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Recently, a discussion about whether people could learn about life by playing sports has been heated(很没意思的套话), and different people may have different opinions according to their various backgrounds, emotions and characters. From my perspective of view, I do agree with the title statement that playing sports would teach people lessons about life, though sometimes we do not wake up to the roles that sports play in our usual life.
First of all, sports teach people the idea that people should be persistent with their dreams and vision and never give them up. In any kind of sports match, you can hardly see an athlete give up during the competition even if he or she get some injuries or make some mistakes which obviously means there are few possibilities to win the game. It seems to be no meaningful(adj) to consist(continue?) in that kind of competition. (however转折让步么?这里的转折让步很牵强)Thank to the persistance, the athlete could obtain precious experience which might make him or her win next time. In a same way, people ought to insist in their goals in their life whatever the difficulties are, because the difficulties or failure of this time could guide people success next time.
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In addition, people could learn from sports cooperation which is the essential part of success. For instance, in a basketball game, the most important thing is cooperation and everyone in the team is significant. In any case, there is no team could win all the time without the collaboration with others. Some sports attach the importance to the cooperation and exemplify people in many other kinds of fields. Without teamwork, students could not do well in their team project; also(neither) without cooperation, businessman could not come to agreement and succeed in business.
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Moreover, sports can help ???少主语 foster the development of the ability of organization. Especially in team sports, the mission of each athlete should be well organized so as to avoid disorder and improve the teamwork efficiency in competition. For example, soccer game is a typical sports, the strategy of which needs to be well organized beforehand. It is similar in our life; people should make a circumspect plan and organization for their work, project and so forth.& U' ^+ F: n$ C9 u: i/ Y" E' l' f3 a
All in all(头等重要的东西), in accordance with what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that, although people could learn from many things, sports are obvious; for a person insisting, cooperating and organizing are considerably important qualities that sports could teach in one’s life.个人感觉总结偏离题意。题目是通过playing sports人们学到很多xxxx。
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