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发表于 2007-10-20 21:45:13 |只看该作者

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已修改!!请查收:-0
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-21 19:19:41 |只看该作者
hi, i'm really a little shame for this post, not only for my poor writting, but also for asking your help so many times, but my exam is on this week, can you image how anxious i am, you know my speaking also is not very good, anyway, i hope i can make a little different in so short time.

thank you!

http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-752256-1-1.html

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Already revised, plz check :-)

Plz feel free to ask me to do anything, it's my pleasure:-)

GOOD LUCK@!
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-22 08:13:33 |只看该作者

祝贺豆豆成为实习斑斑~~

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-752477-1-1.html 麻烦帮我看看行吗?11,3就考了,怎么总是只能写到2个body。。。

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发表于 2007-10-22 16:31:21 |只看该作者
Congratulations~

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Already done, plz check :-)
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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wow, i'm so appreciated your words, that's really encouraging!

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发表于 2007-10-23 11:41:06 |只看该作者

豆豆能再帮我看篇么?

27号就要考了,文章越写越短,心里没底啊~

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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Already done, plz check:-)
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-23 22:46:35 |只看该作者
firstly, congrulations to you,
secondly, could you check my writting again, i'm not feel very well about this topic.
thanks

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发表于 2007-10-24 00:13:57 |只看该作者
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewth ... &extra=page%3D1
有时间请帮我改一下好吗?
非常感谢!!!
27号就考了,不过感觉写的不好啊

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发表于 2007-10-24 08:24:36 |只看该作者
怎么把作文传给LZ目前只会用站短…………

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发表于 2007-10-24 17:24:59 |只看该作者
原帖由 lqzcljl 于 2007-10-24 00:13 发表
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有时间请帮我改一下好吗?
非常感谢!!!
27号就考了,不过感觉写的不好啊


请问有时间帮我看看么~~~

谢谢啊

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发表于 2007-10-25 09:42:35 |只看该作者
豆豆,有时间可以帮忙看看这篇作文吗?谢谢了,因为积分还差点,没按格式,不好意思。多谢了
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发表于 2007-10-28 17:40:34 |只看该作者
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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