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2.7 独立写作
Some people think one's working is moreimportant than being with one's family.
It not rare to see many people always toobusy to concern their families. Obviously, this behavior will cause some familyproblem. Thus, for its drawbacks and defects , I strongly disagree with theidea that one's working is more crucial than being with one's family. Therenumerous reasons why I hold confidence in this idea, and I will name some asfollows.
First of all, if you take too many time onyour work, you will have less time to take care of your family like your wifeor your children. Apparently, It is harmful for your family relationship. Forinstance, when I was 5 years-old, my father always went home too late becausehe was working hard. He
never stayedwith me for only 1 hours even when I was ill. So when I play with my friends, Ialways avoid to talk about my father, because those uncomfortable experiencesmade me feel unhappy. Then,
I had aintense belief that I would take more time on my family
if I had been married.
Apart from the one I have mentioned above,another equally crucial aspect is that ,take more time on your work is harmfulfor your health, as a result your family member will worry about you. Obviously,the purpose you work hard is to earn more money to enhance the quality of yourlivelihood, but, you even have no chance to get a new job when you are ill. Forexample, my
neighbour Lee, he was adiligent man, when he got his first job, he
worked in his office day and night, even in weekend. After three months,without enough sleep and sport he got some serious diseases. Consequently, hewas fired because his boss did not believe he health will allow him to workregularly.
Aside from the foregoing two provisions,however, lie a deeper face that work also as a task of your life, because youhave no money to enhance your or your family's quality of livelihood. But, donot take it the most crucial thing in your life.
In conclusion, I do disagree with the ideatha one' working is more crucial than being with one' family. Especially forthe reason it broken family relationship and harmful for one's health. |
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