本帖最后由 rouor2003 于 2009-11-10 22:04 编辑
谢谢好心的楼主了,这是我的作文The advantages and disadvantages of my city
Living in Beijing, the capital of china, I appreciateit a lot, although I dislike it at the very beginning. My best friend lily wantsto work in Beijing after graduating from Qinghai. I believe the followstatement will give her a miniature of this metropolitan.
The betray traffic and constant traffic jams wouldtrouble her a lot. With the increasing number of population, the traffic jamduring the rush time is become a serious problem. The construction of newthruway obviously can’t catch up with the number of car which is accumulated bymultiplying .Since she come from a small city where seldom was her trapped bytraffic jams, she probably not accustom to this situation. Besides, Beijing isalmost the largest city in china. When someone first come to Beijing, theyusually miss the way. Lily is lack of orientation sensitive so to find theright way to go is a big problem to her. However ,the public bus system and thesignal system is well developed in Beijing since the Olympic game. It will doher a lot of benefit to familiar with the traffic of Beijing.
The price of commodity here is extremely high,especially when she is going to rent a house, the price here is triple thanthat of Qinghai. It is true that Beijingshare variety of goods more than any other small cities. It is also true that thecost here is more than others. Nevertheless, except the rent price, she willenjoy more of the variety since she like to buy beautiful dresses, and as faras I know the dresses in Xizhimen is so cheap that you can’t imagine at thesame time most of the dress is in a fashion style which suit to this youngladies.
The great advantage of Beijing is the countless opportunity,not only the job opportunity but also the recreation opportunity for it enjoysnumerous exhibitions and performs. That is why my friend decides to work here. Sheis a ambition girl, doing her best to purchase a better life. Working in such acompetitive environment can strength herself and won herself a high salary,most important she can show her talent in language skills. She is going to workin a French company as an interpreter. I want to give her a surprise that Monet, who is a famous French painter ,will exhibit his precious art works inBeijing. She is especially fond of his impressionism style so much. And shewould never meet this opportunity in other city. This is really a big news for her. |