2010年T版备考日志 by 呆呆 【进军美利坚】阅读+听力+口语+写作

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

口语机经这么整理的，准备把机经都整理好，背好，录音，互改

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

我觉得我快撑不住了。。。特别没力气学习，都想放弃了，我好累。。。。。。

nicesunUID: 2523239

加油！

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加油！！！！

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

to冰：
081025
1.语速忽慢忽快，第二点理由就说爬山锻炼身体，没有具体什么锻炼身体。
2.第一点时间显然比第二点时间说话过长。第一点的举例明显可以少说几句。
3.说了两次not good 我觉得是不是good可以转化一下啊，比如benefit
4.考拉的那个你说了一句“other people won't eat ." 还有单复数：考拉们 are in danger
5.说的太快了导致后面时间空出很多，但是你的PO说的非常好，学习！
6.同一个时间说了好几个意思相近的动词，还有就是第二条不是第三个人说谁对谁错，是第三个做决定。

081205
1 建议第一句话本来是想建议一点，后来又跟着一个and加了一点，不符合题目要求。其实你的主旨是听老师的话。
2 内容很好，要注意速度，还是忽慢忽快的问题。
3 注意一个大问题：要明显有提示词，你哪些是来自R，哪些来自L
4 说的太着急了，这个关系真的不好说，我说的巨烂
5 tutor这个单词你发音严重有问题，后面内容说的可以，就是一直"en..."
6 说太快了50秒就都说完了最后10秒在重复前面的东西

080516
1 篮球
2 做家务 这两个你都和我很相似是先听我说的吗？以后自己说完了再听我说，要不然你想不出别的了

090403
1 读书这个一直在说理论的话，没什么实际的东西，多说点实际的，别总说读书怎么怎么好
2 中间停顿很久，从35S到45S的时候才开始说很实际的东西
3 eliminate发音错误 是few students 不是no s 后面空的时间太多，其实还可以详细说说的
4 relatively 发音错误 后面声音越来越小，给人的感觉就是越来越没有底气，这样不好，得大声的说！
5 he can not go to the concert这话翻译过来和你想说的意思不一样 应该是more important 没说比较级就直接than了
6 experiment 发音有问题 是两组老鼠不是两只老鼠 he she的。。其他都不错

rachel1102UID: 2657934

to小呆
081025
1.这个段子没问题，但是和这个题目放一起有点怪，题目说保持健康。段子前面和健康有关 呼吸新鲜空气什么的 后面描述的是风景，是说为什么你喜欢公园。我也不知道怎么说，题目感觉有点怪。比如要是说爬山保持健康，那是不是要说爬山可以使骨骼健壮 提高肺活量。。。？？？
2.很好，后面那个朋友的段子套的很恰当！
3.动词disagree加s吧，我也没加。最后一点的原因，注意顺序。可以说完学生忙，然后说课多，论文多，没时间写这个无关紧要的论文。
4.the other food 注意the 的发音。其他没什么问题
5.the professor has 不是have。take the notes做主语应该用taking吧。
6.最后一句是when all "those" situation,,,吗？those的发音。when是不是应该用then

081205
1.如果不是小孩，打篮球这个建议很好！但是是小孩子刚上学，打篮球我觉得有点牵强，踢足球好一点，你可以把你的段子改成足球也可以的。
2.这个套公园的段子有点牵强，这个可以作为一点你喜欢春天的理由，可以再添点别的，比如天气好，不热不冷的 可以打篮球。要不然整个听起来好像就因为那个公园你才喜欢春天的。
3.前面R的部分说的有点时间长了，导致后面只有几秒钟的时间说L的第二个理由了。it's no sence to...用的好
4.often make choice by other's effects. 用BY不太合适。可以说are affected by...
5.你自己的第二点理由，那人不学了 物理就不好了 这个理由不太好。人家是物理专业的 应该不会出现这种问题。可以说夜里学习效果不好
6很早就说完了。估计听听力会说的更多，这个机经给的内容毕竟还是很少的。

090403
1 这个说的不太好。是说学到了什么。你说书可以，最好多说点从那本书里学到点什么。对你现在有帮助了。
2.后面你说道FRIEND的时候 我以为你会套那个段子，呵呵 结果你没套，不过一直friend说了好几次。可以重新组织一下语言。
3.这个不错 挺流利的 我怎么就说不了这么流利呢
4.动词的时态还有单复数注意下
5.我查了下，交作业 好像用hand in ，最后一句 ask sb to do sth
6.挺好 意思表达的挺清楚的 有好多意思我想表达不知道怎么说，学来了。

080516
1.这个我是学你说的，我自己实在想不出说什么了。结束的太早了 还剩10秒钟。可以再多说点这个对你有什么帮助。
2.household 中间说成homwork了 注意下。还有they的发音 注意下。
3.he has...还有the man agreed 然后后面又一般现在时了
4.单词尾音比如是t结束的 不要读出声 比如 at last ....这也是我经常犯的错误。
5.咱俩机经的版本不太一样 我的第一个建议是提前搬家。但是好像你的更好一点。
6.不错。这个我的版本又和你的不太一样。

rachel1102UID: 2657934

好像说口语说猛了，现在一句话都不想说。。。。。。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

TPO1
1 说的比昨天进步超级大，非常好
2 语音语速都非常好，而且没有了"en---"的毛病 ，但是说的两条有些重复，宗旨都是浪费时间，建议可以说，一些暴力画面对孩子影响不好
3 R部分第一条没说清楚，应该是学生认为学校没有钱，所以多收费来买这个雕塑。
4 又开始出现“en”没说完？？
5 逻辑很清楚，就是磕巴。再练几天就能好了。
6  还差一句，他们想看见两个door，结果只看见了一个。最好再有结论，baby会做算术。


进步特别大！！！

对了你话筒调节一下，我把我音量调到最大了，才能听清你说话。

rachel1102UID: 2657934

to 小呆
TPO1
1. 恩 准本好的段子，内容很丰富，也很流利。
2. 可以听出来注意到了动词的形式。但是内容不够丰富，还有10就基本结束了。理由可以再多说点。我觉得这个很难说，我当时正面方面都不知道说哪个好，哪个都觉得说不出理由。。。
3 第二点理由说的不太好。这个是比较难听出来，我听了好几遍才听到，好像是这个写信的人经常和朋友在那踢球才会反对学校在那放雕塑。学校为了不让他们在那踢，才把雕塑放那的。。。不知道是不是这样。。。我觉得听力部分好难。
4 这个咱俩描述的重点好像不一样。你说的是大多数站在MANAGER那边，然后使得电脑卖不出去。而我把中间过程说的比较多，造成的结果我没说。我觉得你的比较好。简洁。THEY的发音注意下。
5. 这个人的问题后半部分我没听懂。感觉你说的也不全。。好想看原文。还有你后面的原因可以多说点。
6.恩 很好 还有总结。学习了。take the first door secretly. 是不是应该加个away?

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

080516作文

In the lecture, the professor made the point that ancient American were from Asia. In contrast, the writer demonstrated a challenging idea that those original American were not from Asia, their forefathers are European.

First of all, according to the talk, the tools that similar from the European were developed by American themselves because they had to hunt large and dangerous mammals. On the other hand the passage stated that ancient
American used the spear point
which are similar to the tools that ancient European used, and these tools are not similar to those in Asian. These two ideas are contradictory to each other.

Another important point showed in the listening material is that the American's skulls are not similar to European's. The skull of ancient person from the archeological discovery may have an unusual shape, but the writing presents a conflicting idea that the shape of ancient American's skulls was similar to the ancient European's.

Finally, the speaker stated that there were not any official evidences can prove European can cross the sea to America. It is still very dangerous to cross the sea, which challenges the standpoint made by the author who said that it was easy to cross the sea because the short distance between two countries.


To sum up, the lecture contradicts the idea in the reading. The lecturer believed that original Americans' forefathers were from Asia.























Faced with almost everyone carries about a telephone at all time nowadays ,the vast majority of people claim that telephone is more important than other high technological products such as television. They believe that it is convenient for them to communicate with other people, but people who favor telephone does not have much great effects on human kind than television has, on the other hand, argue that television transmits lots of news from all over the world to people.As I perceive the issue, telephone has greater effects on human kind than television has. My view will be further substantiated by the following reasons.

First of all, the importance of telephone to human communication can never be exaggerated. The only object that permit a person to get contact with others who is far away from him immediately is telephone. Although there are other methods such as MSN or letter also let people get in touch with others, they are all slowly and not as convenient as telephone. For instance, once I went to school and forgot to carry my notebooks. I phoned my mother telling her where were my books. She found the books quickly and sent the books to school. If I had no chance to phone my mother, I would not have the notebooks to study well. So, it is obvious that telephone is essential to everybody's daily life.

On the one hand I admit that television has made contribution to our daily life. We can get the news happened at any place from the TV. In addition, we also can watch some entertainment programme on TV. It has lots of positive respect to society. On the other hand, I think we can use a telephone to search on the Internet and get more information than TV does. A full functioned telephone is similar to a computer. What is more, a telephone is convenient for to carry it everyday, but we can not carry or watch television at any time. That is to say, the little thing effected our life at any moment, we even difficult to have a comfortable life without it. Above all, we can find that telephone does more effect than television to us.

Clearly, all the analysis warrants an unshakable conclusion that telephone does greater effect on our life than television does.

(387)

rachel1102UID: 2657934

In the reading passage, the author believed that Original Americans were not from Asia, their forfathers were Europeans. However, the professor in the listening argued that Ancient Americans were from Asia.

First of all, the professor in the listening indicated that the spear point ancient Americans used that similar from the Europeans' were developed by Americans themselves. In contrast, the reading passage states that the tools are similar to the tools that ancient Europeans used. What's more, the reason why the shape of the tools did not like the tools Asian always used is that the Americans had to hunt large and dangerous mammals.

Second, different from the opinion in the reading passage that an archaeological discovered the shape of an ancient Americans' skulls was similar to the ancient Europeans', the professor in the lecture argued that it was a special accident. Usually, the Americans' skull were not similar to Europeans'

Finally, the professor made the point that though it was very short to cross the sea, it was very dangerous and there were no evidences could prove Europeans can cross the sea to America. This point directly challenged what the reading passage sates. The author in the reading stated that it was very easy to cross the sea to America because the distance was very short.

In conclusion, the professor in the listening completely denied the idea made in the passage. The professor believed that Ancient Americans were from Asia.


写出来才觉得这个模板不好。不能一会先说听力 一会先说文章的。要统一先后顺序。还有一些细节 都要改！要弄一个好的模板背下来！以前都是单独背句子 考试的时候还得现组合。这次一定要背个段子直接套！

rachel1102UID: 2657934

to 小呆 TPO2
1.很好。但是声音太高了，听着有点假了。
2.开始很好，也很流利。但是第二点说和索菲亚一起学习，我觉得有点牵强。可是我又想不出其他理由了。
3.听了你的我才反应过来我没说R里的原因。。。。很好 理由说的很全。
4.很好。说的很全。
5.我听力没听懂，听了你的才明白怎么回事。
6.我听力又理解错了。。。但是你好像少说了后面那部分例子。最后see的发音 你说的像say

总之这次说的很好！很顺畅！一次录的吗？听力听了几遍？我要向你学习了！

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

12都很好，保持+熟练
3没说R的部分！！！
4说的重复了特别是第一个例子，说的有些墨迹，第二个例子也可以简单点说，不用重复表达
5？？？在没懂说什么的情况下能说这些应该也能拿个平常分。
6这个我也不是特别清楚，我音频给我同学评了，然后我告诉你具体是讲的什么

其实我发现录一遍最好，不要总重复录，我有一个就是录后几遍都没有第一遍说的利索。对考试也好。
但是我也听了2遍以上。。。真不好

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

Faced with the end of the Football World Cup, the vast majority of people claim that playing sports let people know more lessons about the life. They believe that doing sports is a spirit of life, but people who favor sports are just a kind of entertainment, on the other hand, argue that they just obtain funny things through the sports. As I perceive the issue, we could learn a lot about life during playing sports.

First of all, doing sports regularly is essential to our health. In addition, we could totally relax and release from the work and study. For instance, my parents and I often have a walk in a park after diner. We have been taking this exercise for over two years. All the family members bodies better than before. Besides physical fitness, we do not feel so much strains and stress of life like before. Although we feel a little tired after walking, we are released from the intensive life and have a total relax by doing such sport.

In addition, we can learn how to cooperate with others during most of sports. Take myself as an example. There was a basketball game when I was in high school. I was one of the team players. One the first half, we did not cooperate and just play by our own thought. As a result, we were beaten badly. During the break, our coach told us we should play as a team, and he gave some tips to us. We followed his words, finally we won the game. Through this basketball match, I learn that we should cooperate with others to accomplish a team work.

Last but not least, we can make friends with other people when we playing sports together. Generally, this kind of friends always afford us pleasure. According to China Daily, statistics shows that 78.5 percent of people like to make friends when they doing sports. Among those people, 99.6 percent feel happier before making friends. That is to way, more than half of people like to make friends when they doing exercise. Making friends with others let them delight in life.

Playing sports not only bring us fun, but also relaxation, health, spirits and even friends.   

(373)


TPO1综合写作，条理感觉不清晰


In the lecture, the professor made the point that offering employees a four-day work would not affect company profits, economic conditions or employees' lives. In contrast, the writer demonstrated a challenging idea that it was a wise choice offering employees the option of a four-day workweek.

First of all, according to the talk the company would spend more if their employees chose a four-day work. The company would spend many on training the added workers and more office spaces, computers and so on. This would cut down profit of the company. On the other hand the passage stated that the work who chose a four-day work would be paid 80 percent of their normal normal pay. It would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.

Another important point showed in the listening material is that the company may let the four-day workers do the five days amount of job. They did not need more employees, but the writing presents a conflicting idea that shortened workweek would decrease errors because they would feel more rested and alert and also they could employee more people to reduce unemployment rate.

Finally, the speaker stated that four-day employees had risks decreasing their quality of lives. They were the first people losing job if in economic crisis and they were less likely to promote the positioin, which challenges the standpoint made by the author who said that they could improve the quality of their lives because of more free time.

To sum up, the lecture contradicts the idea in the reading. The lecturer believed that it was not a good advice for employees to have a four-day job.

小小amyUID: 2541111

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