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Hey, yo. I guess that people who know me don't come here anymore and have already reached their dreams (wish you all good luck), and people who come here don't really know me... Haven't been here for a long time, I missed everything.

K, as a New Year gift, I would like to promise that I will help everyone who post their essays in my thread in the day of Dec. 31st, 2008, Beijing Time. Hope it helps.

Happy New Year everyone!

For those who recognize me, you're more than welcome to just post anything in this thread. I missed you all.

P.S. Only one essay per person plz lol

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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.
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thanks a lot!!

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Done.
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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Done. Good luck!
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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Done. Good luck!
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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Did the last one. You are really good at writing, good luck!
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KK. I'll try to look at it asap. 1.5 hours to go, go ppl lol

I guarantee that you guys will get feedback from me by tomorrow. Thanks for your support!
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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☆Jelly月♂作文求LZ拍

我马上就要考试了,最近这2天限时间30分写的2个作文,希望lz可以帮我看下
】☆Jelly月♂12月31日作文
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-906184-1-1.html

】☆Jelly月♂12月30日作文
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-905998-1-1.html

谢谢啦!
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hahahaha. i needa sleep........


no one wants help with his essays? seems like ppl are getting more independent lol gd gd
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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好吧。。。那不拍照了~~~半夜三更打电话找小臭豆改PS~~~呼啦啦~~
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.....is it necessary....?
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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