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[作文] iBT作文29分,每天改两篇作文回馈gter~申请正酣,活动暂停,请谅解! [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-11-19 21:50:24 |只看该作者
120# wuqian0801

呵呵,一般400-450就很好了,不要超过500,不然就没有时间回去检查了。
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LZ, 我马上要考了,,麻烦你再帮我看看吧,我的作文在116楼,谢谢啦.前天就提交上去了

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12月5号就考了~~~一星期前发了2篇作文(70#和73#的)~~~帮忙赶紧改一下吧~~~跪谢啊~~好人有好报啊~~~

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lz真好真好!

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拜读一记~~~~~~~

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题目:Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

作文:Nowadays, science and technology have improved to this point that every aspect of our lives is influenced, including transportation, communication, eating and so on. As far as eating is concerned, the easy with which we prepare food has definitely improve the way we live.

Easy prepared food is time-saving. All of us know well that we live in this kind of world that we not only work fast, communicate fast but also we do eat fast. Fortunately, food has become easier to prepare, which helps a lot to save our time to do other things. We can just put the frozen food into the micro-wave oven, and after five minutes we can eat while reading today’s newspaper. If you only have half an hour during the lunch break, what you should do is rush to the KFC or the McDonald to invigorate yourself.

Since the food become easier to prepare, our meals have more variety. Different people prefer different flavors, and not even members in one family can reach a consensus. If it takes several hours to prepare just one dish, people in one family will have to eat it, no matter they relish it or not. However, that’s not the case. What really happen is that we can cook five or even more dishes in one hour or two. With this easiness, one family can have dishes satisfying everyone in one single dinner.

Last but not least, we begin to have the ability to eat healthier. There are many people must eat special food, such as low-calorie food, low-fat food and low-cholesterol food, because they want to keep fit or they have certain diseases like cardiovascular disease. Now we have easy access to reduce the calorie, fat or the cholesterol in food. Not only these people who have special requirement, but normal people need to balance their diet to be more wholesome. Now, we can balance the meet, vegetable, the dairy food that we ingest to assure that every certain nutrition is obtained.

To sum up, food has become easier to prepare benefiting all of us in saving time, bring more variety, and being healthier. It is fundamental for us to pursue happiness.

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