2010年T版备考日志 by 呆呆 【进军美利坚】阅读+听力+口语+写作

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

090123
1.学一个新的subject 那个段子得改改，不要说以前英语不好，直接就说在那学的英语
2.不错
0221
1.例子不错，现想的吧，有点不熟练。
2.没有例子啊，比如说，不管多远，我们都能联系，比如说我在上海读书，妈妈在东北。我们每天都打电话沟通感情。
0227
1没有给我？？？
2句子里有一个被动，你说成了主动，就是我被我父亲影响，你说成了，我影响我父亲。
0515
1现想的吗？这个也不错～
2这个例子也不错

我发现你好像现想出来的东西都很有亮点，不逊色于你的段子，你是不是适合现想观点啊？？？


后补的题目：
it makes （me多说了） our life more  有的时候你说话也喜欢带can，就是I can remember clearly.去掉更加易懂～

rachel1102UID: 2657934

081205
1 一遍录的吧。前面不流利。感觉到你在做铺垫了。
2 do some sport 然后说去公园散步。。。把sport改了吧。

090221
1 boss的发音有误。太佩服你了 什么都能套段子！而且听起来还挺有道理。。。
2 contact的重音在前面。no matter how long distance we were.是不是应该用are?。这个你可以稍微改一下，就说你们经常通过电话联系，在电话里share.....了解。。。。

090227
1 很好！这个段子套的太好了。
2 also best teacher 不能用also。段子也可以稍微改动，加点她教你什么了 从她那学到什么了。比如努力工作什么的。

090515
1 没问题
2 第二点和第一点意思一样吧。那就不要分一二了，说完那句就举例就行了。

rachel1102UID: 2657934

090530
1 没问题
2 可以。就是第二点原因有点怪 呵呵 难的课都是你喜欢的课？

090612
1 很好
2 有一点跑题。题目让说 随着年龄的增长，你的性格有变化。但是你说的是 你受朋友影响 然后你变了。你可以说 随着年龄的增长 会结交很多朋友 然后朋友会影响你

090725
1 可以
2 还可以 但是不够好 可是我又说不出原因。总觉得这个plan不够detail

090801
1 没问题
2 一遍录的吧。不太流利。我今天的只有2个是一遍录的。明天我要全一遍录了 否则考试根本来不及

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

自己的补充：都是一遍录的，而且都是看了题目基本就说的。。总体看来2题说的很差
090530
2 listening to the difficult class I will have a sence of achievement when I totally understanding the class
090612
2 I was a shy girl before, when I growing up, I learn that I should make friends with others. one of my best friends talked with me almost everyday. She told me I should make friends with outhers and also she introduce me to her friends. From then on I become open and breezy. All above, I changed my personality these years also thanks to my friends.

090725
2 previously, I didn't make a plan for future and I like to hesitate when making a choice. After I made acquaintance with sofia,who...She told me we should make detail plan for future. she help me to make a plan for future, that is I should go to states......Now I prepear all the things well to go to states.

090801
2好处1concentrate2review for eg. I reviewed my math notes befor exam, and I got A on that examination.

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

冰
0530
1后面说的挺好的，前面说了好几次went to beijing
2后面没有铺垫上来就说我早晨练口语，应该说一句，我认为英语最难学习
0612
1很好
2说英语这个不一定和性格有关系，也许是因为自己的英文不够好所以不敢和别人交流。不如直接说成是我以前不愿意和别人交流，现在愿意和别人交流了。
0725
1挺好的，还有感情色彩的~
2说的挺有道理的
0801
1可以的
2can not连读！good说了好多次

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

080816的题目考过啦～不用看啦
说的还行，不过12题都说一个段子比较忌讳哈～都说的篮球～

090807
1二战说的内容不错，需要点感情色彩哈，这么惨绝人寰的事件不要那么平淡的说哈～
2例子可以的，都是新的段子哈～
0911
1挺好的，比上次熟练点了
2前两点说的都是时间的问题，不如合起来说～理由还更加充分

0919
1可以的
2听你的段子我想起来我少说一个关键词--difficulty 说的挺好的，是别人的段子吗？有点耳熟～

0925
1第一点里面你说了两点哈，第一这是你第一份工作，第二你非常喜欢当助教～
2第一点和第二点有点乱，第一点着重说电视不方便，没有电脑方面，第二点电视有广告，浪费很多时间。。后面说的挺好的～

讲道理的东西没有故事容易说，很多你都是在讲道理，这和别人给故事为例子的话，你有点吃亏哈～

rachel1102UID: 2657934

0807
1 哥，我真佩服的五体投地了。我觉得可以把段子的第二点删掉，然后第三点多说点，说由于加入WTO 越来越多的人来上海工作。。。。
2 soft cloth 柔软的衣服吗？然后就说她容易接近？可以换一个衣服种类，比如暖色的，休闲的。这样更有亲和力。还有那个教练的，可以说他穿运动装，不要把牌子扯进去。

0911
1 很好！
2 很好 我真的没话说了

0919
1 told 口误了 说成talk了？没什么大问题
2 好！

090925
1 好！
2 to watching TV。还可以。但是感觉有点怪。仅仅是感觉

哥！我真的太服你了，真的全套段子了。我今天有两个现想的段子不是一遍说的，尤其是那个二战的，我还查资料了 把段子给写下来了。其他是一遍说的了。我输了，你真的做到全用段子了。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

do you agree or disagree: advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits?

不同意

Faced with an expending number of advertisements about eating showed on the screen, the vast majority of people claim than advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits. They believe that foods showed on television are injurious to health, but people who favor the opposite statement, on the other hand, argue that unhealthy diet donot most result from advertisement. As far as I am concerned, I stand by the latter point.

First of all, not all of advertisements are harmful to our body. By this I mean most of advertising give proper instruction on our healthy diet.For instance, most of the advertisements about yogurt show us a vivid process. The process includes how the yogurt help us to digest food. After watching the lovely advertisement, people would understand the use of the yogurt ingredient. As a result, they will fell into a habit of eating a yogurt after meal. Hence, we can see some advertisements do good for our health but not bad affection.

In addition, although some other products showed on screen have bad influence on human beings' diet, we cannot say it is the advertisement that effect the bad eating habit. To be more precise, there are a variety of methods contributing to people buying junk food. For example, according to others talking, people can learn about the grocery and purchase them. They also could buy some junk food on shelf in supermarket. Thus, we could buy some junk food without watching advertisements on television. In other words, this kind of advertisements just does little to help us on choosing the food.

Besides, a lot of factors give rise to bad eating habit without advertisements. For instance, some people would like to drink lots of coffee because of work pressure. Some have to drink wine because of work environment. Some other people would like to eat some fried chicken or other junk food, on account of short eating time. These cases have nothing to do with advertisements at all. Another evidence is as follows. In last year, China daily reported that 98.5 percent of smokers smoked just because they felt high stress from work and they wanted to release themselves from smoking. We all know that tobacco never advisement in China. Their smoking habit has nothing to do with advertisement but counts on themselves. Thus, we can conclude that whether people have bad diet or not mostly depend on their personal situation.

To sum up, advertisements are not main reason of bad habit. Personal circumstance is essential to unhealthy eating habit.



这篇文章理解有些狭隘，广告可以有很多传导方式，我只写了电视上的，还有地铁里，杂志上。。。但是关于不好的饮食习惯我真不知道包括哪些。。。

rachel1102UID: 2657934

只挑有问题的说哈
TPO1
4 R的部分说的不太好。怎么这么多en.....
5 自己的理由说的不太好。怎么乘坐公交 小孩就兴奋了？L里说 小孩一兴奋就不好管了
TPO2
4 R里的tearm没说出来 直接解释了。
6 这个L真的很恶心，不太好说，L里把顺序都打乱了。没啥问题 呵呵

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

这个其实不用评了，就做了就行了～
冰TPO1
4这点说的比较繁琐，特别是系鞋带那个。不过我不确定这样说是不是分数会更好。。
5后面你的观点说的不那么流畅
TPO2
3你的第三题比其他题说的快很多～
4我和你听的不一样呢。。。。我记得是顾客说喜欢好看的外表，于是他们开会。。。
5borrow a van 不是car，因为小汽车小，装载不了那么多人。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

agree or disagree:young people should try several different jobs before they take a career in a long term.






Faced with various sorts of jobs, a majority of people claim that one should try several different jobs before they take a career. They believe that the work experience is vital to the career, but people who favor the opposite viewpoint, on the other hand, they argue that it is no use to take unconcerned experience before career. As far as I am concerned, different people should take their own choice seriously when taking a job. My view will be substantiated by the following discussions.

On the one hand, satisfied with people doing vast jobs are those who hold the opinion that they can get a suitable job at last. In other words, if they just do one profession, they cannot determine  whether the job fit them best or not. Under this situation, I agree that they can try some different sort of jobs. Besides, they can obtain work experiences during working. They will have more skills than others at next interview. For instance, my friend Lee has a variety of favourite careers. Previously, she hesitated over several career choices. Then, she talked with our professor about this confusion. The professor asked her to try these kinds of jobs as an volunteer during the summer holidy. After talking with professor, she did four volunteer jobs during the whole vacation.  Before we graduated, she had already made her decision to be a dress designer because of the summer practice. Now she has designed some famous clothes in our country and also rewarded by the cloth design organization. From her experience, we can see that if one could not decide his job target, he can try some tasks before making up his mind.

On the other hand, other people would prefer to do their current work rather than find a new one. One possible reason is this kind of employers learn the professional knowledge before taking the job. In particular, they love their specialized subject when studing at collage. After graduation, they take the career directly and enjoy the job. Another earthly factor may be associated with time. By this I mean, they want to keep current job and get promoted in future. It will cost them a lot of time adapting the new job and being respected by others supposing that they change another job. For example, my brother studied department of taxation at collage. He was deeply interested in that major and studied excellent at the institution. After he graduated, a tax department employed him. Few years later, his position was elevated as a chief of one division. Now he is satisfied with his career. Above all, he get his dream work approvingly. When people desiring a career, they should try their best to obtain it.

Given all above, from my point of view, people should give serious thought to whether to try sorts of jobs by their own position.

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yylbjUID: 2764695

你是不是无老师约谈里面那个阿呆？

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

不是。。。 147# yylbj

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

写了作文，不知有没有人会看到，希望给写关于思路上的大体建议，谢谢。

rachel1102UID: 2657934

080823
1 没问题
2 如果真考到这套题了 就别两个用一个段子了。

081122
1 开始说的很纠结！有点跑题。你可以改一下，说 十年后 你可以和你的孩子 还有你的父母在公园里散步，然后公园里有什么什么的，都用将来时。畅想未来
2 挺好

090321
1 我在想，要不要对唐装做个简单的介绍呢？
2 没问题

090327
1 可以再好好组织一下语言。
2 后面说的不太顺。