：[TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 lulufriend第十一次作业]

lulufriendUID: 2612617

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?(08.5.31)
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People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between using own knowledge or experience to handle with a problem and asking others for advice. When facing with an obstacle or a dilemma, people will rely on some power to pull themselves out of trouble. As far as I am concerned, it would be a little bit haste to say that using own capacity is better, or vice versa.

Addressing questions with own knowledge and experience can help people to be independent, instead of counting on other illusions that the luck will finally come. It is quite significant for a child to become an adult to use his own power to stand up and make things work. Set myself as an example. When I was a little girl just around 7 years old, finding that math to me just like a disaster, I felt terrible to do the math homework. So I always turned to my classmates for help. However, I knew that I did not improve any more in this way. No until my math teacher observed that and forced me to do the homework all by myself could I achieve such great jobs today with my ability on logic. Hence, I strongly cling to the belief that using own strength to solve problems benefits oneself a lot.

However, it takes several advantages to ask other people’s suggestions, expecially when we are encountering with some situations we have not seen before. Other people’s advice is valuable and helpful for us by then to get access to the answer to a specific question. Moreover, it would do us a favor to know that some people are right behind us and support us, which relaxes our mind in adversities.

In brief, which way should we choose depend on situations which are varies and changing all the time. First of all, it is our obligations to get ourselves ready for all the happening troubles, just like the old saying, success falls on the prepared person. Whereas we are not familiar with the conditions, we may turn to others assistance which would be a better way.

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People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between using own knowledge or experience to handle with a problem and asking others for advice. When facing with an obstacle or a dilemma, people will rely on some power to pull themselves out of trouble. As far as I am concerned, it would be a little bit haste to say that using own capacity is better, or vice versa.（拉丁语…好强啊。是句型么？）% J'

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Addressing questions with own knowledge and experience can help people to be independent, instead of counting on other illusions that the luck will finally come. It is quite significant for a child to become an adult to use（我觉得这一句to多了一点，你看用using或者who can use会不会好一点） his own power to stand up and make things work. Set myself as an example (好像用take sb. as an example多一点). When I was a little girl just around 7 years old, finding that math to me just like a disaster（math is just like a disaster to me, to me可以放在前面，但是好像从句里少了谓语）, I felt terrible to do the（应该不用加the）math homework. So I always turned to my classmates for help.


However, I knew that I did not (would not表过去将来) improve any more in this way. No until my math teacher observed that and forced me to do the homework all by myself could I achieve such great jobs today with my ability on logic. Hence, I strongly cling to the belief that using own strength to solve problems benefits oneself a lot.
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However, it takes several advantages to ask other people’s suggestions, expecially when we are encountering with（encounter是及物动词，不用with）some situations we have not seen before. Other people’s advice is valuable and helpful for us by then to get access to the answer to a specific question. Moreover, it would do us a favor to know that some people are right behind us and support us, which relaxes our mind in adversities.! m  T/ Q& Y9 U- r5 v


In brief, which way should we choose depend on situations which are varies and changing(这两个词不是同一个意思么) all the time. First of all, it is our obligations to get ourselves ready for all the（不要the）happening troubles, just like the old saying, success falls on the prepared person. （觉得这句不地道，在群里问了，有人翻译了一句，你参考参考Success is always prepared for those who have been prepared.）Whereas we are not familiar with the conditions, we may turn to others（在这补个for） assistance which would be a better way.



偶很仔细地改了，不过水平有限，呵呵，尽力了。词汇转换得还不错，不象我老人家想不出几个词来。不过你可能在写的时候就忘记了一些细节，以后留心O(∩_∩)O~。中立的态度很难写，而且你还是第二词写，佩服！ 不过如果是中立的话，那么第三段可能相对第二段来说，可能给个例子会更好 END

桑梓UID: 2613051

People seldom agree with each other even in (on) such trivial issues as preference between using own knowledge or experience to handle with (handle后好像不用加with)a problem and asking others for advice. When facing with an obstacle or a dilemma, people will rely on some power to pull themselves out of trouble. 好像和上下文联系不明显 最好再解释下As far as I am concerned, it would be a little bit haste to say that using own capacity is better, or vice versa..
Addressing questions with own knowledge and experience can help people to be independent, instead of counting on other illusions that the luck will finally come. It is quite significant for a child to become an adult to use his own power to stand up and make things work. Set myself as an example. When I was a little girl just around 7 years old, finding that math to me just like a disaster（句子结构有些问题）, I felt terrible to do the math homework. So I always turned to my classmates for help. However, I knew that I did not improve any more in this way. No until （Not until）my math teacher observed that and forced me to do the homework all by myself could I achieve such great jobs today with my ability on logic. Hence, I strongly cling to the belief that using own strength to solve problems benefits oneself a lot.
However, it takes several advantages（take advantage 是利用的意思 可用There are several advantages） to ask other people’s suggestions, expecially when we are encountering with some situations we have not seen before. Other people’s advice is valuable and helpful for us by then to get access to the answer to a specific question. Moreover, it would do us a favor to know that some people are right behind us and support us, which relaxes our mind in adversities.

In brief, which way should we choose depend on situations which are varies（Variable） and changing all the time. First of all, it is our obligations to get ourselves ready for all the happening troubles, just like the old saying, success falls on the prepared person. Whereas we are not familiar with the conditions, we may turn to others assistance which would be a better way
小路的复杂句式用的很多 词汇转换也好好啊 不像我只会用简单句然后不停重复同一个单词~~~~~