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本帖最后由 idealibt 于 2012-1-8 22:49 编辑
2012年1月4日
【A or B】:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they livein big cities than in the countryside.
It is true that people can take good care of their family members if only they try the best and contribute to it no matter where they are, it is also true that people can achieve this better when they live in big cities rather than in the countryside. Living in big cities provides us better material and spiritual life, as well as infrastructures.
First of all, there are more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in small town, and the qualities of the position are better. Therefore, people working in big cities earn much more than their counterpart who live in the countryside. They can afford high kindergarten fee of the children, sent their parents to enjoy the massage when they feel uncomfortable physically, or take the family going abroad several times a year at will. Wonderful live in big cities allows people take good care of their family members materially.
Meanwhile, living in big cities also offers more opportunities to get in touch with various spiritual lives. For those who live in a small town, it would take hours for them to go to the theater, museum and art exhibition, also, there are fewer chances to join academic reports or seminars held by universities and scientific institutions. On the contrary, people can bring their family members plenty of opportunities to enjoy their spiritual lives.
Finally but not the least, big cities have better infrastructures which provide residents plenty of convenience. For example, the most important thing in every family member’s live is healthy. Medical facilities in the countryside in not advanced enough and it may waste precious time for saving lives especially when emergency surgery is needed. People living in big cities can send their children to famous schools of high education qualities; they take subway to the office which is environmentally friendly; the list goes on and on. In all, I support the idea that people can take care of the family better in big cities.
2012年1月8日 第一次修改
【A or B】:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People can take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside.
It is true that people can take good care of their family members if only they try their best and contribute to it no matter where they are; it is also true that people can achieve this better when they live in big cities rather than in rural areas. Living in big cities provides us better material and spiritual life, as well as systematic infrastructures.+
First of all, there are more job opportunities readily available in metropolis than in small towns, and the qualities of the positions are much better. As a result, people working in big cities earn more money than their counterpart who live in the countryside. For example, they are capable of affording high kindergarten fee of the children, send their parents to enjoy the massage when they feel uncomfortable physically, or take the family going abroad for sightseeing several times every year at will. Thanks to the higher salary in the big cities, it allows people take good care of their family members materially.
Meanwhile, living in big cities also offers more opportunities to get in touch with various spiritual lives. For those who live in a small town, it may take them hours to go to the theater, museum or art exhibition, also, there are fewer chances to join academic reports or seminars held by universities and scientific institutions. On the contrary, living in the downtown brings people plenty of opportunities to enjoy their spiritual lives with family members.
Finally but not the least, big cities have better infrastructures which provide residents pretty much convenience. Take healthy, the most important thing for every family member, for example, medical facilities in the countryside in not advanced enough and it may waste precious time for saving lives when emergency surgery is needed. As far as education is concerned, people living in big cities can send their children to famous schools of high education qualities. Meanwhile, they could go to the office or dating location by subway which is environmentally friendly; the list goes on and on. In all, I support the idea that people can take care of the family better in urban areas. |
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