2010年T版备考日志 by 呆呆 【进军美利坚】阅读+听力+口语+写作

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

104# taoyukun-daidai
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rachel1102UID: 2657934

Telephone has greater effects on human kind than television has.


Both telephone and television have effects on human kind. When it comes to say which one has greater effects on people, different people may hold different views. Some people deem that telephones are more essential to their life than televisions are. However, others just hold the opposite view. As for me, I convince that telephone has greater effects on human kind than television has.

In the first place, with the creation of the telephone, our life becomes more convenient than before. With the telephone, we can contact others directly instead of having a face to face contact which will take us a lot of time to get the destination. For example, when I was in university, I call my family every day to keep contact with them in case they would worry about me for my school is far away from my hometown. I cannot image that without telephone, I have to write letters to my families. Telephone is really convenient in my life. I can also call others to help me when I was in danger. Because of the convenience of the telephone, nowadays, there are majority of people using telephone. According to a recent survey, until 2010, the number of people having cell phone will be 0.7 billion. What a surprised number!

However, television cannot make our like as convenient as the telephone do. In my opinion, television is just an instrument of entertainment or is a method in which people attaining some news. We often watch TV for fun or to relax ourselves. What's more, with the development of the internet, people nowadays are more likely to get information on internet where report the news more timely than television. Take me for example, I I have already not watched TV for almost one year, and whenever I want to get some information, I open my computer to get it on internet, it's more convenient and more timely.

Furthermore, with the improvement of technology of telephone, nowadays, people can use the telephone to get on the internet. I am sure, a few years later, telephone will become a small computer, and until then, telephone will has more effects than it does now. But for the television, it may out of the stage of our life in the future for its uselessness.

In conclusion, although television does affect our life, compared with telephone, it has smaller effects on us. Telephone brings us much more convenience than television does.

rachel1102UID: 2657934

105# taoyukun-daidai   今天评的好犀利。。。。一针见血。我总是说不到点子上，以后要多练练。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

昨天晚上心情不好。。。。。见谅。。 108# rachel1102

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

1-5都没有大问题，就是说的还稍微有些“en”
6好像是两种策略第一种是先卖高价钱来赢利；第二种是卖低价钱，通过其他software之类的来赢利。

再练习练习怎么克服那个“恩--”的问题就好了。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

前两题很流利了
3听力第二点是说其他学校也有这个要求，所以没有什么优势
4gloomy发音 darkness不是darkless哦
5可以没发现毛病
6最后那里有点墨迹，可以直接说feel full 就不再说 not hungry了

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

今天口语是 多少？ 是TPO9吗

rachel1102UID: 2657934

112# zenglingyuan 随便你啊，你想说哪个就说哪个。。。。

rachel1102UID: 2657934

TPO9
1 注意语速 稍微有点慢 别弄的太假 呵呵
2 see的发音 一定要注意 别说的像say 好几次了。。。
3 很好
4 后面的例子 说的有点少
5 没问题 语速控制的很好 给自己思考的时间 我还在学习中
6 这个说的没前几个好 语言上也没前面的好。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

to笑笑
1 你说话好快啊 那个草地上不是glasses是lawn或者meadow
3 announcement发音有点问题 reading的部分好像没说什么
4 你说话好像比较喜欢重复，几个词语一起重复
5理由挺好的，但是避免说“you”
6说话太快了，放慢速度会更好！

还有，我觉得不必要在最后总说一句“thank you”

rachel1102UID: 2657934

TO 笑笑 TPO5
1  挺好的
3 campus according, their, than  的发音 再清楚些。
4 内容很好 发音再练练就更好了！
5 问题说的不全 是受伤了 然后要参加演出 solve, responsibility的发音。
6 内容很好 就是个别发音注意下就行了

恩 总了来说 你的内容说的很好！注意下个别发音就行了。要保证评卷的老师能听懂就OK。

taoyukun-daidaiUID: 2657922

to冰
1中间有点断，再连续一下
2很好
3l的部分有点慢
4entertainment发音错误 女儿发音有点doctor
5using不是use the 电脑，动词一个句子里就一个哦～理由说的有点重复
6内容说的挺好的，就是中间有些停顿，我听你说没那么纠结，呵呵～

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

给你俩加加油哈哈

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

TO 冰
1.感觉发音有点不清楚 声音有点小 过程还是说清楚了的
2.词组可以转换下 a lot of 用了好多次
3.第三题 reading部分不需要说那么多吧 搞的后面的重点都很强了
4.这个题说的不错
5.其实具体exam的名称说不出来就不说 不然错的会扣分 理由给的很好 注意控制节奏
6.不流畅 中间有点乱 其实可以
注意发音 说话稍微大声点 说的不错 注意控制节奏

zenglingyuanUID: 2773905

TO 小呆
1.我晕 我准备的段子也是basketball 不过还是不一样 感觉前后变化很突然  怎么突然FOLLOW words  就 sucess了
2。这段子太经典了 那个on me~的发音太销魂了 怎么感觉像是讲鬼故事 声音越来越小了？？ 注意her me 等人称代词的发音 还有opnion different   
3.这个说的不错
4.注意总结的词语 screen moive 等的发音
5。。。。。内容还可以 注意HOTEL发音 。。你说道最后断气了吗
6.逻辑有点乱 中间间隔了不少
小呆同学的口音甚有喜感 太可乐了。。特别是第二段我听了不下5次， 哈哈 太开心了
注意个别的发音 逻辑还不错 节奏控制的不错 不过注意别漏要点