Issue208【0906G背水一战三月小组】第9次作业 by yunfeiyang4ever

yunfeiyang4everUID: 2604917

208. "The way people look, dress, and act reveal their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."



【提纲】
论点：尽管对于一些人来说，眼神、穿着和动作能够表现出他们的态度和兴趣，但是一般来讲，并不能通过观察人的外表与行为来认识社会的理念和价值观。
1. 对于一部分人来讲，他们的外表与着装的确能够变现出他们的态度与兴趣；
2. 但是，有一些人并不能够通过他们的外表与衣着来判断他们的态度和兴趣；
3. 即使所有人的外表与行为都可以表现出他们的态度和兴趣，但是通过观察这些外在的因素并不能获得这个社会的思想与价值观；

【原文】
When it comes to a society’s ideas and values, the speaker asserts that people can judge it by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. I strongly disagree this conclusion but I take the fresh view to some extent for the claim that the way people look, dress and act reveal their attitudes and interests, as discussed below.

Admittedly, in some circumstance, the appearance of one person could show his interests. Providing the majority of academic professors in famous universities you met before, are they wearing unnoticeable clothes without combing when they enter the classroom? Or take a look at the artists. Are most of them clothed more or less distinct with other common people? And think about those photographers when you travel. Are they dressed a jacket with a large number of pockets? The chief reason of these people dressed specially is because either it could express their society status or it is comfort for their job that they are appealed to. For instance, professors would spend much time on studying in the campus so that they do not place much emphasis on their clothes. Also, a jacket with some pockets would supply more spaces where the photographers could put an amount of tapes and lenses which are necessary for them. Hence, regarding on some people’s appearance, generally speaking, could reflect their interests.

Other person, however, could not be evaluated by their dressed. For one thing, some people do not care their appearance and you might make a poor judgment of their attitude and interests through their clothes. To illustrate this point clearly, Socrates, a celebrated philosopher in ancient Greece, is an obvious example. Despite he was famous and appreciated by most people, he often ate poor food, dressed coarse clothes, and spelt on the ground, in avenues and even under the beam. For another thing, it is not available for some people to wear the clothes what they are interests in. In fact, employees must clothe the uniform in the enterprise and thus how can you determine what they are fond of. The same is true of students. Therefore, one’s attitudes and interests cannot be appraised only by his look, dress and act.

What is more, even assuming that people’s appearance and behavior could reflect their attitudes and interests, it is arbitrary to affirm that society’s beliefs and values could be judged by the appearance and behavior of its people. What is the most significant is we should aware of the definition of ideas and values of a society. In my view, society’s ideas and values are the commentary and comprehension of objections (includes person and issue) which are refereed by its people. From above definition, we could safely draw the conclusion that only public’s inside characters such as though and mind could demonstrate the beliefs and values of their society and thus this is nowhere more ridiculous than on the assertion that by observing the appearance and behaviors of the people we could know the society’s ideas and values.

In a word, while I acknowledge that sometimes one could evaluate people’s attitudes and interests by observing their appearance, one could never understand the society’s beliefs and values by doing this.

           

fireofnightUID: 2447280

When itcomes to a society’s ideas and values, the speaker asserts that peoplecan judge it(them) by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. Istrongly disagree with this conclusion but I take the fresh view to someextent for the claim that the way people look, dress and act revealtheir attitudes and interests, as discussed below.(这个转折可以在加工一下)

Admittedly,in some circumstance, the appearance of one person could show hisinterests. Providing the majority of academic professors in famousuniversities you met before, are they wearing unnoticeable clotheswithout combing when they enter the classroom? Or take a look at theartists. Are most of them clothed more or less distinct with othercommon people? And think about those photographers when you travel. Arethey dressed a jacket with a large number of pockets? （排比不错，不过教授的那个例子不太好..我身边穿得各种各样的教授都有....  可以说bussiness man什么的）The chief reasonof these people dressed(dressing) specially is because either it could expresstheir society status or it is comfort for their job that they areappealed to(remove 或者改称：that is the way they suppose to be appealed to --个人建议). For instance, professors would spend much time on studyingin the campus so that they do not place much emphasis on their clothes.Also, a jacket with some pockets would supply more spaces where thephotographers could put an amount of tapes and lenses which arenecessary for them（有点多余，真的要加个从句的话，可以说   , which makes their life easier 之类的，注意which前的逗号，是个非限定型定语从句）. Hence, regarding on some people’s appearance,generally speaking, could reflect their interests.

Otherperson, however, could not be evaluated by their dressed. For onething, some people do not care their appearance and you might make apoor judgment of their attitude and interests through their clothes. Toillustrate this point clearly, Socrates, a celebrated philosopher inancient Greece, is an obvious example. Despite he was famous andappreciated by most people, he often ate poor food, dressed coarseclothes, and slept on the ground, in avenues and even under the beam.For another thing, it is not available for some people to wear theclothes what they are interests in. In fact, employees must clothe theuniform in the enterprise and thus how can you determine what they arefond of. The same is true of(for) students. Therefore, one’s attitudes andinterests cannot be appraised only by his look, dress and act.
//感觉这段一气呵成，很通顺


What ismore, even assuming that people’s appearance and behavior could reflecttheir attitudes and interests, it is arbitrary to affirm that society’sbeliefs and values could be judged by the appearance and behavior ofits people. What is(Delete) the most significant is we should aware of thedefinition of ideas and values of a society. In my view, society’sideas and values are the commentary and comprehension of objections(includes person and issue) which are refereed by its people. Fromabove definition, we could safely draw the conclusion that onlypublic’s insidez(internal) characters such as though and mind could demonstratethe beliefs and values of their society and thus (这里段个句把,太长了.... Therefore)this is nowhere moreridiculous than on the assertion that by observing the appearance andbehaviors of the people we could know the society’s ideas and values.

In a word,while I acknowledge that sometimes one could evaluate people’sattitudes and interests by observing their appearance, one could neverunderstand the society’s beliefs and values by doing this.


云兄一整两篇issue..累死了...

再去给yang1989改...

swallow0118UID: 2927612

你考的是这篇吗？