6.1
Task 1.
第二点的 There are a lot work require computers,而不是need
essays读错了
edit读错了, project读错了
Task 2.
cost读错了
第二点清晰点
It will waste water if we wash the clothes by hand.
Task 3
建议加一点结构词
比如
The woman is in support with this proposal for two reasons.
Firstly,
Secondly,
记得托福是presentation, 条理条理
Task 4
girl这个单词读错了
机构太乱了,让你感觉你在叙述这个现象。
这道题我的建议
1,高度概括这个概念,你做的没问题
2,用简单的话这个example说清楚,这点做得不好
比如 The professor uses his own example to corroborate this concept. (这句话可以省略) The professor once taught eight year old kids and he set rule that students have to raise hands before answering others questions so all the kids will have the same opportunities to participate.
One girl in his class never raised hand before answering questions and this is frustrating for other kids. One day. xxxxxxxx (not fair之类的staff) 后面你说的没问题,前面稍微啰嗦。
Task 5
第五题加一点连接词
比如
For me I will choose the second option for two reasons.
Firstly,
Secondly.
Task 6
influence直接这题可能就是fair,题目问的是change. 看清楚 change
第一句直接讲 There are two changes (这句话都可以省略掉)
congregate这个单词读错了
One change is the shift of center for xxxx