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3. Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

There is no gainsaying / it cannot be denied / that we have benefited a lot from the development of modern science and technology. Specially, no one can turn around his head without seeing any cooking equipment, which has made cooking food more easier . Consequently, some people argue that this change have been changing our live better and better. However, some people refute the former's perspective, with the reason that this change might give rise to lots of harmful profits in our daily live.

It is a fact that food has become easier to prepare. But not all convenient things can exert a positive effect on our live. Especially, when the things have a very close relationship with our health./ when the things play a crucial role in our health. As we all know that fast food, like instant noodle, instant coffee, instant-frozen Jiaozi, must be produced with some kinds of antiseptics// preservatives, avoiding going bad. Doing this can be good for a longer preserving but cause a potential of being poisoned by these preservatives. Also, we can notice that a larger number of American are fat, and have a higher possibility of physical decease caused by those preservatives, especially for children. Those negative aspects, directly, are responsible to those fast food.

Another reason to explain why easily prepared food led to unwise changes to our live is that this changing may weaken our relationship between our family members. Because when I cook dinner, we can talk with my mother, my father, exchanging our feelings and enable to establish and persist a kindly atmosphere in our family. In this swift developing society, parents are busy for working, while children are burdened with the onerous lessonschoolwork. Thus, the time being with our family members becomes what significant to us. If we just simply do something to cook food, we may lost a lot of opportunities of feeling our parents' loves.

Making cooking food more easier, on some extent, can bring some benefits to us, such saving time to do other things, rescuing housewives from onerous household chores. So housewife need no stay in all the day to prepare food, they can go to library, meet friends, and improve themselves. To the salariat, they have not enough time to cook, so this change of simplifying the procedure of cooking food indeed saving a lot of time.

No matter what the good aspects is obvious, the disadvantages advantages overweight the advantage. It means that this change to prepare food more easily can not improve the way our live.

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3. Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.(426)

There is no gainsaying / it cannot be denied / that we have benefited a lot from the development of modern science and technology. Specially, no one can turn around his head without seeing any cooking equipment, which has made cooking food more easier . Consequently, some people argue that this change have been changing our live better and better. However, some people refute the former's perspective, with the reason that this change might give rise to lots of harmful profits in our daily live.

It is a fact that food has become easier to prepare. But not all convenient things can exert a positive effect on our live. Especially, when the things have a very close relationship with our health./ when the things play a crucial role in our health. As we all know that fast food, like instant noodle, instant coffee, instant-frozen Jiaozi, must be produced with some kinds of antiseptics// preservatives, avoiding going bad. Doing this can be good for a longer preserving but cause a potential of being poisoned by these preservatives. Also, we can notice that a larger number of American are fat, and have a higher possibility of physical decease caused by those preservatives, especially for children. Those negative aspects, directly, are responsible to those fast food.

Another reason to explain why easily prepared food led to unwise changes to our live is that this changing may weaken our relationship between our family members. Because when I cook dinner, we can talk with my mother, my father, exchanging our feelings and enable to establish and persist a kindly atmosphere in our family. In this swift developing society, parents are busy for working, while children are burdened with the onerous lessonschoolwork. Thus, the time being with our family members becomes what significant to us. If we just simply do something to cook food, we may lost a lot of opportunities of feeling our parents' loves.

Making cooking food more easier, on some extent, can bring some benefits to us, such saving time to do other things, rescuing housewives from onerous household chores. So housewife need no stay in all the day to prepare food, they can go to library, meet friends, and improve themselves. To the salariat, they have not enough time to cook, so this change of simplifying the procedure of cooking food indeed saving a lot of time.

No matter what the good aspects is obvious, the disadvantages advantages overweight the advantage. It means that this change to prepare food more easily can not improve the way our live.
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(寄托5.31) Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities?
On no account can we say that the dangerous, on some extent, activities have a strong attraction to some people. The most common activities, like bungee, can bring them lots of special experiences. The reasons why some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities can be explained from following aspects.

First, I think it is curiosity that makes dangerous sports or activities attractive. As we can see that almost every people have s strong curious sense of doing things that they have not done before, especially dangerous activities, so dangerous activities magically excite them to find the mystical feelings or experiences in them. We can find hundreds and thousands examples to reflect this. When we go to fairground where always be with at least several dangerous projects, some of us could firstly be attracted by the dangerous ones. And also some of us will do them. Because, as their concerned that this dangerous projects can bring them the feelings of exciting and enjoyable. For example, however, if you parents forbid you from playing those dangerous projects, you will accumulate this will, consequently which will be a burning desire to do those, since you want to get that special feelings. This is curiosity what lead to a tendency to do dangerous activities.

Second, by doing dangerous activities we can gain a achievement of conquering ourself. Take athletes for example, the athletes, like mountaineers, always have a burning perseverance and determination to challenge themselves thus conquer themselves. From their perspectives, the dangerous activities do not mean dangers but the improvements of physical condition and psychological diathesis. suppose you are in depression for a long time and always lack of confidence when you encounter some frustrations, the most efficient and effective way to overcome/surmount this flaw and convert yourself into another characters, good at dealing with difficult conditions and moulding a powerful psychological diathesis. In this point, dangerous always attract some people to do dangerous activities.

Last but not least, another equally important consideration is that, from doing dangerous activities, we can discover our potentials which are ignored. Most of time, these potentials are so crucial that have a key, active impact in our improvement.

Shortly, from what I have discussed some people are attracted by dangerous activities or sports always.  Dangerous activities contains lots of mysterious feelings and experiences, which can give raise to challenging ourself and enable to cause a self-improvement. Those are what I think attract some people to do dangerous activities or dangerous sports.

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2009 年11 月07 日北美
For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?(534)

Among hundreds and thousands kinds of factors to inspire a country in a high speed development steps, education can never be exaggerated to be regarded as a fatal/vital/crucial factor for the successful, efficient, and effective development to a country.  In recent decades, almost all countries begin increasing their budget on education, especially in China and India. However, arbitrarily to say that that government should allocate more money on the primary education,like the very young children education, than that of higher education is not wise, with the following reasons.

It is no deny that primary education to the very young children pay an crucial role in the development in economy, military, national defence, social instruction etc. But it is higher education, like university, that directly cultivate those young people, and then give a push driver to country civilization and social improvement. For example, can you have a possibility to avoid hearing some news about high techniques without any participation of young people, who even just graduate from university several years ago, mostly involving in manufacturing hi-tech machines. In order to instruct the young people, we need to pay a considerable large number of money to buy instruction equipment, and establish laboratories for them doing experiences. While, in elementary education, we will no be in a essential situation to buy some special instruction equipment or build some buildings.

Also, the primary education, even formative education, is the basis of the development, as countless people have ever said that "Education is the basis of a project of vital and lasting importance " . Although most people conform to it, it does not means that we must put more money in the education budget than the money spent on the university education. And what is most important is that we need to spend money on organizing forums, proseminars, visitatorial activities for our young people, improving lots of opportunities for them to gain experiences which will be helpful for their maturation. As we all know that very young children have little experience to do decision, control themselves when they encounter some dilemmas. So the main measure we use to cultivate our children is to put more energy on them other than more money. For example, one of my classmates named xiao li, who has a wealthy family and always has a large number of money, can buy almost everything if he want to do. As his farther think that money is the most important,and good thing inspire his son to study hard, however, he ignore that it is the attentions he put on his son, but not money can bring him a excellent son. So, when we talk about "how a country can educate her children to be outstanding ones?" our answer are putting more energy on them and instructing them cannily.

In a nutshell, as I am concerned that the government should admeasure more money in education budget to higher education like university education. As what I have discussed that we young people need more money to get a better environment to study, and then give a better service to the country's development, while the very young children just need more social energy or attention to cultivate them.

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On no account can we say that the dangerous, on some extent, activities have a strong attraction to some people. The most common activities（这里的运动应该是想说危险的运动吧？加个限定词会更好）, like bungee, can bring them lots of special experiences. The reasons why some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities can be explained from following aspects." J" K* z, n& p( E7 `5 E% A

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Second, by doing dangerous activities we can gain a achievement of conquering ourselves. Take athletes for example, the athletes, like mountaineers, always have a burning perseverance and determination to challenge themselves thus conquer themselves. From their perspectives, the dangerous activities do not mean dangers but the improvements of physical condition and psychological diathesis. Suppose you are in depression for a long time and always lack of（去掉） confidence when you encounter some frustrations, the most efficient and effective way to overcome this flaw and convert yourself into another characters（么有明白什么意思）, good at（这句话没有动词啊。。。去掉good at 加一个is） dealing with difficult conditions and moulding a powerful psychological diathesis. In this point, dangerous always attract some people to do dangerous activities. - u4 r# C) s: M
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Last but not least, another equally important consideration is that, from doing dangerous activities, we can discover our potentials which are ignored. Most of time, these potentials are so crucial that having a key, active impact in our improvement. ; J, V2 T  @  ~7 F" G

Shortly, from what I have discussed some people are attracted by dangerous activities or sports always(一般放在are之后吧).  Dangerous activities contains lots of mysterious feelings and experiences, which can give raise to challenging ourselves and enable to cause a self-improvement. Those are what I think attract some people to do dangerous activities or dangerous sports.


为什么第一个写得那么长，有点罗嗦，而最后一个论点写得那么略呢？
还有，最后总结段只写了一个原因？。。。
逻辑框架什么的都还不错，语言什么的也不错~
有异议的话欢迎联系~

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6# xiangtuo 多谢豆豆....

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5. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.(06.03--485)

In no circumstance can we say that some thing can only bring benefits to us or only be harmful to us. We must treat every thing differently under the different situations. As for this plan to establish a large factory in my community, there are several merits and demerits for the distinctive perspective.

First, establishing a large factory can brings a huge number of operation posts, which will absorb at least a large portion of the local young people. By doing this we also can resist the loss of local labour resource, simultaneously can attract other outstanding talents. From this point, building factory is building our community----developing our community. For example, had the large factory been established near community, whatever young people or laid-off workers almost could have a opportunity to work. Consequently, we can have a stable income, which can improve our live level. So the young people need not to find jobs in other developed cities. Then, for one hand, the factory can have a stable humans resources; for another hand, the main force young people may put their attentions on the local development, especially factory and community.

At second place, large factory can leads to a tendency of improvement in severe industry, education, infrastructure construction, communication and transportation. Since a large factory can produce a mass of products, this requires government to build the relevant accessorial/attaching infrastructures, such as road construction for products freightage, enabling improving local community's live condition. And meanwhile, owing the large factory can attract lots of trades, there will be a dramatical demands in serve, like instruction school for expertise training, and hotel for accomodation.  From this point view,our community can benefit a lot from the factory. To some extent, duilding a factory near our community is a win-win plan.

As what people have said that everything has its own special disadvantages, building a large factory also give rise to some demerits.with the development of the factory, in no situation can we avoid contaminating local clear water and fresh air, and even have a inconvenience on some aspects of daily live. For example, when the traffic condition has been improved, there may be more cars on the road and thus may make lots of noise in day time. What's more, the increasing number of trucks for transporting products again can also be a threat to our personal safety. In spite of what the merits the factory can bring to us, we should keep a eye on the demerits, especially the potential disadvantages as I discussed.

In conclusion, although building large factory near my community may have a lots of disadvantages to us, I still have a positive attitude on this issue to support this factory plan. Because we can solve all those negative problems by setting several rules, like limiting the speed of trucks in the certain time. When the disadvantages can be control, there are merits only.

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唉，被人说怕了，要是有异议我们讨论讨论啊，别骂我就行了。

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纯属个人意见，仅供参考；如有不当，欢迎交流讨论:)

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hcp715多谢你的建议和意见。呵呵...你说的都对，我最近是尝试着用一些词语，还有就是用一些叫复杂的句式...可是效果不是很好。还有对于逻辑方面有时我是有点不明确，其中多多少少有点瘦中文的思维影响。我以后会更加注意的，文章我会在更爱的，希望你能在给我看看.辛苦你了。祝好运，好心情。 11# hcp4715

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(寄托06.08) Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities?

On no account can we say that, on some extent, the dangerous activities have a strong attraction to some people. The most common activities, like bungee, can bring them lots of special experiences. The reasons why some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities can be explained from following aspects.

First, I think it is curiosity that makes dangerous sports or activities attractive. As we can see that almost every people have s strong curious sense of doing some that they have not done before, especially dangerous activities, so dangerous activities magically excite them to find the mystical feelings or experiences. We can find hundreds and thousands examples reflect this. When we go to fairground where always be with at least several dangerous projects, some of us could firstly be attracted by the dangerous ones. And also some of us will do them. Because, as their concerned that this dangerous projects can bring them the feelings of exciting and enjoyable. For example, however, if you parents forbid you from playing those dangerous projects, you will accumulate this will, consequently which will be a burning desire to do those, since you want to get that special feelings. This is curiosity what lead to a tendency to do dangerous activities.

Second, by doing dangerous activities we can gain a achievement of conquering ourself. Take athletes for example, the athletes, like mountaineers, always have a burning perseverance and determination to challenge themselves thus conquer themselves. From their perspectives, the dangerous activities do not mean dangers but the improvements of physical condition and psychological diathesis. suppose you are in depression for a long time and always lack of confidence when you encounter some frustrations, the most efficient and effective way to overcome/surmount this flaw and convert yourself into another characters being good at dealing with difficult conditions and moulding a powerful psychological diathesis. In this point, dangerous always attract some people to do dangerous activities.

Last but not the least, another equally important consideration is that, from doing dangerous activities, we can discover our potentials which are ignored. Most of time, these potentials are so crucial that it could give rise to a key, active impact in our improvement.

Shortly, from what I have discussed, tsome people are attracted by dangerous activities or sports largely for the mysterious feelings, challenging and potentials. Dangerous activities contains lots of mysterious feelings and experiences, which can lead to a challenging to ourself and enable to cause a self-improvement. Those are what I think attract some people to do dangerous activities or dangerous sports.

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(6.9)2009 年11 月07 日北美
For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?(534)
Among hundreds and thousands kinds of factors to inspire a country in a high speed development steps, education can never be exaggerated to be regarded as a fatal/vital/crucial factor for the successful, efficient, and effective development to a country. In recent decades, almost all countries begin increasing their budget on education, especially in China and India. However, arbitrarily to say that that government should allocate more money on the primary education,like the very young children education, than that of higher education is not wise, with the following reasons.
It is no deny that primary education to the very young children pay an crucial role in the development in economy, military, national defence, social instruction etc. But it is higher education, like university, that directly cultivate those young people, and then give a push driver to country civilization and social improvement. For example, can you have a possibility to avoid hearing some news about high techniques without any participation of young people, who even just graduate from university several years ago, mostly involving in manufacturing hi-tech machines. In order to instruct the young people, we need to pay a considerable large number of money to buy instruction equipment, and establish laboratories for them doing experiences. While, in elementary education, we will no be in a essential situation to buy some special instruction equipment or build some buildings.

Also, the primary education, even formative education, is the basis of the development, as countless people have ever said that "Education is the basis of a project of vital and lasting importance " . Although most people conform to it, it does not means that we must put more money in the education budget than the money spent on the university education. And what is most important is that we need to spend money on organizing forums, proseminars, visitatorial activities for our young people, improving lots of opportunities for them to gain experiences which will be helpful for their maturation. As we all know that very young children have little experience to do decision, control themselves when they encounter some dilemmas. So the main measure we use to cultivate our children is to put more energy on them other than more money. For example, one of my classmates named xiao li, who has a wealthy family and always has a large number of money, can buy almost everything if he want to do. As his farther think that money is the most important,and good thing inspire his son to study hard, however, he ignore that it is the attentions he put on his son, but not money can bring him a excellent son. So, when we talk about "how a country can educate her children to be outstanding ones?" our answer are putting more energy on them and instructing them cannily.

In a nutshell, as I am concerned that the government should admeasure more money in education budget to higher education like university education. As what I have discussed that we young people need more money to get a better environment to study, and then give a better service to the country's development, while the very young children just need more social energy or attention to cultivate them.

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