Issue11 【flying小组】第3次作业 by mubby

mubbyUID: 2300654

TOPIC: ISSUE11 - "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
WORDS: 417         TIME: 0:39:39          DATE: 2006-2-18

One of the main obligation of the university is to educate and cultivate young generation, so they can be capable of handling pressure and fulfilling their tasks in future. While when it referred to build a global university on the purpose of solving the world's most persistent social problems, I tend to give negative answers.

It's true that university plays such an indispensable role in every nation in today's competitive world. How well an ameliorated and improved system of education can function is an important sign of a nation's development. The more scientists and experts one nation can cultivate, the more possibilities the country will have in such a world which is full of the nature of competitiveness. A reason why US takes the lead in most aspects in the world competition is that it have the most qualified specialists and experts. This can vividly illustrates the importance of university educating.

With the advancement of new technology, new tickling problems occur in the world. Some of the problems such as air pollution, water shortage and so on are indeed persistent and lasting problems. Take problems of pollution for example, it's difficult and without effectiveness to solve since the cause of it needs not only some experts in certain country but the cooperation of the whole world. Believe it or not, one single polluted river in China can lead to big pollution across the Atlantic Ocean due to the water cycling system. The world is intertwined in such a complex way so the existing problems today are a great challenge to every nation in world.

Due to the arduous nature of these persisting social problems, it's unwise for all nations to help building a certain global university. Knowledge of the students is only one minor factors concerning to solving these tricky world problems. Cooperation between all countries weighs more important. However, politics is such complicated and complex that the cooperation of the nations can't go smooth as we can expect. That is, even assuming we had a global university at hand now, it is unlikely that the students can make the most of their knowledge. Counting on so many unpredictable factors relating to solving the world problems, the future of the global university is not brilliant.


In the last analysis, though university is of vital importance in all nations considering the complex and complicating nature in politics, it's no easy thing for all nations to help build such a global university in the purpose of solving world problems.

[ 本帖最后由 mubby 于 2007-2-19 00:25 编辑 ]

aunknownUID: 2173661

本来想好好改一下的,实在是没时间,真是抱歉,语法错误我就不改了,就对你文章的论述谈几点我的看法.
你的第一body ,论述大学对社会发展有巨大的的作用,这和你的主题-不应该建全球性大学有什么关系,没看出来.
第二body, 你说世界上存在一些非常复杂的社会问题,并且需要cooperate 去解决,按你的下面一段的观点,可能有一些限制,因此建全球大学没用, 但单独放一段论述这些问题,我觉得不合适. 给人不知道你在说什么的感觉.我觉得你用他做铺垫的话,这段可以和下面一段合并.
第三body 是你的核心,你说知识不重要,合作重要,然后又说合作不管用,那什么管用呢? 你的点出来, 要不让人看的一头雾水呀,觉得这段层次有点乱.
限时写可能是不太好些, 觉得你开头观点已经很清楚了,但是下面的论述感觉有点跑~, 今天有点急, 说的有点重了,请别往心里去. 你不到四十分钟写成这样已经很不错了,比我强多了.;)

今天刚好写了这个题目,有空帮我看看我的丑陋之作,花了一个多小时,哎!汗!:(

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-612154-1-1.html

mubbyUID: 2300654

没事的，我现在很需要打击，刚开始写，第三次作业，确实还是有些找不到思路。
我也觉着我应该先顺顺思路再限时，不然写完了自己都不愿意再看了，呵呵。
谢谢排砖，等我去学习下你的，呵呵。