2010年T版备考日志 by 呆呆 【进军美利坚】阅读+听力+口语+写作

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

加油 同楼主一样开日志备考中

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

TPO3
1 最后时间充足的话最好总结一下topic的中心思想（12题都是）
2 最好有例子，原理讲得有些重复，第一点的两句话意思一样，只是在换句型转述
3 女生说的第一点理由很全面，我没说全
4 是不是应该说出他换了观点后心里不那么烦躁了
5 第一条建议好像是prof给的，说的是她可以写5页的paper代替考试
6 说的比我全面

rachel1102UID: 2657934

小呆TPO3
1.第一点说的很好，还有例子。第二点说的就没第一点那么丰富了。语速控制的不错。
2.这个段子套的感觉不是很恰当。篮球和作业不一样，篮球尤其需要合作，而作业也可以自己完成。这个最好别套这个段子，分开说，说合作效率高等优点。
3.第一个cold的 发音 注意那个“欧”，我刚听以为是KILLED。。。后面的cold没问题了。学生的第二点原因说的很全。
4.前面R的内容说的有点过于繁琐，可以精简一点，控制在15秒左右。这样你后面就不会超时了。without chemistry 用except 是不是更好？
5.she has the same time...那说的有乱。理由说的感觉你自己不是很有信心的样子！就算自己觉得理由不充分也要很有信心的说！
6.there are two suggestions 口误了吧 是strategy。提早说完了。可以在第一个例子里再多说几句。
基本没什么大问题了！加油！

rachel1102UID: 2657934

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.

With the development of our society, people would like to pay much more attention to do some exercise to keep healthy. In my opinion, playing sports can not only maintain our health, but also can teach us more lessons about the life.


First of all, playing sports such as basketball, football and volleyball can elevate our teamwork ability. Cooperating with others is essential for many sports. During the process of playing these sports, players trust each other, help each other and cooperate with each other and only in this way, they can win the game. Take me for example, I like playing basketball. Once I was in a match, our team was far behind the game. Then during the break, our coach told us that basketball was played by a team, not by individual, means that we should pass the ball frequently to win the game. Finally, we won the game because we learned how to cooperate with our teammates. From then on, I convince that the spirit of teamwork play an important role in our life.


What's more, playing sports can teach us that one can be destroyed but can not be defeated. In sports, athletes who get hurt during the competition always persist to complete the match. Although they can not win the match, their spirit will inspire not only other athletes but also the audience. In our daily life, we often face difficulties, if we try our best to overcome the difficulties, even we are failure finally, we will not regret at all.


In conclusion, playing sports is not only good for our health, but also for our life. It teaches us how to be strong when we face difficulties and how to cooperate with others.


我的妈啊，憋的我痛苦死了！才憋出来这么点。语句全是低级词汇和简单句。像初中生写的作文。鲲，这篇别给我评了，写砸了！！ 我得积累东西了。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

12说的不错内容很好了
3 我阅读的理解是晚上上课的话额外的花销最低
4 复述挺好的，时间应该压缩下，35-40S最好了
5 自己建议说的比我好
6 texture有一处发音错了 后面我没明白，你的和录音的我都不太明白呢。。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

With the development of our society, people would like to pay much more attention to do some exercise to keep healthy. In my opinion, playing sports can not only maintain our health, but also
(can删除) teach us more lessons about the life.

First of all, playing sports such as basketball, football and volleyball can elevate our teamwork ability. Cooperating with others is essential for many sports.（中心句表达的是不是应该更加深度一点，比如说对工作中的团队精神很有帮助。） During the process of playing these sports, players trust each other, help each other and cooperate with each other and only in this way, they can win the game. （前面这句话太长了，断一断会好一点）Take me for example, I like playing basketball. Once I was in a match, our team was far behind the game. Then during the break, our coach told us that basketball was played by a team, not by individual, means that we should pass the ball frequently to win the game. Finally, we won the game because we learned how to cooperate with our teammates. From then on, I convince that the spirit of teamwork play an important role in our life.4 r9 w! o- a2 \6 Q8 V% t
What's more, playing sports can teach us that one can be destroyed but can not be defeated. In sports, athletes who get hurt during the competition always persist to complete the match. Although they can not win the match, their spirit will inspire not only other athletes but also the audience. （举个例子不是更有说服力？比如说今年的世界杯，朝鲜队的队员如何拼搏然后大家看了怎样怎样）In our daily life, we often face difficulties, if we try our best to overcome the difficulties, even we are failure finally, we will not regret at all.(最后这句写得感觉没什么底气说这句话，我觉得可以说，在日常生活中，这种拼搏的精神一直在激励着我们不怕困难，坚持自己的想法，直到完成自己的目标。。。)
In conclusion, playing sports is not only good for our health, but also for our life. （和开头太重复了，可以说，在体育锻炼中，我们学习到了什么什么，把两段思想总结一下，然后再来一句升华主题的结论。）It teaches us how to be strong when we face difficulties and how to cooperate with others.

发给你了，重写一遍




95# rachel1102

rachel1102UID: 2657934

TPO4
1没问题
2 用索菲亚段子的时候 可以说 你们在课堂上认识的 这样会更切合题目
3 they are busy at night 不要上来就说they，说一下students。否则容易指代不清。还有第二点原因，又说THEY 这里的THEY 是指代计算机学院。还有学生的第二点理由，最后在前面加一句R里费钱 然后再说电脑便宜什么的。
5.恩，自己的理由有点不够充分。但是前面的问题和建议说的都很全。
6 这个估计是听力没听全 所以说的不全。我之前听过一个老托，就是讲这种画画的，是说用笔法 使得画的表面很粗糙 能看到那个画笔的痕迹。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

TPO2小作文，感觉TPO小作文的阅读部分不好看。。。


In the lecture, the professor made the point that team work is not better than individual job. In contrast, the writer demonstrated a challenging idea that team work is the best way to approach certain new projects.

First of all, according to the talk, some people in group did nothing contributing o the work, they just wait until the work was complished. On the other hand the passage stated that a group of people has a wider range of knowledge, expertise and skills.

Another important point showed in the listening material is that it waste long time to held meetings to reach agreement, but the writing presents a conflicting idea that the team worker did their assignment more quickly than individual did.

Finally, the speaker stated that if the work was failed, all the group members would be blamed, which challenges the standpoint made by the author who said that group members had a much better chance to "shine".

To sum up, the lecture contradicts the idea in the reading. The lecturer believed that team work is not a wise idea to accomplishing assignments.


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Faced with an expanding number of students go to school, the vest majority of people claim that education is the most important factor in development of country. They believe that students are the future in the society, but people hold the opposite opinion, on the other hand, claim that there are still other aspects effect the development of country. As far as I am concerned, the latter is more considerable comprehensively.

First of all, I admit that improving schools is vital to the development of a country. Without the better education, students would learn less knowledge. Then they could not make a contribution to the society with their poor information. Thus, education is an essential factor which affects the improvement of a society. For example, in large cities, students are received high-technological information during schooling. They are also obtain more knowledge than those children in poor downtown. Decades later, more teenagers who study in metro city will do skillful jobs and earn a lot than those who study little in countryside. Further more, the person who learn better has more chance to contribute to country with one's knowledge. Above all, education is backbone to country improvement.

Nevertheless, there are other elements also contributing to the growth of a country. For instance, housing problem is an rather critical task in our country. In other words, our country even can never make a progress if the housing problem was not solved. Besides, medical security is to communities what the foundations to a skyscraper. All civilians need to see doctors occasionally. Patients should be well treated in hospital so that they can recover quickly and not infect others. Only when people keep in health, could they make a contribution to the countries. Apart from these, there are some other momentous factors influence the development of a country. (这段好难举例子啊)

Although education counts to the elevation of a country, other factors are also significant to improving the society. We can not just make a simple conclusion that the improving school is the most important one among those factors. More over, I hold the position that each element is equally essential to growth of country. To sum up, I disagree with the idea that education is most vital to the development of a country.  

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rachel1102UID: 2657934

tpo5
1.前面应该加一句在你童年的时候经常去这个公园，然后描述公园。
2 第一点 说 art and literature 没什么用 但是经常谈论，我觉得不太好，不要说没什么实际用途，就直接说经常谈论 丰富人们的业余生活
3.fee的发音 注意下 是i:。理由说的比我精简。很好。
4.理由同样很精练。我总是概括不好 总想把听到的全说出来。
5.have a reast  我没听到。。你自己的理由说的不是特别的好。
6.很好 说的很从容！

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

昨天老爸 霸道电脑一晚上 打什么材料 所以今天补上
昨天做了的都还好 但就是做的不多没有各科都估计到

上午听力一片篇SSS------话说好久没听力 盲点好多 一会有空补上
                 TPO 13 section 1 -----盲读 2篇 跟读3篇 感觉不够  听写了一段盲点
                 下午 仔细分析了 一篇OG感觉收获还是很大  （现在感觉阅读真是要仔细分析 当然一定的量也很重要)         
                           评论一篇口语 感觉她说的很好 很淡定 自己相比很紧张
                晚上很堕落 一直在玩一个新的收音机 想收CNN 但没成功 感觉自己很累就睡了。。。。
未完成 口语（至少应该每天都摸到 自己没做到 ）
       写作 这个老大难问题 我一时还真是老虎吃天无从下口 昨天买了本新4写作 自己就多背背上面的 东西
     单词 该死。。。怎么能把这个忘了
今天  口语 上缴作业。。。。
      写作 新4 +该自己一篇+语法（重点）
      听力 复习之前 +一篇新的L
      阅读 OG   

荣耀和胜利这些虚无缥缈的东西我我们无法把握的，我们能把我的就是踏实每天都一步步进步 加油！！zenglingyuan!!!  离三战还有 30天！！

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

请问一下 你们口语上到哪的？？ 我去看一看

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

tpo5
1 后面说的有点过于慢了
2 说的非常好
3 R的部分再快点最好20S-25S搞定
4 L的开始出现“en--”后面没总结完？？
5 不错
6 extrinsic发音 这个和OG上一篇听力很相似的，你没事听听，很有帮助162页

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

我们是QQ互传的你Q多少？我加你～ 102# zenglingyuan

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

TPO7
3.听力第一点不是学生忙于其他课，是这门课的前提requirement太多课程，学生没时间上这些optional的课，所以不能上这个课。最后一句学校的教授也可以交这门课，说的不利索。
4 小孩子在教室里乱走，老师会惩罚他，别的孩子出去玩的时候让他坐在桌子旁边。小孩子有问题的时间会举手和老师轻声说，老师会奖励他们。
5 我听的是先把电脑拿回来，写完论文再给他们修理
6 车的举例那里的话有些重复，而且feature这里没有说清楚包括一些附属用品是否好用。