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发表于 2011-3-18 23:28:27 |只看该作者

62# Go2011Go Do you agree with the following statement? High school students should take a course on basic economics.

Personally, I believe that high school students should take a course on basic economics for its important role(s) in our future life. After all, we live in a commercialized world in which everyone could not[nonperson,会不会简洁点？呵呵] avoid the economics[economic] problems, thus learn[ing] some basic economics is necessary. What’s more, given that high school students already have learnt some related knowledge, it is possible for them to learn basic economics well.
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Everyone knows the importance of economics in our life, but not everyone knows exactly what economics is. Why? Because many of us do not have the chances to learn the basic courses of economics. In this case, I would like to say that the high school students should grasp the chance to learn some fundamental concepts and principles[of economics]. It will benefit them a lot. Just take the tax as an example, as a citizen, we all have to pay tax in order to support [guarantee]the regular function of government [function well 删掉，好像有点不通] and maintain the public facility. However, there are many cases in which people do not actually know how much they have paid, whether the current tax system is reasonable and [according to你是要表达符合法律的公正吗？我觉得用agree with更好，呵呵] agree with the law of justice, let alone fighting for their own rights. If, however, we have been educated in basic economics, the situation will be different [很不错的表达]and we will be able to think critically and not be fooled by government.

Some people may say: the economics is too difficult for high school students to master. I admit that economics is not so easy for？ its theories and statistics. However, the knowledge have been learnt by high school students enable them to master the basic economics well. 跟前面的意思有点脱节During the high school, most students have a very solid foundation on mathematics and related field, with these knowledge, they could understand those basic concepts such as the costs, pay-off etc[easily加个副词可能会好一些]. What more, the historical knowledge would also help high school students to understand the development of economics and help they figure out why free-market is the best strategy and monopoly is necessary in some critical [particular会好些吗？]areas.

Equipped with basic economic knowledge, student would not only have the chance to manage their own financial problems well--because they know the relationship between income and expenditure; they could also have a better understanding of society and be a more responsible citizen in future, because most social relationships, such as social class, politic issues, are essentially economical problems. Thus, I strongly agree with the statement.
总体感觉你的基础很不错的，层次很分明，语言表达也很到位，我只是尽最大努力提一些小的建议，呵呵….

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