefore reinforce to support that airplanes has changed people’s lives a lot .

斯塔赖特UID: 193437

After the Wright brother’s first flight, airplanes have greatly changed the people’s lives. They not only cut the distance between remote areas but also strengthened the communications between countries and even continents.
        Thanks for their high speed, there is no doubt that the airplanes have made the long-distance trips much easier than ever before. The time saved by this fancy way of transportation brings great benefits to the economics. Products like fresh fruits and sea fishes which could only be found in specific areas as they used to be, now is available all over the world due to the convenience brought by the airplanes. As a matter of fact, this stimulated the economical development in the areas where these kinds of products are produced. For example, the litchis, which used to be only available in southern China, by means of transporting them by airplanes, now can be found in almost every supermarket in Beijing which is a typical northern city.
        The airplanes, on the other hand, also affected the cultures as well. As the phrase ‘Global Village’ became more and more popular nowadays, despite the internet, the airplanes also contributed to this change. Because of its great speed, airplanes enabled people travel a long distance in a relatively short time. This eventually resulted in the increasing communications between people from different countries. New ideas and thoughts were spread all over the world. People are more likely to think in the same way than they used to be. Dwelling around downtown Shanghai, if not seeing all those yellow-skinned people, looking at all these skyscrapers and huge advertisement boards, you may hardly find out the differences between here and western cities like New York or Los Angels.
        In all, the impacts that the airlines have brought to us in the latest one hundred years are marvelous. They changed the cities you and I were in and even the ideas we have on this topic.
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[ Last edited by 斯塔赖特 on 2005-12-28 at 21:14 ]

tonyttUID: 2147588

这个题目是不是不必要比较呢?题目只是说选择一种，change people's lives。

TIFFANY-YUNUID: 2162727

大家都好勤快啊
占个座先  明天再来贴拉

fanfancy1026UID: 2126743

Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives.
      automobiles
       bicycles     
      airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

40分钟，330字


During the last twenty years, the great change happened in our country is that more and more people own an automobile at hand. Followed by this change, people's life has altered tremendously. Although automobiles will pollute our environment to some extent, on balance, its advantages outweigh its disadvantages as follows.

To begin with, automobiles make it convenient to transport. In old days, people could just enjoy the necessities restricted to their own communities, as a result of undevelopment of transportation. But nowadays, due to the availability of automobiles, food, goods and so on can be easily transported to any world in the country, even abroad. For example, some fruits such as litchi can only grow in the south because of the weather and soil condition, accordingly, it is hard for northerners to eat litchi. While owning automobiles it is easy for us to eat litchi everywhere in the country.

Furthermore, automobiles make us work more and more efficient. With automobiles, we can do plenty of things in one day. For example, we can go to a remote shopping mall to buy things and without wasting time on the road if walking or bicycling. And if we have something urgent to do, such as emergency, if an automobile can be used, the patient might be saved in this case.

Another advantage of automobiles deserved mention is that it can enhance the communication between friends and family. Nowadays, life rhythms become faster and faster, peoples have less and less to get together. However, with an automobile, friends are easily to gather together and without worrying wasting too much time; likewise, young people can go to see their parents in the countryside more frequent. In this way, automobiles foster the emotional communication between people.

To conclude, with automobiles available, people's life have changed greatly, on the one hand, they offer great convenience and efficiency to people, on the other hand, they accelerate the sentimental communications between people.



还是不太会想理由，也不太会举例子，更不太会变换句式和换词语，唉:rolleyes::rolleyes:，还等努力啊，坚持努力，努力，我们大家都一定行的，:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

[ Last edited by fanfancy1026 on 2005-12-28 at 09:28 ]

nisionUID: 2134223

Automobile has been one of the greatest inventions in the history of transportation vehicles.Before it came out,we human could only travel at limited speed within specific areas,however,the introduction of automobiles get people's free travelling dreams come true.I would like to show my several points on how automobiles has changed people's lives.

First of all,autombiles save the time people spend on traffic in cities and make our lives more convenient.People living in cities demand a efficient life style that they need to finish several things a day,such as shopping,working and so on.So with an automobile parents could drive their children to schools and then to their offices next without pausing or interrupting.An automobile offers people more time to spend on doing things they really want while this almost could not be possible before it was introduced. Automobiles make us a better modern lives than ever before.

Second,automobiles creats us opportunities for distant travelling and entertainment.With the development of various highways and roads,automobies could travel at a faster speed safely.On weekends,automobiles help us to travel to see our far located relatives and make a home outside picnic true.We can free us from the urban noise to the peaceful nature in just a few ours with an automoile.It is common known that automobile make our world smaller and offer us a quality life style.

What's more,automobile culture has become one of modern culture we are experiencing.The space inside an automobile is a space which is different from the outside enjoyed only by the driver and passages inside.The music,decoration inside a car sometimes tell what a drive thinks and prefers.Automobile culture makes a part of peple's daily lives

Finally,I would like to conclude that with the above advantages automobiles cuold be viewd as a important tool that improve our lives,though there are indeed some problems they bring to us.Since automobile has more or less a sigh of modern life,we are expecteing that they would make our lives better and better all the time.

翦瞳UID: 184872

题目：Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives.
      automobiles
      bicycles
      airplanes
正文：
I prefer the airplane as the one which changed people's lives. The reason on which I base on is that it has met our dream of flying in the sky. It makes possible somethings hardly to be accomplished. At the same time, it links people all over the world to be united humankind.

Long ago, we always had a dream of flying in the sky like free birds to see the earth where we lived from another view point. In old China, many precursors had made wooden birds and let them fly in the air although it can not last long. In the history of humankind we have tried many methods but until the Wright brothers invented the first heavier than air flying machine can we believe we can fly as birds, though there are some differences. From then on, our flying dream comes true.

In addition to, many people can not imagine heavier machines can float in the water or fly in the air until the steamboat and airplane are present. The Wrighter brothers' success proved that like the steamboat the airplane made by heavy metals can wing in the air. It shapes our view towards the world: there is nothing impossible as long as we try. To some extent, it encourages the tempting of the rocket and space navigation to explore the world we do not know. Not only the airplane itself changes our lives, but also its inspiration galvanizes us to proceed.

The most practical profit for us of the airplanes is that it can send us to anywhere in the earth we need. No matter the European countries or Asian countries, even the African tribes, are convenient to achieve in no more than a day. With the help of the airplanes, the Washington is not only a dot on the map for people of other countries and we can communicate with each other quickly and easily. We should acknowledge the foreigner is not a usual word as before. We can meet people with different colors everyday and we are adapted to. If we can not afford a bit expensive plane tickets, we can correspond by air. People from distinct parts of the world are not strange to each other.

In sum, through three reasons presented above, we can conclude airplanes indeed change our lives both in practical and in spiritual aspects.



[ Last edited by 翦瞳 on 2005-12-28 at 11:46 ]