issue 51,本人第一篇issue,各位牛人请猛拍,必回

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本人的第一篇issue,有很多不足之处，希望各位牛人能指出，小弟不胜感激，2月25号就要考作文了，今天才写成第一篇，心里好没底啊...

51"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."

With the rapid social change as well as technological development, peoples’ views of education have changed from time to time. Nowadays, some people argue that the traditional education, which emphasizes that all the students should take the same curriculum, is out of date and can not cater to the individual needs and interests of each student. They also point out that education will be truly effective only if it is designed on the purpose of meeting every student’s needs and interests. I concede that some courses could be designed due to personal characteristic, for interest is the best teacher and can stimulate student to try harder. Otherwise, in my view education can still be effective even if most of the courses student take are the same.

Admittedly, the process of learning can be more effective if students are driven by their interests rather than forced by teachers or parents, for interest can be an effective catalyst to learning. People are trend to assimilate and understand faster if the knowledge or course they confront arouses their interest or cater to their need. For supporting examples one need to look no further than himself. We all have the experiences that when we were at school, we learned faster than other students in class if the knowledge or course been taught aroused our interests. Thus, the education seems more effective to student if the courses are designed to meet the need of individual interest of each student.

On the other hand, over specification in education can be really unpractical. Because the interest of student differs from individual to individual, it is vitally difficult for the educators especially teachers to determine which curriculum to offer in each semester. The limited teacher resource is really a vital problem to this reform of education and can not be solved in a short span of time.

Besides its impracticality, over specification in education can also bring about other problems. After all, what the modern society need is not narrowly focused individual. So it is educator’s duty to strike a balance between personal interest and the practical skills to survive in this rapidly changed society. In another word, students should not have the ultimate freedom to choose courses by their personal need or interest, for there are some fundamental and critical skills which they all should master. Consider, for example, all the primary student should learn how to read, speak and write despite of their interests. Hardly can anyone successfully survive without mastering the skill of reading, writing and specking. This principle also works for the education of classical science or morality and ethics. In this way, education can still be effective even if most of the courses students take are the same.

In sum, I concede that specifically designed education can be more effective, but only in a limit extend. Over specification in education is unpractical and may causes problems. So, the education can still be effective even if most of the course students take are the same.

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自己顶一下，各位牛人帮忙看看吧，使劲损我也行，我知道还有好多问题

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十分感谢你的点评，我会好好修改的！