～豆豆～改作文的小屋子(Last Updated: Oct. 17th)

popsywinterUID: 2120302

BTW,豆豆多保重身体啊~最近天气很怪,我的嗓子也哑了,不过也可能是练口语练的~
还有10天不到了,口语才刚起步呢~抓狂啊~:(

豆豆～UID: 2378384

加油加油！

最近天气干燥。。。

豆豆～UID: 2378384

已修改，请查收:-)

豆豆～UID: 2378384

居然都沉到第六页了:funk: :funk:

我捞帖大王的身份要暴露了哈哈

halkingUID: 2291422

Topic：praise student's efforts or achievement, which one is better.


Undoubtedly, proper praise can serve as an effective incentive to students, and then students will try their best to do better and better. Besides, praise can also create competition among students, which is always very important in study. If I have to make a choice, in my opinion, I insist that students should be prasied according to their achievement instead of effort. If we choose to praise students according to their effort, then how to measure effort can be a serious problem, sometimes it may encourage cheating behavior and create some other problems.

Traditionally, we measure a student mainly according to his or her achievements which includes exams and papers or something like that, and praise mainly relates with these achievements. Why we choose such a way to prasie student instead of other ways? I think which is the results of long term choice which based on the experiences of teachers. Just try to imagine, if we prasie students mainly according to their efforts, there will be several problems. First, we can only observe their effort in classroom, which means we know nothing about their performance in out of school. Maybe some students would like to study at home, and others like to study at classroom, in such a situation, the measurement tends to be unequal.

Another probelm is that, such a measurement method may encourage cheating behavior in school. Some students may pretend that they are studying very hard when there is teacher around them or in classroom, and when there is no teacher or monitor they will forget all things about study. So, within a more broad view, praising students according to their effort actually is an inefficient method and suffers from some serious problems.

On the contrary, if we praise students according to their achievements, relatively, it can be more efficient and practical. First, we can assess students' performance more easily and objectively. Furthermore, this is a more equal method in measurement, at least whcih actually provides little chances to cheat.

Of course, we should admit that praising students according to their achievements sometimes may has some drawbacks, however, I maintain that which is the most practical and equal method to give incentive to students at least currently.

halkingUID: 2291422

topic：TV should be used to educate or entertain

In an information society, the rapid development of technology has given birth to more and more modern equipments, TV is one of the most important inventions in 20th century. Of course, TV has many influences on people's life, some on positive aspects and some on negative aspects. In my opinion, TV can be a good media to educate people, both in schooling and daily life.

Since 1990s, electronic teaching system has become popular, more and more schools have employed such kind of methods to facilitate their teaching. Especially in college and university, TV has become the basic necessity in classroom and teaching center. With the help of TV, teacher can show very interesting TV programs to their students. For example, in an environment class, students have no chance to see the desert environment in Africa. However, teacher can buy a CD and paly it on TV, then students can learn desert environment visual in thier classroom. In other words, TV have enhanced modern education substantially in a costless way.

Besides, TV can also infrom people about the situation of their local community and even all over the world. News program can be a good example, actually such kind of program not only give people some information, which can also has some education function on people. If the news program reported an car accident, then people may learn something from such an accident. Next time, if they meet the same situation such as snowing or heavy rain, they will drive more carefully and slowly. Maybe it  just has a fuzzy impression in people's mind, but sometimes it do save people's life and hence prevent a disaster.

Of course, we should admit that TV programs may have some negative influence on people's behavior, especially it can affect children's behavior. However, we should admit that there is no perfect thing in this world, what we can do and what we should do is pursuing the positive aspects and avioding the negative aspects. In fact, there are a lot of ways to cover the negative influences of TV. For example, government can make some regulations on the timetable of broadcasting, so some unsuitable programs will be broadcast only when children go to bed. So, in a word, I believe that TV should be used mainly to educate people instead of entertain people, and it is also practical to do so.

rong1986UID: 2412040

万分感谢.呵呵
我27号就要考啦,英语底子不是很好,尤其是作文...以前考六级都把它skip掉了．
最近狂写作文，今天根据你的建议又写了一篇,能不能有空帮我瞧瞧.
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-751762-1-1.html

豆豆～UID: 2378384

已修改:-) 请查收;d:

rong1986UID: 2412040

THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
豆豆真是太好了.GOD BLESS YOU

rainychianUID: 2157302

豆豆可以帮我看看这篇作文吗：p
http://space.gter.net/2157302/viewspace-451.html

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays people are too much emphasized on appearance and fashion.

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[ 本帖最后由 rainychian 于 2007-10-20 20:03 编辑 ]

豆豆～UID: 2378384

can you post it on the bbs plz? Thanks:-)

rainychianUID: 2157302

原帖由 豆豆～ 于 2007-10-20 20:04 发表
can you post it on the bbs plz? Thanks:-)

貼好了，謝謝：）

halkingUID: 2291422

再发一篇大作：TV should be used to educate or entertain


topic：TV should be used to educate or entertain

In an information society, new techonologies have given birth to a lot of new appliances and equipments in people's life, and TV is one of them. We all should admit that TV has brought too much benefit to us, both in education and entertainment. In my opinion, however, even TV can always give us a lot of fun, TV would do better in serving as a media of education. In other words, I think that TV should be mainly used in education instead of entertainment.
Traditional education methods pose too much focus on paper-based media and blackboad, after the popularization of TV, the situation has been substantially changed. First, the teaching process can be more visible. For example. in chemistry class, the teacher wants to describe an explosion process. Evidently, TV program can be more effective than language description, by watching TV program students can get a more real feeling on what happens during an explosion. What is more, with the help of TV program, teaching can be costless than before. If the teacher want to show the surrounding in a desert to his or her students, there is no need to take students go to desert, students can look that very clearly in their classroom.
Besides, within an internet context, TV can be more effective that before, we can connect TV in classroom or even in home with interent, which means we can learn everywhere. For example, a student is ill and can not attend the class, and then he can turn on the TV in his room, with the help of internet and camera in classroom he can actually attend the class at the same time with his or her classmates. Furthermore, if he or she got a microphone, to give a response is also available. It sounds very interesting, however, with the development of new information technology I believe we can benefit more from such facilities.
Of course, we can not negate that TV can be used to entertain, such as movie on TV and some pop shows. With a more broad view, actually we can find that it all depends on the intention of us, If we pursue entertainment more then TV can be an entertainment machine. If we pose more importance on education, however, I believe TV can be more useful and valuable as one of the most important invention in 20th century.
So, in a word, I think that TV should be mainly used to educate and inform people, and then we can benefit from such a choice and intention in long term.
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haomiUID: 2219690

hi,it's me again, could you help me again, i think my begining is too colloquial, and the ending also is not very good, so,i'm expecting your reply!

thanks a lot

http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewth ... &extra=page%3D1

豆豆～UID: 2378384

同学。。。请单独发帖，并以投票形式:-) 我看你的积分能够发表投票了，呵呵:-)

谢谢合作:-)