2009雪候鸟作文贴

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26大学应不应该要求所有的学生都学习除了本国文化以外的文化？
Accompanied by the increasingly globalization , there is a heated debate on whether all college students should be required to learn foreign culture. According to different backgrounds, personalities, and life values, the statements usually are divergent. As far as I am concerned, I firmly contend that it is wise and urgent to compel college students to learn different cultures besides our own and the conspicuous reasons are as follows.

The decisive factor that I want to put at the very beginning is that learning diverse cultures opens up a window for young generations to fully understand the world, and in turn, will benefit our future development. As most of us growing up under our own cultures and customs , more or less, our mind influenced by some stereotype values. As a result, regarding some nowadays emergencies, we are not capable of handling it with ease. In this sense, we do need mind training, and of course, learning foreign  countries' cultures is a good way to  cultivate ourselves. For, we can see or judge particular things from a different point by learning others' experiences. By understanding and thinking about foreign cultures deeply , we can widen our horizon and then when confronted by problems in work or study, there might be a preferable  solution for choosing. Thus learning foreign cultures can enrich our experiences and are beneficial for future.


Another essential aspect accounting for my propensity lies in the fact that the tendency of the society advancement needs every common citizen to understand foreign cultures. Nowadays we can hardly imagine one can survive in a world without any trace of foreign cultures. Examples as such are countless, like TV  programs, movies, newspapers and internet, foreign element included in those medias has taken a tremendous important role in our life that actually being a natural aspect of our own. Scarcity of fundamental knowledge about foreign culture, it is impossible to adapt  to this world for anyone else. In short, in order to better adjust ourselves in the background of globalism, It is advisable to learn foreign cultures.

However, we have to admit that there are someone exceptional who shows little interest in foreign cultures that requiring those students to learn alien culture is tedious even harmful to them. So, school is responsible to reasonably make the curriculum to meet different needs of students.

In brief, after discussed above, considering the foreign culture plays in our future development as well as meets the times needs. There is no hesitate to claim that college students need know more about foreign cultures .

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26号作业是历史课哇~~

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Accompanied by the increasingly globalization , there is a heated debate on whether all college students should be required to learn foreign culture. According to different backgrounds, personalities, and life values, the statements usually are divergent. As far as I am concerned, I firmly contend that it is wise and urgent to compel college students to learn different cultures besides our own and the conspicuous reasons are as follows.  M7 D, H* n# R4 @! N  }+ C

3 Y: E; a2 }9 _$ ~' b8 GThe decisive factor that I want to put at the very beginning is that learning diverse cultures opens up a window for young generations to fully understand the world, and in turn, will benefit our future development. As most of us growing up under our own cultures and customs , more or less, our mind influenced by some stereotype values－好词. As a result, regarding some nowadays emergencies, we are not capable of handling it with ease. In this sense, we do need mind training, and of course, learning foreign  countries' cultures is a good way to  cultivate ourselves. For, we can see or judge particular things from a different point by learning others' experiences. By understanding and thinking about foreign cultures deeply , we can widen our horizon and then when confronted by problems in work or study, there might be a preferable  solution for choosing. Thus learning foreign cultures can enrich our experiences and are beneficial for future.－感觉说理太多了，外国人不懂的，举些具体的例子吧
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1 X1 ^9 b0 o3 R' OAnother essential aspect accounting for－好词 my propensity lies in the fact that the tendency of the society advancement needs every common citizen to understand foreign cultures. Nowadays we can hardly imagine one can survive in a world without any trace －好词of foreign cultures. Examples as such are countless, like TV  programs, movies, newspapers and internet, foreign element included in those medias has taken a tremendous important role in our life that actually being a natural aspect of our own－这句话结构好复杂. Scarcity of fundamental knowledge about foreign culture, it is impossible to adapt  to this world for anyone else. In short, in order to better adjust ourselves in the background of globalism, It is advisable to learn foreign cultures.
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However, we have to admit that there are someone exceptional who shows little interest in foreign cultures that requiring those students to learn alien culture is tedious even harmful to them. So, school is responsible to reasonably make the curriculum to meet different needs of students.－不够充分
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1 m1 K0 N* B/ [  g2 AIn brief, after discussed above, considering the foreign culture plays in our future development as well as meets the times needs. There is no hesitate－hesitation to claim that college students need know more about foreign cultures . 16# HYPS2011 －文笔不错，不过我觉得你还没理清思路写这篇文章，看之前的以为你是同意的，最后为了2行字笔锋一转，恩，开头结尾不一致啊，这样不好

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10.27  Agree or disagree: The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.

There are always different opinions on whether the traditional printed books will disappear in next twenty years. Advocates to electrical books will displace our printed books point that those sorts of electrical books own obvious superiorities like economical, efficient , and  tremendous information that printed books can never compete with. However, as for me I firmly disagree with such statement and the conspicuous reasons go as follows.
To begin with, most areas of the world are still underdeveloped that may even suffer from the hungry and cold. To this point, printed books cannot be replaced by other types of books during the next twenty years. Undoubtedly, for any kinds of creatures on earth, the primary task is to survive and then we begin to create and  change the world. According to an article published in the latest Journal of Human nature indicates that there are still a large number of children cannot go to school due to poverty. To those kids, printed books are so luxurious that most of them can only open up them in dreams. Thus, it is impossible for printed books being replaced in the next two decades.

Another equally important factor accounting for my propensity lies in the fact that printed books mostly are portable that we can take them anywhere we prefer. Most pamphlets are convenient for our studying because of their relatively smaller size and tiny weight perfectly meet our needs. Examples as such are countless, like a word book, we need put it in our pocket in order to remember words regularly. While electrical books cannot  address this need, since most of which acquire electricity, computer, mobile phone and other facilities to run. Thus printed books can better cater to our studying habits in some cases.


However, accompanied by the ever advancement of science and technology, it is universally acknowledged that someday the printed books will disappear for other kinds of books will better meet our modern life.
In conclusion, after discussed above, we can safely come to the point that although it is true that someday people won't use printed books, at the recent twenty years i firmly believe that those traditional reading mediums can still exist in our shoves.

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26大学应不应该要求所有的学生都学习除了本国文化以外的文化？) [. p$ v4 u, l7 B3 I, Z, o

Accompanied by the increasingly globalization , there is a heated debate on whether all college students should be required to learn foreign culture. According to different backgrounds, personalities, and life values, the statements usually are divergent. As far as I am concerned, I firmly contend that it is wise and urgent to compel college students to learn different cultures besides our own and the conspicuous reasons are as follows.首段很正哇~O(∩_∩)O~

The decisive factor that I want to put at the very beginning is that learning diverse cultures opens up a window for young generations to fully understand the world, and in turn, will benefit our future development. As most of us growing up under our own cultures and customs , more or less, our mind influenced by some stereotype values. As a result, regarding some nowadays emergencies, we are not capable of handling it with ease. In this sense, we do need mind training, and of course,这里建议断开，不要加and连着写了。 learning foreign  countries'（foreign culture就可以了） cultures is a good way to  cultivate ourselves. For, we can see or judge particular things from a different point by learning others' experiences. By understanding and thinking about foreign cultures deeply , we can widen our horizon and then when confronted by problems in work or study, there might be a preferable  solution for choosing. Thus learning foreign cultures can enrich our experiences and are beneficial for future.句子和内容都不错，只是不够细节，加点例子和细节，ets喜欢细节和事例，有时候一段很有道理的空道理也许比不上一个很傻但是很生动的事例。

Another essential aspect accounting for my propensity lies in the fact that the tendency of the society advancement needs every common citizen to understand foreign cultures. Nowadays we can hardly imagine one can survive in a world without any trace of foreign cultures. Examples as such are countless, like TV  programs, movies, newspapers and internet, （句号哇。fragment了）foreign element included in those medias has taken（搭配是played吧） a tremendous important role in our life that actually being a natural aspect of our own. Scarcity of fundamental knowledge about foreign culture, it is impossible to adapt  to this world for anyone else. In short, in order to better adjust ourselves in the background of globalism, It is advisable to learn foreign cultures.语言很是不错，还是老问题，缺少细节。

However, we have to admit that there are someone exceptional who shows little interest in foreign cultures that requiring those students to learn alien culture is tedious even harmful to them. So, school is responsible to reasonably make the curriculum to meet different needs of students.这段觉得看起来有点写的鸡肋了，不如不要。因为不够充分，所以在整个论证体系里意义不大，不如把字数和时间留给前两段。
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In brief, after discussed above, considering the foreign culture plays in our future development as well as meets the times needs. There is no hesitate to claim that college students need know more about foreign cultures

总的来说，语言都是很好的。就是两个问题，第一模板痕迹太明显了，第二就是缺少细节。加油哈~~O(∩_∩)O~

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20# 如是_ivy
第一段例子：if you are asked to prepare a reception for the foreign guests, the first thing calls for certainty is the etiquette and custome of the foreginers you must clear.  Otherwise, you may behave impolitely and easily result serious untoward outcome. In this sense, we do need mind training and learn foreign cultures .
第二段例子: a common case in ordinary life is that when people give praise on someone's progress, a foreigner would respond with "thanks ", However if you don't understand the culture you may recognize it as an inappropriate manner. thus , in order to better adapt to our modern society. Everyone should being familiar with foreign cultures.

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Agree or disagree: The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more." A6 a3 K1 r0 a/ h, C9 P

There are always different opinions on whether the traditional printed books will disappear in next twenty years. Advocates to electrical books will displace our printed books point that those sorts of electrical books own obvious superiorities like economical, efficient, and  tremendous information that printed books can never compete with. （这句有点罗嗦，结构也有点问题）However, as for me I firmly disagree with such statement and the conspicuous reasons go as follows.

To begin with, most areas of the world are still underdeveloped that may even suffer from the hungry and cold. To this point, printed books cannot be replaced by other types of books during the next twenty years. Undoubtedly, for any kinds of creatures on earth, the primary task is to survive and then we begin to create and  change the world. According to an article published in the latest Journal of Human nature indicates that there are still a large number of children cannot go to school due to poverty. To those kids, printed books are so luxurious that most of them can only open up them in dreams. Thus, it is impossible for printed books being replaced in the next two decades（这段句与句之间的逻辑有点混乱。。。而且不能支持论点，需要改一下哦）' ?, y: ^: B; l7 R2 x
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Another equally important factor accounting for my propensity lies in the fact that printed books mostly are portable that we can take them anywhere we prefer. Most pamphlets are convenient for our studying because of their relatively smaller size and tiny weight （+which ）perfectly meet our needs. Examples as such are countless, like a word（vocabulary） book, we need put it in our pocket in order to remember words regularly. While electrical books cannot  address this need(issue), since most of which acquire electricity, computer, mobile phone and other facilities to run. Thus printed books can better cater to our studying habits in some cases.' v/ z. t" h& L; d. v. v
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+ u) w2 c6 t6 Z* v5 J! |However, accompanied by the ever advancement of science and technology, it is universally acknowledged that someday the printed books will disappear for other kinds of books will better meet our modern life.(为什么要写这段呢，不是支持printed book吗 和论点矛盾哦)

In conclusion, after discussed above, we can safely come to the point that although it is true that someday people won't use printed books, at the recent twenty years i firmly believe that those traditional reading mediums can still exist in our shoves.（看了你结尾知道你想表达将来的将来printed book有可能被替代，近20年不会消失的，建议你还是不要这样写了，这样逻辑复杂了，但基于你上面的论述不能支持的。我觉得作者应该尝试一边倒，这样最起码不会跑题，语言好点的话，等的分也会不错的，如果整个逻辑复杂的，结果不能说明白，反而有反作用，呵呵，个人愚见，仅供参考！加油加油！）

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To begin with, most areas of the world are still underdeveloped that may even suffer from  hungry and cold. To this point, most rural areas are struggling for survive. According to an article published in the latest Journal of Human nature indicates that there are still a large number of children cannot go to school due to poverty. To those kids, printed books are still so luxurious that most of them can only open up them in dreams. How can this type of learning materials displace by other forms? Thus, it is impossible for printed books being replaced in the next two decades

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其实我觉得你的论题很好，论点呢，好像不能说服我，我想更多的应该从人们的生活习惯，对纸张的执迷，对眼睛的保护等等，
第二段电子书现在有很高档的看法，比如我经常用手机看，很方便的。而且里面的信息量更大。现在好像流行pocket E－books
另外就是对20 的理解了，你把他理解成20， 我把他理解成未来。

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还有例子细节等处理得不错，文笔一直是我要学习的

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10.28 The only effective way to encourage energy conservation is by increasing prices of notice gasoline and electricity. Do you agree or disagree?

Confronting the problem of energy shortage all around the world, experts begin to maintain that maybe the only  effective solution is to raise the price. However, I am contrary to this statement with following conspicuous reasons.

To begin with, increasing the price can only have a temporary impact concerning the problem of energy waste. The high price may produce vast voice of complaint at the beginning since people can directly feel the difference between the current price and that before. However, as the time goes on, this feeling will become weaker and weaker and finally disappear. As it known to all, the price of the gasoline or electricity are always going up but the waste is still there. For when people get used to this price the original  high price is nonsense. thus lifted price may have a obvious influence on the energy conservation, but this prosperous situation will disappear gradually.

Also, a sharp increased price of the energy may bring some untoward outcome for our society. Every family have a budget for living, like what amount of money should be paid for food, clothing, and transportation. If one of each cost more than regular there will be less left for other items. In this sense if large amount of money distributed to the energy consume, people's living necessities would doubtless can't meet the needs. Take my personal experience for instance, my father last month drove our car to Sichuan province, thousands of kilometers away from my city, to pick my little cousin. The total of oil expense occupied a half of our living budget that disrupted our regular life in many cases. Like i have to go to school on foot everyday and lose the opportunity to watch the concerts with my friends. In short, overextended to increase price will be counterproductive even harmful.


However, we have to admit that there are some advantages on increasing price of energy use. One of the qualities is that the over-charged money can be used for the research of renewable resources to relive the energy pressure.

To sum up. considerable merits though the proposal of increasing price of the energy are, which cannot compete with its potential problems when taking all the factors discussed above into account. So I am totally disagree with the suggestion that energy conversation depends on charging more from the users.

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10.29 Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Accompanied by the ever increasing of science and technology, our life pace also speeds up. Living in such highly sophisticated society calls for various talents and skills to meet the daily challenges. Someone argue that young people need to be capable of planning and organizing to adapt nowadays environment. As for me I firmly agree with this point and the conspicuous reasons go as follows.

Foremost, the ability of planning and organizing can grasp more opportunities in the competitive world. As a famous adage goes :"early bird have worms" which is especially meaningful under present drastic competition. Only those who planed and organized before can get more chances. A case in point is that Bill Gates, requiring his stuff make a detail prediction on market every month to better prepare for untoward recessions, Of course, how can he lead the Microsoft become so successful without distinguish ability of plan and organize. Similarly, a common example is likewise persuasive, workers in big company have lots of opportunities to go abroad for further study. And mostly, those who can speak influent English would more likely to get this chance. To sum up, it is obvious that most chances are given to people who made full preparations, thus the capacity of planning and organizing is essential for one's success.


Another equally important factor accounting for my propensity lies in the fact that most tasks require candidate own the ability of plan and organize. Because of the work in company becomes ever more specialized today. People often undertake one part of the whole project, so every member of this group need plan and organize self-part carefully to avoid lowing the efficiency. For instance, in Ford Motors company, different working rooms are responsible for designing special parts of a car, if one of each always fail to finish on time, the workers are in danger to be faired. In this sense, appropriately plan and organize the work are essential to meet the dead line. So
anyone in order to better adapt to our complex society should cultivate the ability of plan and organize.

In conclusion, after the forgoing discussion, we can safely come to the point that the ability to plan and organize is urgent needed for people to success and adapt to current life. Thus, it is advisable for young people to develop those skills as much as possible.

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30号的呢？ 拖欠作业啊，，，，

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31 综合写作

Both the passage and the lecture discuss the topic of whether Marco Polo ever traveled to china and stayed for 17 years. However, the lecture casts doubt on the reading views that Marco Polo actually not come to the china, by questioning the validity of such argument in three ways.

First, though the reading says Marco Polo never used any chinese or Mongolian place- names on his book is an obvious proof that he haven't been in china. The listening points out otherwise, saying that during that time people largely use permission language for major trade that seldom reffer to the place name . So this point contradicts with the first argumentation of the reading article.

Furthermore, according to the author, Marco Polo did not mention the tea and teahouse, culture practices of the chinese, that any traveler to china would be not supposed to miss. On the contrary, the lecture believes that Marco Polo failed to mention tea and teahouse is understandable, for the tea was popular only in the southern part of china at that time while Marco Polo mostly stayed in the northern of china where people shows little interest on the tea .

Finally,  the passage and the lecture also refutes with each other on whether Macro Polo served the ruler of  the court of  Mongol, or was the post of the Yang Zhou. The passage reasons that there were no documents concerning on this. The lecture suggested that Macro Polo may use a different name on the histrical recording or the name has lost.

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Both the passage and the lecture discuss the topic of whether MarcoPolo ever traveled to china and stayed for 17 years. However, thelecture casts doubt on the reading views that Marco Polo actually notcome to the china, by questioning the validity of such argument inthree ways.说说听力讲啥。
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9 I) W" r1 M) z+ IFirst, though thereading says Marco Polo never used any chinese or Mongolian place-names on his book is an obvious proof that he haven't been in china.The listening points out otherwise, saying that during that time peoplelargely use permission language for major trade that seldom reffer tothe place name . So this point contradicts with the first argumentationof the reading article.

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Furthermore, according to the author, Marco Polo did not mention thetea and teahouse, culture practices of the chinese, that any travelerto china would be not supposed to miss. On the contrary, the lecturebelieves that Marco Polo failed to mention tea and teahouse isunderstandable, for the tea was popular only in the southern part ofchina at that time while Marco Polo mostly stayed in the northern ofchina where people shows little interest on the tea .$ W* \2 ^7 Z' l* k. Z

" q: S* O9 k$ s3 YFinally,  thepassage and the lecture also refutes with each other on whether MacroPolo served the ruler of  the court of  Mongol, or was the post of theYang Zhou. The passage reasons that there were no documents concerningon this. The lecture suggested that Macro Polo may use a different nameon the histrical recording or the name has lost.

我觉得你写的也很好，听力的东西观点也到了，只是在每段作文的时候最好是把听力的观点写在前头，因为听力才是最重要的部分。
听力听到的句子，词汇都可以写到文章中去，但是阅读中千万不行