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发表于 2007-11-4 17:33:46 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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大家好,由于最近太忙,组织大家的任务由lestou代理,本贴不再更新.请大家关注:
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=765549&extra=page%3D1

我建立了群 49731517
可以进行讨论

补充一下:任务已经开始布置,任务由以前的JJ确定,大家可以提出意见,建议新成员着手开始练习,先不限时间,但一定要一气呵成,开始练了就好了.并且请大家注意群公告

其他想加入的,可以密切关注本贴,并且跟着完成作业. 我会将你们的ID加入代审批组员中, 仍然可以组织互改. 感谢大家支持,暂定成员如下

以下列出成员的名单
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ID                                     考试时间                                  联系方式
5-fish                         20080108                                  QQ: 21053839 EMAIL: 5-fish@163.com
tianling1985                20071228                                  qq:545559132 email:tianling1985@gmail.com
seafish0426                20080108                                  QQ:156983496 email:seafish0426@163.com
shuwenying                200803                                     crazycactus@163.com QQ790840799  msn:shuwenying827@hotmail.com
lestou                                                                         lestou@mails.ccnu.edu.cn    QQ147859133
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待审批组员:
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zyb_ice                                                                                  QQ:275640799 mail:zyb_ice@163.com
innocent                                                                         QQ303076289  liangzhe82@gmail.com
jilingaodi                                                                         email:jilingaodi@163.com QQ34649543
davidwang83                                                                QQ 285309803 email  1031910305@163.com
picassoni                   20080110                                  xd_ni@seu.edu.cn 41917335
buryhuang                20080226                                  QQ 178159017 msn: buryhuang@hotmail.com email: buryhuang@gmail.com
fuq_fly                               1.31                                  email: fuq_fly@hotmail.com qq:77239747

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初步计划如下(希望大家踊跃提出意见,可在自己的楼层提出意见,如专题写作,ARGUMENT同主题讨论等,也可以约定时间大家同时上线讨论,有什么事情可以PM我.)

开始时任务量较小,任务量会逐渐加大,最后阶段大家需要每天写一篇ISSUE,一篇ARGUMENT,并且修改两篇别人的作文.
大家把自己的作品贴在外面,在本贴里留下链接.

你对别人的作文有多认真,别人就会用同样的态度对待你的作文. 在最后说一下纪律,大家都要自觉完成任务.任何理由都不应该成为不完成任务的借口,一次不完成任务,暂停被修改一次,五次不完成任务,更换其他成员.

作业:
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11.6
请大家在11.6(星期二)前完成一篇ISSUE,一篇ARGUMENT.并完成相应的修改.首先希望大家在11.6 中午前完成自己的作文,以便别人修改. 这两篇作文都是很有代表性的...
ISSUE 3 "It is more important to allocate money for immediate, existing social problems than to spend it on long-term research that might help future generations."
ARGUMENT 180.The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the president of Acme Publishing Company. "Many other companies have recently stated that having their employees
take the Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity. .....

修改顺序:
5-fish ->tianling1985
tianling1985 -> seafish0426
seafish0426 -> shuwenying
shuwenying -> picassoni
picassoni -> buryhuang
buryhuang- > 5-fish

lestou->fuq_fly
lestou<-fuq_fly
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11.8
issue185"Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever
could."
ARGUMENT179 - The following is a memorandum written by the director of personnel to the president of the Cedar Corporation."It would be a mistake to rehire the Good-Taste ...

修改顺序:
5-fish <-tianling1985
tianling1985 < - seafish0426
seafish0426 <- shuwenying
shuwenying <- picassoni
picassoni <- buryhuang
buryhuang<- 5-fish
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11.10
issue87 "In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."
ARGUMENT193 - The Department of Education in the state of Attra recommends that high school students be assigned homework every day....

修改顺序:
5-fish ->seafish0426
tianling1985  -> shuwenying
seafish0426 -> picassoni
shuwenying -> buryhuang
picassoni -> fuq_fly
buryhuang ->lestou
fuq_fly->5-fish
lestou->tianling1985

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11.12
ARGUMENT207 - It is known that in recent years, industrial pollution....
Issue 46 while some leaders in government, sport, industry and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.

修改顺序:
5-fish <-seafish0426
tianling1985  <- shuwenying
seafish0426 <- picassoni
shuwenying <- buryhuang
picassoni <- fuq_fly
buryhuang <-lestou
fuq_fly<-5-fish
lestou<-tianling1985

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11.15
ARGUMENT238 - The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Mira Vista College to the college's board of trustees.
ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

修改顺序:
5-fish -> tianling1985
tianling1985->seafish0426
seafish0426->shuwenying
shuwenying->lestou
lestou->5-fish

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5-fish 的作业:
11.6
作业:
issue 3  https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=759515&extra=page%3D1
argument 180  https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=759618&extra=page%3D1
修改部分完成
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11.8
作业:
issue 87 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=762002&extra=page%3D1
argument 193https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=762003&extra=page%3D1

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11.10
作业:
issue 87 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=762002&extra=page%3D1
argument 193 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=762003&extra=page%3D1
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11.12
作业:

argument 207 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=762265&extra=page%3D1

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