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  Nowadays,in many universities and collges,where the mark of examination are regarded as the only assessment to the student's ability and definite and correct answer are taken as the ultimate goal of the education,the critical thinking has been consigned to oblivion.This objective is not expected in the educational field,thus,we should encourage the students to possess the skepticism because the skepticism in the educational field is part and parcel and it can prevent the student accepting the knowledge what they are taught passively.
  First of all,our aim in encourage the student's critical thinking is not to overturen the theories and techniques which were taught to them but to encourage them to learn these things more effectively and effeciently.What is the skepticism,which is not negation simple but the annotation in all-round and based on the actual conditions.To be specific,no matter the student agree or disagree a point ,they must have their personal attitudes and view.If they disagree the point,they must collect the dates from all kinds of books or information to prove their opinion adequately instead of be an armchair strategist;If  they approve the point,the sufficient reason must be necessary.In any case,during the process of critical thinking to the point,the experience makes a deeper impression in their mind with the result that they will retain what they have learned much longer.In addition,the students can improve their courage and ability of communication skills through the fearless skepticism. Thus,as we discuss above,the skepticism has a positive and principal effect to the sudents in the educational field,certainly including other fields and let us go on our discussion.
  Besides,the students are not going to be students for ever.They will be scholars,reseachers,white collars and so on.In the realm of business,it is vital to cultivate the critical thinking skills so that the time they face a problem which has no definiti and correct answer,and their mind will not freeze regarding what to be done.Further more the critical thinking can maintain that you mind will not rust and beat the traditional thinking and creat the new management ideas.In addition,skepticism can better help the leader analyze the situation of the economy and other corporation so that they can plan the right strategy.In the realm of innovation,the critical thinking is the key link to the sucess todays as it had been in the past or it will be in th future.Now let us bring the point to a more present and practical context,it can be given a concrete example ,Galilei,who is famous inventor and query the theory that free falling body of Aristotle with a firm hand and rewrite it with flying colors,his success is due to the critical thinking beyond question.In addition,to my way of thinking,the lifetime of Einstein likes a trilogy,porblem finding,problem posing and problem sloving,he rewrote the history of human being continualy through the duplicating the trilogy discussed above ,and so the skepticism is the  link key in the trilogy.From the typical examples,we can comprehend the critical thinking is the process of detection of defects and innovation in the scientific field.As we see,no matter in education field and scientific field or others,the skepticism has a indelible effect to them indeed.
  Going too far is as bad as not going enough,meaning that it has no use to query anything such the three theories of Newton or the free falling body and the question that why the sky is blue and so on,if we blindly  query these theory and we will waste a lot of time and energy to study it and the result will be meaningless.In addition,this action like teaching their grandmother to such eggs and meeting troubles half-way.Also the yea and nay is not the result what we expect.Thus,eyeless query will not be benefit to  the students even backfire and the students should draw a line in the skepticism.
  To sum up,critical thinking is an positive and principal factor in our education.We need the students can question and challenge what they teach reasonably instead of be locked by the knowledge contained in the textbook,if so,they will reap the benefit not only in the educational field but also any fields.
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发表于 2009-8-6 09:39:33 |只看该作者
自己顶一个。。。。希望大家给建议和分数。。:handshake

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发表于 2009-8-6 10:48:28 |只看该作者
:victory:再顶顶。。。。谢谢大家了,来点意见。。

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发表于 2009-8-6 16:03:49 |只看该作者
希望大家给个评价和分数啊。。。。5555

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发表于 2009-8-6 17:50:39 |只看该作者
长句这么多。感觉很多个句子都是 and。。。and。。。and...and
不过你的文章内容很丰富,结构也好。羡慕

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发表于 2009-8-6 18:16:37 |只看该作者
···为什么我感到一阵无序···

鄙视我的头脑吧···

如果主题句再写明白一点,如果句子间的衔接再好一点,会不会好很多呢。

内容的确丰富~~表扬

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发表于 2009-8-6 19:01:53 |只看该作者
5# emilyzcy
确实英语不行,不太懂好多。。。你觉得这篇文章能拿3分么~

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发表于 2009-8-6 19:02:43 |只看该作者
6# 大恶花


那大概会是什么个结果呢。。。

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发表于 2009-8-18 14:15:11 |只看该作者
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发表于 2009-8-20 09:22:18 |只看该作者
lz你那么想知道大概多少分的话,不如去ets网站,貌似有个在线评分的系统,还有,可以用erater评分试试~~
想要而未得到的,是因为你值得拥有更好的。

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