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发表于 2010-8-16 22:36:40 |显示全部楼层
恩,看了独立写作小组的规定,明天开始发帖!

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发表于 2010-8-17 09:36:11 |显示全部楼层
A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.   

Research centers are not only departments where researchers work in, but also have strong influence on the production and people's life in the area near this center. I think whether I should recommend my country to build a business research center or an agriculture research center depends on which part it will be built on. This is because our country is a very large one, different part plays different role for the whole society.

For the east part, which contains a lot of business centers of our country, I will recommend to build a business research center. Because many people in this area are business men, enterprisers, and aim to turn the productions and services into money. I think build a business research center will help them run their career better. On the one hand, the business people can get good instructions of management, production and so on. On the other hand, the research center can help the government to do some investment and analysis of the whole economical environment of this area. So, I think in the east part of my country, it is better to develop a new business research center.

For the west part of my country, I would like to recommend the university to build an agriculture research center. The west part is the agricultural area in our country. It provides the largest part of food, cotton, and flowers to the people. In addition, most people in this area take planting or feeding as their job and business. Therefore, I think it is better to develop an agricultural research center in the west part of my country. First, people in this area need help for their planting and feeding work. I have heard many complain about the lack of help and instruction from the farmers. Second, the farms also need advices for better organization of their work. For example, the research center can analysis what plants are suitable for the special climate condition in this area, or how to build a good production chain which can benefit all the parts within it.

To sum up, I'd like to say whether to develop a research center of business or agriculture depends on which part of our country the center will be build. Different area gives different answers.

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发表于 2010-8-18 09:07:20 |显示全部楼层
这不是8.17的作文

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发表于 2010-8-18 10:10:45 |显示全部楼层
你写的是哪道题阿

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发表于 2010-8-18 15:22:22 |显示全部楼层
3# frlender
很不好意思,我才参加的,因为我没看见每天还有固定的题目,就自己找了一个写的。您要是忙的话就从下一篇开始改吧。要是不忙包涵一下改改这篇吧。下次一定写指定的题目。

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发表于 2010-8-18 15:22:53 |显示全部楼层
4# qlshun
很不好意思,我才参加的,因为我没看见每天还有固定的题目,就自己找了一个写的。您要是忙的话就从下一篇开始改吧。要是不忙包涵一下改改这篇吧。下次一定写指定的题目。

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发表于 2010-8-18 20:55:24 |显示全部楼层
我改完了

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发表于 2010-8-19 10:11:25 |显示全部楼层
7# qlshun
非常感谢!!

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发表于 2010-8-19 10:13:47 |显示全部楼层
8.19的作文

大家使劲拍,我水平低,请多多指教!

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发表于 2010-8-20 15:18:26 |显示全部楼层
我也不知道我为啥写错题目了,我是看之前一个人的作文本上写得19号是这个题目, 下次注意!

改了一下~  加油!

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ANY JOBS! JUST F*CK IT!

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发表于 2010-8-20 15:41:03 |显示全部楼层
改完了

8.19小丸子的作文改 by frlender.doc

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发表于 2010-8-21 10:54:03 |显示全部楼层
小丸子8.21作文,请多指教!

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发表于 2010-8-22 08:31:44 |显示全部楼层
写得挺好的

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发表于 2010-8-24 17:33:47 |显示全部楼层
8.24小丸子作文,两日不写手就开始慢,思路也慢。看来练习是王道啊!
多谢大家指点!

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