lszllcy535 发表于 2014-6-19 23:11
6.19的哈
First? Glorious~
TASK1 这一题楼主的前半部分好流畅啊,25'的what's,50’would destruct you? ...
东方欲晓bnu 发表于 2014-6-20 23:56
task 1
one 9' suits 19' many 26'
发音很好,比较标准。加上语调和停顿会更好些。 个人感觉说一个differ ...
lanbor22 发表于 2014-7-2 19:43
7.1
task2
6s always telling the truth would hurt the person you learn还是know?
vhryc 发表于 2014-7-3 17:00
7.3 楼主说的挺好的呢~~
task1 have the willing (应该是be willing to do吧), lecture 的发音感觉不太 ...
dafen5434 发表于 2014-7-22 18:40
task1:
感觉一开始有点啰嗦...if my friend want get better grades 完全可以省去,节省出时间后面可以说 ...
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